poetry
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Thread Topic: poetry
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Thanks, I read yours, it was really good, too.
And sorry for your aunt. -
she's ok..just a little freaked out..and thanks..i would post more but they get depressing and i dont know which one to post
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I'm making these up from the top of my head, some I copy-pasted from my posts in poetry forums but the Roeth one, I did just now.
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each and every one of us-each and every human- each and every one of us holds the hidden heart,were lies are true passion that us ourselves cut down. each and every one of us- each and every human- holds the hidden heart were begins are true life, that us ourselves leave rotting on the ground.every single one of us with the hidden heart, crush it into nothing then suffer at the loss that us ourselves have caused.
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thats good. I havent thought of any for since this after noon
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who was that about slim
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me, well like i said most of poems are about as deep as a puddle :D
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Locked heart
Sorrow fills it,
Can't you see?
Don't deny it.
Not with me.
You are crying alone,
In that corner,
You want to go home,
But you have no mourners,
You were disgraced,
Left in tears,
You felt you had no place,
And let out all your fears,
Let out your heart,
Like a butterfly,
You should have did this from the start,
But not it's time to reach for the sky.
A locked heart,
Is like someone,
Who from the start,
Had no one,
A locked heart,
Is a dungeon,
Someone locked in,
But can't get out.
So the only way to set yourself free,
Is open up your locked heart,
And open it with the key,
You should have done so from the start.
That was also from the top of my mind. -
lol ok...most of my poems are about me...but not always..
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And great one Slim! You're very creative with your poetry, you too Nuva.
As for mine, well I guess they're OK, a bit off though. -
0.o wow...i think you take the poet trophy out of the two of us, cause' there is no way i could pop out with that...
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that kinda sounds like me
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roady wins poetry trophy!
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No way! Mine are crap, Slim! You win the trophy!
And I guess so, Nuva. -
:D thanks
my poems are generally just i phrase i think would be in a poem, but i manage to add meaning later.
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