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How Original Is Your Warrior Cats OC? | Comments, Page 12
Below are comments submitted by GoToQuiz users for the quiz How Original Is Your Warrior Cats OC?
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My Oc's name is Kitefox, and Fluffy black she cat with Startling blue eyes. She was originally a Kit from Zinniaclan but her mother died giving birth and her father blamed her for her death. She didn't have a name then and she was slowly starving to death. A starry cat who turned out to Be Kitestar the former leader of Dowitcherclan couldn't do a lot but she made it so she wouldn't die knowing she had a greater destiny. She didn't have a name then but a couple weeks later a Sandy colored cat named Sweetpaw and her Mentor Snowcry who is the Dowitcherclan Deputy. They took her to the clan and a queen Named Otterleaf nursed her. Sweetpaw took a liking for her and played with her all the time. Hawkstar named her Kitekit as she looked like Kitestar. Kitekit had the power of knowing anyone's emotions though she didn't understand it. Kitepaw became Kitepaw and her Mentor was Rapidcreek and gentle tortoiseshell tom. Kitepaw was a quick learner but had a sassy and Sarcastic attitude but was always making everyone feel better. She earned her name Kitefox because when a Fox hurt Rapidcreek she killed it. Later she mated with Rapidcreek and they had 3 kits, Spottedkit,Starkit, and Swiftkit. Later Hawkstar dies and Snowcry becomes Snowstar. Her powers overwhelmed her as everyone had mixed emotions. Snowstar made her Deputy. Kitefox has another litter of kits about a season later ( 2 kits) Named Hawkkit and Lilykit. She later dies her father killed her but he later dies.
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Not bad but what happens if stark it becomes leader? StarStar? Just so you know Prefixes can't begin with "Star"
Jewlxels1
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My OCs Violetsun. In my book series, The Forsaken Frost, she is the daughter of BlizzardClans deputy, Coffeebean. At the end of the first book, she and Coffeebean; her mother, Silverminnow; and her brother, Yarrowpaw, are banished. They then go to PrimeClan.
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Copper. A brown she with olive/green eyes. She's a rogue who hangs out in riverclan territory. She's a loud, mischievous feline who is 36 moons old
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My OC is Summerfly. She is a ginger she-cat with a white chest, front left paw, and muzzle. She has a brown patch over her left eye, ear and fluff. She also has a brown patch on her back, right side. All of her other paws are brown too, she has green eyes.
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My oc is called Pepperleap and she Is a brave young shadowclan warrior she is a tan cat with pale red splotches all over her she has blue eyes and is very kind
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I've got two i did for this quiz - Mudpaw (later mudpelt) and stoneclaw. Not much backstory for either of them yet aside from them both being from windclan. Mudpaw is a tan and brown tom who's fur pattern looks like he fell in a mud puddle (hence his name), and stoneclaw is a grey tabby tom who looks similar to greystripe but his underbelly and paws are white
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My OC is Rainstripe, who I made a warrior cats role play quiz series about! I can't really say how she looks because I want you to imagine that. You can take them now by clicking on my name!
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Name: Snakefoot
Age: 27 moonsDescription: beautiful tortoiseshell she-cat with a white chest and muzzle. kind of like squirrelflight, she has one white paw. her eyes are green.
Clan: Oakclan (I made it up)
status: Deputy, but also a queenFamily: mother-Rowandawn father-Moonshade siblings- Foxheart and Nettlesting. mate: Smokesky Kits: Galepaw and Breezepaw.
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My OC's name is Firepaw (soon to be Fireleaf) an evil med cat app, she killed a cat with death berries, once the clan has discovered what she has done she is killed and goes to the dark forest
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(she's a tortoiseshell with amber eyes and a torn ear)
Fireleaf1
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Ri du is my other oc, he's a rouge cat he's also very stealthy he isnt really any harm unless threatened, he usualy visits a specific skyclan kit and Five`fox
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Im so sad that almost all of the comments here r like 1, 2, 3 yrz ago... ur OCs r soo good I know the feeling that no one cares about ur Oc but you love it... I love ur OCs too n I would like to make a story with all of them
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Idk if someone who already put there their OC's gonna rlly come back but yea...
Sukii1
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My OC's name is WinterBarry
She is currently a queen raising her second litter of kits LynxKit and GoldenKit. she also had SpotKit who was killed by her former mate BrownFace. Her first litter was with BrownFace she had three kits LeopardFang, SnowTiger, and LionPaw.
Rank: Deputy/Queen
Clan: ShadowClanWinterBarry has a gray pelt with a silver muzzle and underbelly she has black speckles under her Blue-Green eyes.
kin:
Mother: SummerFern(StarClan)
Father: HawkFur(DarkForest)
Brother: HollowKit(StarClan)
Sisters: RavenFlight(Alive), MoonGrove(Alive)
Foster Mother: SilverFrost(StarClan)
Foster Father: GreenEye(Alive)Foster Brothers: TreeFrost(StarClan), BlackThorn(Alive)
Foster Sister: SnowNight(StarClan)
Mate: FlameFur(StarClan)
Former Mate: BrownFace(DarkForest)Daughters: SnowTiger(Alive),LeopardFang(Alive), GoldenKit(Alive), LynxKit(Alive)
Sons: LionPaw(StarClan), and SpotKit(StarClan)
Foster Daughters: LeafKit(Alive), RoseKit(Alive)
WinterBerry has suffered physical and mental abuse from HawkFur and BrownFace since she was a kit. her mother died during child labor and her father took his anger out on his kits and ended with him killing HallowKit thats why OwlStar forbid HawkFur to see his kits. because of trauma WinterBerry tends to be vary timed around toms(except FlameFur and GreenEye) unless they threaten her family that is still with her.
Mentor: FlowerTail(StarClan)
Apprentice: IceLight(Alive)
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Also Leapord is golden with bronze spots like a leapord and also patterns, and black patterns (like parts of the spots and her tail tip, ear tip, legs)
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My OC is Trappaw/Talon he is an apprentice currently.
Basically he falls in love, then she dies tragically by Whistleclan cats and he rages and kills their medicine cat. Then he meets a Whistleclan she-cat he nearly kills, but falls in love AGAIN and i haven't really thought into his backstory ;-; making it up as I go--
WRITERS BLOCK AAAAAAAAAAHHHH
If any of u have Wattpad follow me Sp00ky_Shadow_WolfZ my oc is in one of my books ;-;
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my OC is called lightning paw she is a fully black she cat and she will be the next leader of shadow clan as she is the daughter of the leader and she is evil because the thunder clan cats killed her mum and 3 of her 4 litter mates and also they killed her best friend storm paw who she had a crush on so now she doesn't let anyone in in fear that they to will die from your fellow quiz maker Draco.
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Could I get a period somewhere? Grammar is one thing you should work on. Also, that is a little tragic. Why did Thunderclan kill those cats? Is there anything happy about this? What does Lightningpaw look like? Also, in the future, stray away from names long and awkward like "Lightning". It sounds better in the long run, trust me. Why was she called Lightningkit? If it had anything to do with her looks I wouldn't know, because you didn't list any. In summary, this OC isn't that great, but I've seen worse. Keep trying! :)
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my oc is Ashstrike. she is deputy of thunderclan and lost her sister in the battle agaisnt the dark forest. she fell in love with a cat from another clan. she died a noble death in battle
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my oc is Silverheart. i got a 78%, which is pretty good. she is part of pebbleclan after a war at the fourtees which made everyone confused. she fell inlove and got a mate, and left her clan for them. but they died so in grief they jumped into the gorge.
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my oc is named pebblebounce. she is a black she-cat with white spotsand green eyes. her kits have powers like lion, dove, and jay, so that was a prophecy deliverd to her. her parents died when she was very young, but her mate lives still.
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Oh and SunWhisker had 3 kits with Dimfur: moonkit ,Colorkit , and Featherkit
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My OC is Sand'whisper she is a brown and dark brown fluffy cat! Her role is queen :)
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My oc is named Bigflame, he is a very loyal cat and puts his clan first he believes in Starclan strongly, although he can be stubborn he loved his mate Cottonstripe who died from a strong warrior, he loved his mate more than anything until a jealous she-cat killed him shortly after Cottonstripe killed the cat Silverheart to avenge his death.
Bigflame has kitty-pet blood but yet was clan-born he is a Persian mostly white with orange splotches he has yellow eyes.
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While not a Gary Stu, this character still has a lot of room for improvement. While reading this I couldn't really tell what was going on, and I even read it again and hardly understood. Personality? Where did that go? And flaws, too. What are his flaws?
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his name is dreamwalker and he is mainly black and white with a red tail and ears he has black dots on his ears and a tail he is a prophecy cat with three mentors to keep him from going evil he can walk in peoples dreams an has an evil twin.
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Eh. Not a very good OC to be honest. This is just my opinion, but I'm sure others would say the same thing in a different way, so I'm here to help you.
Dreamwalker, while a very cool name, is very overused. I've seen this name on several cats and think about it.
Leader: Bluestar
Deputy: Redtail
Med.Cat: SpottedleafWarriors: Longtail, Darkstripe, Lionheart, Dreamwalker, Tigerclaw.
What stands out? I'm sure you thought "Dreamwalker" and while this may be a good thing in your head, a name that stands out a lot from the others is a good indicator of a Mary Sue/Gary Stu.
Also, there should be a backstory. What was this cat's past? How does it effect his everyday life and personality traits? If he has a prophecy, maybe tell us more about it. He has an evil twin? Try saying what he/she does to be evil, and also maybe stay away from the term 'evil twin' and switch to something like (Assuming it is a male figure, maybe not) wicked brother. Stay away from giving cats powers. There is only three cats in the entire warriors universe with magic, and we should probably keep it that way in ours.
And my last tip: GRAMMAR! Add periods, commas, capital letters so that you comment is more appealing! I forgot to breathe while reading this. Whew! That's all my tips for now, hopefully someone reads this.
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(In that last part I mean your comment, not you comment lol. Sorry about that.)
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He dies in the end and its very sad. Also he has a Scar over one eye and a scar on his torso/belly
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My OC's name is Skunkfur, all black tom with white on his nose, belly and two stripes going down from his back to tail.
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Cool quiz,still working on my oc a bit but u gave me a few pointers so thanks!
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