I'll be needing help shortening my essay.
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Thread Topic: I'll be needing help shortening my essay.
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The profile picture says Live Love Cheer, and it's the colors of our school. I thought you would like this account. If you want it, the password is your lunch number.
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I want it gimmie gimmie gimmie
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My nameis Kiersten im has the stupids dur da dur dur.....
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Alyssa did that!
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Hahahahahahahaha payback
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I didn't do anything to you. That's not nice.
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It's for annoying Momma
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I didn't do anything to her.
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Mmmmmmmm hmmmmmmm........ okay!?!?
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It was still funny
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I didn't deserve that.
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Penguin are chill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! -
Just kidding I have to do my laundry ugh........
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Dark, in order to shorten your essay, try limiting the third and fourth paragraphs to just one example each. I think one of them had more than two right? Pick your favorite and then roll with that one. To introduce it you could put, "To name just one example..."
Hope this helps, sorry if there already is only one example. -
Ooh that's a good idea go to with what she said
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