Help me write a story!
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Thread Topic: Help me write a story!
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(That's fine)
William looked up at Jason fear swirling in his blue eyes. "What do you mean not yet?"
Jason sighed pulling his hand back. "Neither of us know where he is and what he is doing to Holli right now. But if he wanted too kill her.., why would he wait for us too come. He had a gun and could of killed her on the spot!"
William shrugged standing up. "I don't care. You stay here if you want. I'm getting Holli back" he didn't wait for Jason too reply but just ran of into the distance leaving Jason too scurry behind him.
"Will. I've got my phone. Let's call the police" he insisted but William just shook his head running faster. -
(Lemme think...
I GOT SOMETHING!!)
The two boys ran and ran, until they found Sebastian, Charlie and Holli. They were walking through the forest, stepping on sticks and leaves. William and Jason ducked behind a rock.
'They're leaving quite the trail,' Jason muttered.
'Shush!' William snapped.
They looked to Holli, who was unconscious on Sebastian's shoulder. William made a growling sound and was about to jump up, but Jason firmly put his hand on his adopted brother's shoulder. 'She's been shot with a dart,' he whispered, pointing to the dark sticking out of her leg.
William winced at the word "shot".
They kept a safe distance away from Sebastian and Charlie as they followed them, doing their best to keep quite. -
QUIET NOT QUITE*
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(Lol, that's really good! :))
After the three had walked round the corner William and Jason stood up and slowly approached, ducking behind trees whenever they heard a noise. Eventually, they reached a spot where they could just glimpse Holli without Sebastian seeing them. There was only one problem, only one of them could see.
"Will, I'll look cause you cant stop yourself running out too her if they hurt her!" Jason snapped as William glared daggers at his brother and Jason scowled back.
"Fine, but tell me what they do!" William moaned and Jason nodded with no intention of doing so.
A few minutes later Holli awoke. The first thing she noticed was that she was tied too a chair, and that her mouth was gagged with a piece of rope. When she tried too move her hands a sharp pain went through her body. She glanced up and saw two figures. One that looked about fifty, and the other a teenager. Then she remembered. Sebastian. Charlie. They'd done something too her head. She could feel it now a slow throbbing pain at the back of her head. -
(Thanks!)
'The little girl's awake,' Charlie said, smirking.
'Thanks, Charlie, we don't need a narration,' Sebastian muttered. He kneeled in front of Holli and undid the rope that gagged her mouth.
'Now, tell me, Holli,' he said. He was really calm, which annoyed her. Who in their right mind would feel good after kidnapping an innocent teenager?
(I can't think of anything that they'd want with her 😂) -
(You forgot to end the speech 🤣🤣🤣)
Holli said nothing but instead spat in Sebastian's face who recoiled at once. "Okay! So we're going to do it the hard way. Charlie!" he ordered and straight away Charlie picked up a rock and walked behind Holli's chair. "The rules are simple. You don't answer the question, or I suspect your lying you get hit with the rock!"
Stood behind a bush, William reddened in anger. "What?" he snapped in a whisper as Jason whipped round, a finger too his lips.
"So, first question" Sebastian started. "Where do you live Holli?"
Holli looked him up and down. She didn't look scared, she was good at hiding her emotions but one the inside she was petrified. "I don't live anywhere" she stated.
Sebastian laughed. "One more chance girl, one more chance or that rock will be going through your head"
"Fine" Holli snapped. "I live in a tree though sometimes on the ground"
"I thought you were smarter then that. It seems not, Charlie!"
Charlie's hands were trembling as he lifted it above her head then lifted it back down. "I can't" he whispered.
"What?" Sebastian shouted.
"I can't do it" he repeated dropping the rock on the floor.
"Fine. I'll show you how it's done" he suggested picking up the rock and lifting it above Holli's head.
But as he brought it down someone tackled him too the ground. The rock grazed her shoulder leaving a deep and bloody wound but otherwise she was fine.
She looked up at her saviour but whoever they were, they had disappeared. -
One not On!
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No I mean On not one
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(Wait, do you want to choose who the "saviour" is, or shall I? Also, sorry for disappearing, my iPad died)
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(Dammit, you disappeared 😫)
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(Sorry, I really don't mind. I had a few ideas, like it could be Charlie, or William or a random stranger.)
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(Cool!)
Jason glanced down at his adopted brother, but he wasn't by his side. 'William?' he whispered, slightly panicked. 'William?!'
He glanced back to Holli, Sebastian and Charlie. Holli was still tied up, but now she was trying to break free. Sebastian looked unfazed by this, and put his hand on Holli's shoulder. She flinched and frowned up at him
'Don't think you're saved,' he said smugly, pulling out his gun. Jason flinched.
Holli started to panic. Her hands shook and her legs felt numb. Probably from the dart, but still. Sebastian held the gun up.
'You can still tell me where you live,' he said, smiling fakely. Holli bit her bottom lip. Her breath became shaky.
'R-Rose house, in the c-city,' she whimpered. Sebastian smiled.
'Good girl,' he said. 'And do you know where your grandmother, Rosalie is?'
'The city,' Holli whispered. Tears welled in her eyes as she became more and more frightened. -
Holli quivered as he put the gun down. "Charlie, you know what too do" he stated. Whatever he was next expected too do he seemed unfazed by.
"Yes, Grandad" he replied and ran off in the direction of the city.
Holli stared at Sebastian, tears rolling down her cheeks. "What do you want with me?" She asked heart beating faster then ever.
"Too kill you" Sebastian spat honestly. "But first I have questions for you, like Do you know what really happened too your Dad?"
Too this Holli's eyes brightened. Her Grandma had been alive so could her Father be too? "Is he alive?" She pleaded.
Sebastian laughed. No, very much dead, just he didn't die the way you thought he did" -
Holli frowned. Maybe she wasn't told for a reason? Nonetheless, she should have the right to know, right? She thought hard. Several terrible conclusions came to her mind, but there was one she couldn't shake off.
'Did you...?' Holli stuttered, bottom lip quivering. Sebastian smirked but didn't answer, running a cloth over the side of his gun.
Holli didn't speak after that. -
Behind the bush, Jason felt tired and his knees were starting too buckle. "Stay awake" he begged himself. He wandered where William had gone, he had disappeared a few hours earlier and Jason hadn't seen him since. He wasn't worried, he wasn't on the battle scene with Sebastian and Holli.
Meanwhile, Sebastian put his face right up too Holli's face, narrowing his eyes. "Is the little girl tired?" He said in a baby voice.
Holli normally would of slapped him in the face or made a rude remark but right now that wasn't possible and she was too scared too even open her mouth.
"Answer ME!" He shouted.
Holli shook violently "No, I'm not scared" she lied. This was the wrong thing too say.
"Really? Let's make you more scared then!" Sebastian exclaimed pulling out a kitchen knife. "A few cuts won't hurt will it? Oh wait! Yes it will" he laughed.
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