Songs that u wrote
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Farm Life
I was born on the land of farm,
corn was my first food I ever tried.
No one ever stop be,
from builing a barn.
I could ride a tractor before I could ride a bike.
I lived half of my life on the farmland,
raisning crops,raising cows and pigs.
[Chorus]
Now don't get me wrong,
farms are cool.
Here's a farm life,
for yoooouuu!
Now don't get me wrong,
corn is good.
Here's a farm life,
for yoouu.
Growing flowers,
was always fun,
I could get out,
and go-in-the-sun.
I could feel the heat,and the water,
all over me.
No one has never knew,
that I have raised bee.
[Chorus]
Now don't get me wrong,
farms are cool.
Here's a farm life,
for yoooouuu!
Now don't get me wrong,
corn is good.
Here's a farm life,
for yoouu.
Running in the fields,
was really fun,
feeding all the rabbits,
in the sun.
Don't insult me,
farmers are kind,
they are always helpful,
growing fruit.
[Chrous]
Now don't get me wrong,
farms are cool.
Here's a farm life,
for yoooouuu!
Now don't get me wrong,
corn is good.
Here's a farm life,
for you.
None of this stuff was real. I just got really bored one day and wrote this. What did you think of it?
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life is like wind un respected no real value till its gone only praized when needed curesed at when not left alone n a weary silence left alont to b un wanted thats all i got so far if any one can help i b most happy
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AngelofDeath Newbie:this song is dark and kinda scary...
Stalked by you, in the night.
I've seen you before, inside my mind.
Blood stains my hands,insanity grows.
I can't give into you, your watching me, where ever I go.
(Chorus)
anger,hatred, When will the nightmare end? Betrayed by the one you trust,No one knows the bloodlust. Nightmares, insanity, blood slowly spills from me.Now, can you truly see the monster that I have become?
(bridge)
And now its too late,demons dominate my soul.
Slashing and gashing, I'm not in control.
Now that they've found me,I'll never escape!
Life is the one thing I'll now have to take.
(back to the chorus)
THE END OF THE SONG...
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i revised The Change, the first post in this entire thread. so im gonna rewrite the song here.
Why do we always try to run away from our fears?
Try to hide them, try to keep them from becoming reality.
There’s a simple thing in life, that brings a spark of light.
Together, a reminder, that this is the real.
CHORUS: In the sight of the night,
the fire lights the darkness.
As the sun comes to rise,
the world is on the fly.
This is our last change,
fate is here to guide us through.
For the change, let the fire go on.
Why do we always try to run away and hide?
Could it be that our love wasn’t meant to be?
But we try to hide this fact and get on with our darkened lives.
There’s a simple thing in life that brings a spark of liiiiight.
Together a reminder, that this is reeeeeeaaal.
CHORUS 2x (up an octive and with emotion and feeling)
[music changes]
The starry sky is endless,
Unlike this song.
Why did it take so long,
To tell that we never could get along?
Now I know it was never meant to be.
For the cha-a-ange,
For the chaaaaaange,
Let the fire go on!!
Go ooooon,
Go ooo-o-on,
For the change,
Let the fire go-o on…
(quietly; peaceful) For the change… let the fire go on…
so yah. thats the new version. hope you like it. =) -
This is our last chance. not change. sorry i messed that up.
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I like it. =) A lot of soul in that song, I can tell.
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FREE - Anastasia
Just because I'm not crying doesn't mean I'm alright
And just because I'm not bleeding doesn't me I'm alright
All I can do is stare into the moon and stars at night
Wondering if all this pain and sacrifice is worth the fight
I just want to live but you force me to die
This pain you put me through brings up suicide
You try to kick me off but I hold on to the ride
All you can do is try and mess with my mind
Please, I'm screaming in the dark, dark night
Somebody let me leave
I want to live to breathe my dreams
Oh, how long can I keep up this fight?
Something left to believe
While everything else bursts at the seams
I just want to be free!
I take everything in and always am there for my friends
And I truly know that they're there for me to the end
But I hide so much inside, left alone inside again
Feeling nothing, no feeling at all, I drown in sin
I just want to live but you force me to die
This pain you put me through brings up suicide
You try to kick me off but I hold on to the ride
All you can do is try and mess with my mind
Please, I'm screaming in the dark, dark night
Somebody let me leave
I want to live to breathe my dreams
Oh, how long can I keep up this fight?
Something left to believe
While everything else bursts at the seams
I just want to be free!
I'm running and screaming, trying to live without any feeling
(I can't breathe)
All that I know is I got to get away, realize my destiny someday
(Trapped in me)
If I just stay, and pretend not to be afraid, I'll never get anywhere to see another day....
Please, I'm screaming in the dark, dark night
Somebody let me leave
I want to live to breathe my dreams
Oh, how long can I keep up this fight?
Something left to believe
While everything else bursts at the seams
Please, I'm screaming in the dark, dark night
Somebody let me leave
I want to live to breathe my dreams
Oh, how long can I keep up this fight?
Something left to believe
While everything else bursts at the seams
I just want to be
I just want to be
We all want to be
Free.... -
Here is a lil bit of the song I`m writing the title is still unknown though but here it is:
Verse 1:It`s a place of no clue why
It`s a place of love misunderstood
It`s a place of cold sad darkness
It`s a place I can`t survive
It makes me feel so lonely
Chorus:It`s a world of endless possibilities
It`s a game of life and death
It`s a world of no return
Inside of me
It`s empty
(Background:It`s emptiiee)
Thats mainly it I`m still working on it though.I`m thinking about that song becoming my original instead of all my sweet sappy sounding songs that I`ve written I hope you like it so far. -
I like it :) Sounds like my world right now. And it's nice to see you again, Felicia!
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Oh thanx Ana!
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I mean it still needs a lot of work though cause the other verses and the transition and the ending sucks!!!
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Hello.
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omg i think its really cool that yall can write songs.....i write poems and tried a few times to write a song.....but it didnt go over so well:) but yall are lik really good at it
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Thanks hippie =) When I go to college I'm going to major in songwriting. It's an actual major at Berklee College of Music.
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Blackbird NoviceThis is a song called Sea Blue Eyes.
"There's something to be said
about the girl with the sea blue eyes.
Her soft fire-like hair
Fills me with love"
Well, what do you think?
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