poetry
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Thread Topic: poetry
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0.0 wowzer!
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Drowing
Submerged in darkness
Surrounded by fear
Im drowning
In endless tears
In aching pain
That wont go away
Cloaked in confussion
Imaes passing by too fast
Like pictures on a flickering television
In drowning
In never ending nightmares
In sleepless nights
Filled with terror
Im under water
Im cold and yet so warm
I cant breathe
Cant move
Something that was forewarned
I know this feeling all too well
Sounds like fire and ice
Im going straight to hell
Please am I worth saving?
Questions with no answers
Im drowning -
holy f---.
deep -
oooh. that one is a master piece.
a true passionate work -
Nice poem, Nuva! It was very deep and emotional
And what do you mean by 'Wowzers' Slim? -
your poem it was awesome
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i think i already posted this one somewhere around here
I dreamt one night a man had killed himself for no apparent reason with no apparent weapon. I dreamt a man had killed himself to no apparent avail. What that man amounted to was nothing but a suicide note, with no apparent meaning and no apparent signing. He left his life’s meaning to a suicide note that nobody was able to read, and so his life was lost along with the suicide note. -
Good one! That was really cool, Slim. And thank you.
Walking through the dark cold streets,
On a cold, December day
Never letting people's eyes meet,
I always look away,
What is this world that we live in?
Where no one cares anymore,
That's always full of sins,
And we always face hell's door, -
thanks guys...and yeah im sorry too roady..i liked both of your poems roady and slim....i'll post more
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Have you ever imagined,
Riding a creature,
Such as a dragon?
Or any freak of nature?
I would ride my dragon,
Over tall green mountains,
And maybe stop,
To drink at a fountain,
My dragon would have,
Yellow scales and red eyes,
And a long spiky tail,
For where the enemy lies.
I'd ride it over the traffic,
To get to school early,
And in the mornings,
I wouldn't be so hectic,
I could sleep in,
For 5 more minutes,
And still have time to feed him,
And be as early as student number 1.
This is my dragon,
The scaly creature,
With wings so long and wide,
And flies over nature. -
i wish i could contribute more to the conversation but i cant make poems worth crap. but im comtempt to just sit and watch.
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OK, Whatever, Ork
I feel so dead
Everything's ringing inside my head
I want to die, I can't stand this
All I want is to live in bliss
If only I could runaway from my problems
If only I could leave them behind
But they'd come with me, so never mind
Black roses fill my garden
Nothing more lef of them
They've gone withered, dead and black
And they can't grow back
But I want them there
And I don't really care
A single rose can fill my garden
A single black rose, is my world
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lol, another passion work! i love those!
something burns like never before, something breaks down inside. something fierce something sad, something born, something died. as the scale begins to tip, as it's sorrow reaches extent, something cracks, then cracks no more. no more is said. no more is said. -
*realizes* i have short poems..
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Your poems are great, Slim.
My world of Nature:
Through the emerald green fields,
And the cloudy blue skies,
It's amazing that everything's real,
It makes you want to cry.
As I look at my reflection,
In the crystal clear blue water,
I see perfection,
And a thousand moments of laughter.
As I play through the fields of forever,
And smell the rosy red and pink flowers,
No one's with me, we are not together,
I'm me in my world, and here I could spend hours.
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