poetry
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Thread Topic: poetry
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this is the end...
the light is slipping away.
people falling
people crying
please wake up...
this nightmare isnt going to go away.
my reality
haunts my dreams
i cannot tell...
the difference any more.
the darkness
floods the light
i know now...
that what i've done make who i am.
i see a path
that saves me
i will not die...
not until i've made things right.
people harmed
lives undone
i try to help...
im pushed away and made to hate.
people screaming
swearing my name
but i can see...
my pleads are getting through.
the light returning
their wounds are healing.
i close my eyes...
maybe now i can rest unworried.
i go to sleep
my depts are paid -
i mean it doesnt have to be about me or anything..i just saying you know...and ok its a vote Slim wins the trophy
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OMG i think ORk just won the poet trophy!
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That was really good!
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@nuva lol if it spoke to you then it is about you! my poems basically have no more meaning then the claim to have.
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There is no competition! Write your poems and let people compliment it!
With poetry, with writing, you can't win.
This is your feelings. Your emotions.
You. -
ok...i know for a fact i didnt win...but now we have a three way tie
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:D YAY!
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that took every ounce of creativity i had. im drawing a blank now.
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oh..ok...well thanks for writting a poem about me roady! lol...and yeah..i agree even though i was instigating it
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nope still nothing. -
lol....wow spence..
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lol *has an ENORMOUS RANDOM thought*
you know what would be cool? if we all put these poems in a book or something. called it the poet trophy poems! -
Echo
A dark cold room.
Only one person.
Whom was left to their doom.
This is definitley the worst.
I sat there crying.
Not knowing what to do.
I'm already dying.
And withought you.
Suddenly, I hear something.
Yes, I can hear a voice.
I hear it coming.
I have no choice.
It entered the room,
And bounced on the walls,
I thought I was doomed,
'Till I heard your calls.
And then, it lingered there,
I didn't care for how long,
I really didn't care.
But it was an echo, and I can't be wrong. -
lol...mine are already in a book...its not published or nothing but its still in a book. buts that a good idea slim
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