Pumas of Noble Canyon
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Thread Topic: Pumas of Noble Canyon
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Just tell me if you want me to stop making rps. I know I've made a lot; I just don't want to force you guys to join each one.)
There was once a small, lofty bank supporting a babbling brook. Over time this small shore eroded into a series of cliffs, a canyon, with a deep, wide trench winding through the middle.
And that is where Noble Canyon stands today. Pumas were soon attracted to this place, some gathering in the trench, others binding on top. The dank darkness of the trench has changed their inhabitants cruel and mysterious, making them part of Midnight Village, whereas the rarely-stormy weather atop the canyon has filled their dwellers with peace and hope, naming their area the Skylight Village.
Please specify whether your puma is a Skylighter or a Midnighter, name, gender, etc. Also, every panther has a special backstory, whether you reveal it through the Charlie's info or pave its way through the rp.
Thanks for reading all of it! Congrats if you made it this far! And, yes, E N J O Y ! ! ! -
*charrie's, not Charlie's)
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Name: Shira
Gender: Female
Race: Midnighter
Fur: Pitch black
Eyes: Piercing blood red
Backstory: When Marx and his mate Luka give birth to a beatiful black she-cub, the two skilighters couldn't be happier. But everything changes when, in the middle of the night, three midnighters invade skilight territory. Marx bravley goes to fight, but with three against one, he is quickly killed. Now Luka is left alone, shivering in fright as the three shadowy pumas approached. She pleads them not to touch her child, but her cries fall on deaf ears. Luka's sobs are silenced quickly, but the cruelty of her death echoes on forever. Having gotten what they came for, the three retreat back to their own land with the cub. They call her Shira, the ancient word for "Stolen", and train her to fight as one of their own. The dark acts of her captors turned her eyes blood red, and still to this day she wanders throughout midnight lands, a legend. -
IHLAOY NewbieI want you to stop making roleplays. I think you should be content and focused on the ones that you already have instead of burning yourself out on characters and settings so quickly.
Develop the characters you do have, expand the world of your other roleplays, introduce new villains and monsters, row row fight the power, etc. -
@Ihlaoy:
Thank you so much for giving me the truth. And I couldn't agree more! I should be content with the many rps I have. So I'm officially done.
Again, thanks for your opinion!) -
Alrighty, then I guess it's time to focus!)
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Yeppers! No more rps)
Name: Kala
Gender: Female
Race: Midnighter
Fur: Sleek dark blue fur, teal spots and white tummy
Eyes: light bronze
Backstory: once a fighter, Kala posed a huge threat towards other cubs. She also tacked back to/ nipped adults. One day her parents decided sorrowfully to banish her. They had to. But Kala stood firm; she didn't want to go. She killed her father in a fight and frightened away her mother in anger. Everyone hated her, and she was alone. Sick of poor treatment, Kala grew up furious, cruel, and very twisted.
Name: Mason
Gender: Male
Race: Skylighter
Fur: Soft, downy and yellow
Eyes: dark green
Backstory: He's really mysterious, so I will reveal it in the rp.
Speaking of which, want to start? ;3 -
Alrighty! )
Shira crept alon under the shadows of the canyon, stepping quietly. Her blood-red eyes were locked onto her target: an unsuspecting canyon-dwelling bird. The black cougar slipped towards the animal, growling lowly under her breath. -
The bird shifted it's wings and pecked at the ground, completely unaware of the mortal danger it was in. Shira's now extended claws left slight indents in the rough ground. Predator approached prey, and with each step the hunter's pride swelled, fed by her target's blissful ignorance. The stunning intensity of the lethal encounter was unearthly, but it was brought to an end when Shira leapt at the bird. Her sleek black coat shimmered as she entered the sunlight, her silver claws glinting like deadly knives. The bird screamed in surprise and protest as the silver thorns sunk into it's delicate feathers, piercing the skin on it's back. The shrill cries echoed through the canyon as Shira delivered the final blow: a slash to the neck. With a triumphant snarl, the puma began to drag it's catch towards the others.
Sorry this was a long post, I'm trying to work on my writing...) -
Name: X
Age: 3 Years
Looks: Dark red fur, black paws, ears, and tail. Splash of white across his chest like paint or blood splatters. Hard, bright and unnerving yellow eyes.
Race: Midnighter
Scent: Pines and a crisp cool night
Story: When the young cub was birthed to rouges on the outside of both races his father, Ajax quickly taught his son the means to survive. The tough brute would leave them unprotected at times so they faced dangers on their own. His mother, Lilic, was softer and kinder and X quickly formed a bond with her. He used to have a name you know, but he can't remember. A Midnighter found about where they were hidden away and soon came to dispatch the problem. Ajax being no where to be seen left a young cub and mother to face the evil alone. His mother fought bravely but was soon beheaded and brought to her end. A sky lighter heard the commotion and came to the rescue. X not knowing who to trust attacked the wrong cat, ending with blood across his chest. (The white for pureness.) the Midnighter finished off the other one and took X away, changing his name. -
Name: Francesca
Age: 2 years
Looks: Pale, almost snowy apperence with black speckles on her legs and back and face. Pure black paws. Honey colored eyes.
Scent: Winter and Fall
Story: born in the darkness was the hardest part of her cub hood. Once born to be a Midnighter it quickly changed when her mother, Denia, ran away from the cold grubs of the darkness. Fran dosent remember much after that. With the hot breath of the midnighters on their heals Denia found an empty cave and stuffed her cub in place promising to be back. Once born with tan fur, the days in the darkness led her to pale and turn almost pure white. Her mother never came back. A sky lighter found her after a few days weak, hungry, and alone. Saving the young cub and showed the true ways of goodness. -
Name: Avira
Gender: Female
Race: Skilighter
Looks: pale lilac fur, with white paws and tail tip. She has kind pale green eyes.
Scent: Newly bloomed flowers
Backstory: will be revealed in the rp
*Shira's scent is: stale blood while she's evil) -
@Lucky: No, your writing is just stunning...)
@Goddess: Beautiful description! Welcome!)
(I'll be right back to rp; just checking the other ones real quick...) -
Thank you!)
X crouched low to the ground, hidden in the shadows. His beaming yellow gaze watched the others with little amusement. His long hooked claws pawed at the ground slightly sharpening the tips of his already sharp claws. Huffing slightly he sat on his haunches and curled his tail neatly over his front paws.
Fran eyed the sky with a thoughtful look. Was it going to rain or stay warm? Her ears twitched at the other noises and she returned her attention to a small fawn locked in her paws. She thanked it for its life and began to eat quietly. -
Mason crept out from behind a sheltering boulder, shoulders haunch. His wary eyes scanned the piece of rocky land before him. Is it gone? he wondered timidly.
"Auggh!" cried another puma. "Get off me!"
Kala released the stranger, baring her fangs which glistened like daggers in the bathing colored lights of underground jewels (no sun in the trench, remember?? She backed away in a threatening tone, hackles raised.
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