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I got a 10/10! One of my OCs is Alex. He's a survivor of a war that he fought in when he was 14. In that same war, he lost his dad, who was the leader of the organization that Alex leads now, 7 years later. The organization is called the Renegades, and they're anarchists against the corrupt government of Lietburg, their country. Alex has short, light brown hair and grey eyes, and he's slender, but muscular, built like an athlete. He has a deadpan humor, and likes to catch people off guard with a random hilarious statement in the middle of a serious conversation. He has no living immediate family, and if he had extended family, he doesn't know who they are, and he blames himself for his dad's death. He has a quick temper, hates any kind of physical contact, and is extremely antisocial around anyone other than who he lives with. Like, if he has to see someone and he's not coincidentally fighting alongside them or in his house, he will turn tail and run. On the more positive hand, he's very smart and easily outthinks most people. Not much fazes him, and he completely ignores any insults made directly to him. But if one of his friends gets hurt, he will hunt down the person at fault and make them pay. He's incredibly capable as a warrior and fighter. Although, he has a hard time expressing emotions the right way, except anger. He's good at that one. So not many people who know him have seen his hidden soft side. He loves animals, especially dogs.

Thanks for this quiz, it's a good one.

So, my one of my favorite OC's is Olive. She's a half human, half goblin creature. She's a triplet. She's also adopted with her siblings. For her explanation on her personality, she's: Passionate, outspoken, strategic, creative, fun, caring, generous, humorous, empathetic, spontaneous, authentic, inclusive, charismatic, futuristic, romantic, opinionated, kind, big-hearted, adaptable, intuitive, memorable, friendly, honest, positive, entertaining, curious, adventurous, inspiring, brave, enthusiastic, eager, resilient, influential, resourceful, talkative, unique, musical, inventive, imaginative, smart, energetic, and just overall AWESOME.

She's gone through some stuff. Her soon to be lover is a triple spy. Her twin sister became a villain. She found out she's from a whole different dimension. Her aunt is a criminal and her mother was aiding and abetting to the aunt's crimes, regretting it immensely. She has to hide her true self to the world she's living in now, because she knows she won't be accepted for it. Her entire family is full of magic users. There's more, but I don't want to write an entire novel about Olive. But there you go. That's a bit on one of my OCs.

Is your OC well-developed?
Your Result: 10/10 76%

10/10! Your character/OC is perfect! Well-Developed. By the way, thank you for taking the quiz. I hope there were enough answers for you.

TY & YW

I wanted to figure if one of my OC's was developed well before I threw them into a comic.

So here's a bit about them
A 29 male called Andy conner's (Nickname Ace)

They a Oc (In story) who was scrap by their creator and was forced to live in the forgotten world of unfinished Oc's

In that time Ace had become a strong and fast thinker, a bit Unstable/Insane but they had to survive.

They barely looked human they had a pale white skin and a few burn markings all over their body almost like paint, other unfinished Oc's called Ace a 'base' because of their unfinished appearance which gave Him a fierce hatred to the others.

This Oc was supposed to be the main villain but I thought It would be interesting to make them one of the main characters.

I get a 10/10! My main OC, Lumi, is a sweet and quiet girl. She is a half owl, half human. She is a witch who practices healing magic. She is going to college to become a nurse. She is an albino human but her owl features are not. She is a barn owl. Her hair is pure white and she has icy blue eyes, like the eyes of a blind person though she isn't blind. Her whole body is covered in freckles. She usually wears a black bow in her long, flowy hair. Her clothes are usually the colors; blue, white, black, and light brown. She likes to wear skirts, dresses, sweaters, or anything to keep her warm. Her birthday is the 21st of February, which makes her a Pisces. She's in a relationship with my partner's OC Vee. They are literally my #1 obsession right now lol. I think that's pretty much it, I hope you liked her! ^^

I tested my OC Katrina "Kat" Allison Johnson. She's an African-American thirty-year-old who's lived in Darien, Georgia most of her life (born in Jacksonville, Florida) and has just moved to Richmond, Virginia because of fairer and better pay rates in work, so she took a job in running the social media pages of a local cosmetics company, which still requires her to come to the company weekly. She's written for fanfiction purposes, with her main weakness being recklessly curious - often doing silly things to find out what will happen. In this case, she discovers that her apartment is being haunted by a canon character (the fandom has both dead and alive characters who are active) and eventually manages to communicate with him, and gives him the freedom he asks for in the living realm because even though she thinks it will end badly, she's curious to find out more about him. Of course, it turns out he'll do things like scare her for his own amusement, get her drunk then kiss her because there's no way she'd let him do that sober, slip her an aphrodisiac, and just generally manipulate her into a relationship. Kat doesn't know he's manipulating her, of course, because he's actually made her life genuinely better in the process (helping her make friends, taking care of her when she's ill and generally being a friend to her before coercing her into a romantic relationship.

I got an 8/10! Here's my OC's info sheet:
Name: Nyarlathotep
Age: Ageless

Appearance: Standing at an imposing 8 feet tall, Nyarlathotep's body is draped in flowing black robes that seem to shift and swirl around him like darkness itself. His face is largely concealed by a long, sinuous tongue that hangs down from his mouth, adding to his nightmarish appearance. His eyes glow a fiery red, piercing through the darkest of shadows.

Personality: Nyarlathotep is a malevolent deity, reveling in chaos and destruction. He is patient and methodical, taking great pleasure in manipulating events to suit his nefarious ends. His presence instills fear and despair in those who cross his path, as he delights in feeding off of their emotions. Despite his malevolence, there is an undeniable allure to him, as if he were offering a glimpse into the depths of the abyss.

Character Background: Nyarlathotep is the Deity of the Void, an ancient entity who has existed since the dawn of time. He is mentioned in the Necronomicon, a forbidden tome of dark magic, and is worshipped by cults dedicated to the spread of chaos and destruction. His long tongue is a symbol of his ability to twist words and pervert reality to suit his purposes. His followers believe that he will one day usher in a new age of darkness, where the weak will be destroyed and the powerful will reign supreme.

WOWZA

10/10! Your character/OC is perfect! Well-Developed. By the way, thank you for taking the quiz. I hope there were enough answers for you.

I DID NOT EXPECT A 10/10 THERE :O

My OC is a female vampire (an innocent child) who got lost in the human world and is currently with the Knight family (its a name not a kings knight ;-;). She was wrongly cursed, which is how she got to the human world.

Characteristics:
Innocent smol bean
Aged 13

Her partner Shannon (female) who helps her interact with others

Is NOT a psychopathic cold blooded vampire who devours on other peoples blood

Naive
Gullible

Tries to fit into the crowd of strange humans who dont know that shes a vampire aaaaaand

Thats all I could tell about my crInGe OC and TYSM for ur quiz!

Eighty percent well/pretty good,thanks I do put lots of effort to my character development and story lines alot. I chose my snow leopard oc I made sense they have helped me through alot. Cool quiz mate.

Yippee a 10/10! I'm in the making of a comic about her so am really paranoid about any mistakes in her writing lolz

10/10