Songs that u wrote
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awesome i've got this other one i made up when i was angry at my friend...
you keep on pushing,
you keep on trying,
if this keeps up you may be dying,
for another chance...
but no more hiding in the dark,
its time to light that spark,
its time i draw the line,
its time for me to shine...
You aint holding me back,
you aint kepping me down,
your contol has lost,
mine has won,
i'm on my own track,
now i'm done.
tomorrow you'll trying again,
maybe you'll know what i ment,
maybe i'll give you another chance,
but i'd rather dance...
i don't remeber the rest sorry, i also have this other one (well acterly i have about 10 other songs but i'll say this one)
its called... (it dosn't have a name yet by the way i don't remeber it all)
all- your never gonna know unless you try,
you just might fall but you just might fly,
soon you'll see
that i am me... (long pause)
a- take a chance,
have a dance,
show the world what you can do,
have a go,
win the show-o-oh-ooooo.
a-take a chance,
b-have a dance,
a+b- show the world what you can do,
c-have a go,
d- win the show-o-oh-ooooooo
and i do not remeber the rest -
okay
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i like it
i hope you figure it all out -
i hope i'm not leaving while your typing
i'd hate to miss this but..
i got to get some sleep
but you keep up the good work
and it wil pay off in the end
goodby -
i wrote a song a while ago, but i'm only gonna put part of it here cuz it's so long haha:
The daylight starts to fade
From the sky now
The midnight hour strikes
Your time is up now
Darkness drowns the world
As you lie there
Soon your peaceful dreams
Become nightmares
Blackness seeps into your mind
Now you're in so deep
As I try to find you
In this churning ocean
Can you hear me scream
If you don't open your eyes now
You might never wake up
Never wake up
Question these lies now
And remember who you are
Remember who you are
Can you hear me?
The world's turning black
You have to fight back now
Do you hear me?
You have to fight back
You have to come back
The sky is black
The stars refuse to shine here
Searching this endless night
I won't let you die here
Voices whispering
Attempt to drive you insane
Listen as their tortured cries
Become your pain
Confusion spreads throughout your mind
Your struggles do no good
As the voices drown out all your thoughts
You can hear them scream
If you don't open your eyes now
You will never wake up
Never wake up
Accept all these lies now
And forget who you once were
Forget who you once were
Can you hear me?
The world's gone black
It's too late to turn back now
Do you hear me?
You can't turn back
You'll never go back -
woa thats long... but good i made up this song last night called what am i waiting for...
why are things so confusing,
why can't i just pop the question,
am i afraid he'll say no,
am i afraid he'll be a no show,
someone please tell me...
What am i waiting for,
What am i waiting for,
is it for him to ask,
is it for the right cance,
someone please tell me,
What am i waiting for.
he's snuck into my hart,
i know we're young,
but not to young to love,
i've fallen for him,
like a shooting star,
wishing for it to make it so far,
someone please tell me...
What am i waiting for,
What am i waiting for,
is it for him to ask,
is it for the right cance,
someone please tell me,
What am i waiting for.
i don't want to be alone,
i want to share my life with him,
he's snuck into my hart,
we will never be apart,
so someone please tell me...
What am i waiting for,
What am i waiting for,
is it for him to ask,
is it for the right cance,
someone please tell me,
What am i waiting for,
someone please tell me,
What am i waiting for,
what am i waiting for. -
@kiyari yeah thats long. but deep,,cool
@KindKitty im waiting to hear this song in consert..
y'all rit some cool song here -
i just remebered should i... the song i worte should i here it is...
it happends everyday
always in the same way
so i ask myself...
should i just stop trying,
should i just give up,
is it ment to last or is it ment to fall,
thats the biggest question of all.
i thought it could last forever,
but now i think it may be never,
so i ask myself...
should i just stop trying,
should i just give up,
is it ment to last or is it ment to fall,
thats the biggest question of all.
now your begging for my forgivness,
but is it true,
and am i ready to forgive you,
so i ask myself and you...
should i just stop trying,
should i just give up,
is it ment to last or is it ment to fall,
thats the biggest...
should i just stop trying,
should i just give up,
is it ment to last or is it ment to fall,
thats the biggest question of all. -
rock on!..what kind of music do you listen to?
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this is a cd i thought of writing of the songs i've writen heres what i've got so far....
1. you can't break me
2. understand me
3. should i
4. believe
5. holding me back
6. what am i waiting for. -
pop i listen to pop music
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wow id buy that..
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cool iv been kinda cunfused about whats
considered pop.. -
same i still would like to make my cd have more songs on my cd though of wait i just remebered one it was called don't hide yourself behind the makeup. so yeah i've added that to the cd and i still need to write the music for my songs i really need some help with that
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anything i can do to help?
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