poetry
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Thread Topic: poetry
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i used to feel that way...I'm always split between extremes...but i decided that the split was who i am. :) maybe everybody feels like that sometimes...i don't know
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i dont know who i am.
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you mean whether your ork or medes?
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lol, good one but you know what i mean.
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yeah..im still stuck in that dark place...you know the one wher you have no idea who are or who ur becoming...whehter or not you'll find your way out..but im workin on it
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dito
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yeah....maybe we'll find each other and help one another find the way out...together...thats what friends do...lol my son
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A small, shrivelled up flowers,
Making ripples on the water,
One second can seem like an hour,
If the ripples linger.
A star shining bright in the sky,
Shining it's radiant glow on the world,
Nobody ever knew why,
But it reached all the boys and girls,
The sea's water brushed up on the shores,
And I sit there on the sand,
The wind was so strong, it brought more,
And there were too many at sand.
A candle shining bright,
Like a kindess in a naughty world,
Shining it's glowling light,
On the faces of the beautiful girls. -
:)
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Sorry, in the last line of the third part I meant "Hand" Instead of "Sand"
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thats good roady...really good
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wow, very deep poem ILM
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
But yours are a million times better. -
who's?
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Both of yours, Nuva and Slim t.
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