Shining Idol
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Thread Topic: Shining Idol
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Shining Angel NoviceExplanation :
1. Song writing contest.
2. The first contest theme is free.
3. Do not make the song too long.
4. Work alone.
So, you can make any type of song, any theme of song.
Because this is an entrance exam.
Tonight is 22:09, the second of April. Tomorrow night, around seven until eleven, the third of March, I will check this thread.
Thank you for following this contest. -
Beverlyreagan NoviceI was almost out i was out of breath i got trapped doubut and fear again
I lost my way
I lost your lane
I lost everything had before you
Now i am suck
Dont know what way to go
I trapped whitten your heart
Oh i am not scared of happieness but i am so scared of you
I was almost out but
I got caught in the fire caught pain pain pain oh i never felt like liar u til i lied and then i got my pain i never felt so trapped inside until the day you locked me up and turned away
And now im trapped trapped again
Oh woah
Oh i was crying out was flouded in tears my head hurts my stoumach aches i ant feel nothing but your eyes burning on me your eyes are razor blades blades and i never felt so trapped whiten until you trapped md
I never felt so cold whiten until broke me
I got caught in fire caught in the pain pain oh i mever felt like lair until lied ti you and i got my pain i never felt so trPped imside until you locked me up and turned away
Amd now im trapped again
Oh woah
You burnt me out you spit out you threw away the key to your heart i cant breath anymore i cant take away pain only can if you stop this fight oh
I got in fire caught in pain pain oh i never felt like a liar until i lied to you and that is when i got my pain pain pain i never felt so trapped so trapped inside inside until locked oh you locked and turned youuu turned turned turned turned away
I never felt so oh i never felt so caught i never felt so caught in the fireeeeeee. Fiiiiireeee
Caught in the fire
Caught in the fire
I got caught in the fireeee
Now im trapped
I was almost out
I was out if breath
I got trapped in doubut and fear
I lost my way
I lost your love
I lost your love oh lost your love mhmm
I had a better song called chase a rainbow i won song contests with it but it is on another website my ipad wont go to -
Shining Angel NoviceOkay, great. Maybe the time will be longer. I will read the rest tomorrow.
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I'm also writting about Fire
Suddenly she so ever so alone
Caught in the flames of her own heart
And the Fire in her mind burns in time
Though at first it hurts
Suddenly it's painless
And the fire burns brighter as her will only knows
And they know that she oh they know that she
That she that she
Holds the will of fire
And she loves Fire
She can stand up no matter the struggle
She stands unafraid as her will burns brighter than the rest
And now she is fighting fighting for the rights that she lost so ago
And heaven knows she will not give up
No rain can bring her down nothing can stand in her way
She's still standing in the flames
Oh oh they know oh oh they know
She holds the will of fire
Of fire and she not a liar
She is like fire her ambitions just keep burning
Oh all becuase of her will , the will of fire -
Shining Angel NoviceWhy if I use the saved page it still 3 minutes ago?
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Shining Angel NoviceWe need more contestans. We cannot continue with only two.
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I'll do it)
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Slowly again... The night brews on,
And your stuck here... Stuck here all night long...
The wind sings with the heavens and the trees called out your name!
But you never left me alone that night when I needed to be saved,
Can't you tell I was fine but lonely , yet you still loved me, WHYYY-ieY?!
I left you but you ran back I broke your heart, but trailed right back here,
Dude your impossible:
Your lazy, your rude you ack like you like me, but this act is new.
Have you herd my prayers? Have you been stalking my life? This so crazy,
I don't even know if he should leave my life! Is he still in love or is there something he wants , man this is so bazaar he's probably after my new feakin' car! Or maybe it my,
Money, I've seen him act all that but now I'm Gonna kick his little-
He told me he loved me but do I even care he looked me in the eyes and said some thing about- wait what hold the phone there! I don't love this has to be a trance my pawn hasn't even started to advance cause that right I ain't doing that is this what you came is that what your lookin' at, I'm such a stupid girl, stuck in some other world
Now I know his game and I gave me lots of pain. Won't some one love me for me?- wait what about care about me?-
Slowly again... The night brews on,
And your stuck here... Stuck here all night long...
The wind sings with the heavens and the trees called out your name!
But you never left me alone that night when I needed to be saved,
Can't you tell I was fine but lonely , yet you still loved me, WHYYY-ieY?!
I left you but you ran back I broke your heart, but trailed right back here,
Dude your impossible... -
I'm great, fine, spectacular. In a way
I relish every night, and I live every day.
I live, I laugh, I write, I sing,
I wonder what the new days will bring.
Then I get home, and I take off the mask.
The day, and almost impossible task,
Is finally over, and so I lie Down,
and wait patiently for the day that I die.
I cry, I scream, I bawl, and sleep,
even though I have promises to keep.
I wait, and wonder, and cry some more,
And I ache and burn from my very core.
Then, I'm not alone, and the mask reappears:
Out goes the grief, pain and all of the tears,
As I am a happy person, cheerful all the day.
A world full of rainbow, not one shade of grey.
Of course I'm not okay, I'm not fine,
No matter how much I seem to shine.
I don't even know why I feel this...
Why my existence is one long, endless abyss.
But it is, and will be, so I cling to life,
As one day I might slip, and end it with a knife.
But, I'm still here, no matter what my dreams might say
And I hope that one day I will actually be okay. -
Beverlyreagan NoviceDid you like my shinnning? :)
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Hehe, do you like it. I've made so many poems about so many things, I decided why shouldn't I turn it into a song.
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Um. One more please. If we can. I like all actually.
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It is already 22:01 but we cannot continue with 4. I need 5, so I will check tomorrow.
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Yue yuki NewbieWhen I look out of the window
I see
What really is
In the other side
It's death and disease
But there it's life
And saftey
And now I'm happy
In the snow -
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