Songs that u wrote

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  _HeArTKiLLeR_ Novice

  14 years ago
  Biggest fail of a song, but here goes. (I was depressed)
  
  Live-ME:)
  
  I've been waiting on you now,
  Not a word escapes my mouth.
  Why is everyone laughing at me?
  I'm getting so paranoid I can hardly see.
  I'm tired of living so blind,
  So tired of standing in line,
  I just want everyone to leave,
  Everyone to stop watching me bleed.
  
  (Pre-Chorus)
  Oh and I stop,
  Stop wasting my time.
  I've been dreaming,
  Dreaming of another life.
  And I'm done,
  Done with my life,
  Done with my social suicide.
  
  (Chorus)
  Some days I can't help but shine,
  Some days I lose my mind.
  A bullet in my back & poison in my viens,
  That's all I need to live my dreams.
  Somewhere I belong,
  Somewhere up high & a hand with a knife,
  That's all I need to live my life.
  
  I can feel it crawling,
  Pushing me over the edge,
  And I've been crying,
  Feeling like I'm dying.
  Some days I feel haunted,
  But maybe that's just me.
  I've been so confused for a while,
  Don't be scared,
  Don't believe the lie.
  
  (Pre-Chorus)
  
  (Chorus)
  
  I'm falling,
  I'm calling,
  But nobody answers.
  They're laughing,
  And gagging,
  When will they choke?
  I'm pushing,
  And wishing,
  That someone will come.
  They're snorting,
  Distorting,
  Why am I the joke?
  
  A bullet loaded and a bottle of poison,
  On the roof and a butcherknife,
  Time to jump and end my life.
  
  I feel so alone in this world,
  Just me,
  No boys,
  No girls,
  I feel too insecure,
  Failure's too pure.
  Get a papercut & bleed with me,
  Maybe it'll make you see,
  Life's not what you think,
  It's worse than it seems.
  They're not laughing,
  No cheers,
  They all watch me fall & dissapear.
  
  (Chorus)
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  Alana Novice

  14 years ago
  thats actually a really great song!
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  I like music Novice

  14 years ago
  Wow, a quite liked it! It was full of meaning and emotion... great job!
• somerandomdude Newbie

  14 years ago
  You come into the threshold
  Of another starless night of fear
  You're running from the demons
  That would drag... you down again
  Illusions of the world are spinning
  Out of time and frame and synchronicity
  
  You're so sad, you're such a sad-eyed girl
  You're so sad, in your sub-plot
  
  What is this, what is this
  This mess of my existence is
  All these politics of
  Life and death and relevance
  It's my existence
  
  Another morning it comes running
  Up your bedpost with the wind
  You face yourself just like you always do
  Time and time again, the mortal coil of image
  Inner peace and satisfaction
  
  And so you keep it on the down-low
  Hiding all the secrets that are down below
  And so you keep it on the down-low
  Tell me baby was it worth it all
  
  Oh just take it all
  Make it work and make some sense
  Just take it all, You're my existence
  You're my existence
  
  Wassup Girl, It's my turn,
  You cry and your eyes burn
  What's your life's turn, beautiful girl
  Who all the guys yearn
  What's more to your story
  You still learn
  Despite why your eyes burn
  Soul-Searchin'
  I seek and find the ole merchant
  The high beacon
  Your eyes talk
  When you ain't speakin'
  And at school
  You cry out
  Why does water deep dry out?
  Your getting gyped
  Flat out
  
  
  
  
  I did NOT copy that... maybe... no i didnt...
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  bunniesrule Novice

  14 years ago
  not bad, even though i didnt read it
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  xVaMpIrEx Newbie

  14 years ago
  haha i didnt read it either. its too long
• bieberfever4ever Newbie

  14 years ago
  emmmmm emmmmmmmm emmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i really dont know where to start!!!!emmmmmmm
  
  love:bieberfever4ever
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  I like music Novice

  14 years ago
  It was a very nice song, the lyrics were quite deep and expressive.
• somerandomdude Newbie

  14 years ago
  yay someone likes it... i utterly LOOOOVED the first paragraph...
• somerandomdude Newbie

  14 years ago
  im such a genius...
• somerandomdude Newbie

  14 years ago
  @ heartkiller dude: "Somewhere I belong"--quoted from your song
  
  That sounds... strangely familiar... especially after having been listening to linkin park for so long ;D ...
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  CAPITALLETTERGUY Newbie

  14 years ago
  OK I'M HERE TO POST MY SONG ABOUT FOOD LOL LET ME FIND THE F******** PAPER FIRST LOL
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  CAPITALLETTERGUY Newbie

  14 years ago
  TASTY HOT HAMBURGERS
  SALTY HOT FRENCH FRIES
  BIG GLASSES OF PEPSI
  THIS IS THE BEST PLACE FOR ME
  
  (CHORUS)
  FOOD, FOOD, FOOD!
  GLORIOUS FOOD!
  I LOVE YOUR TASTE, I LOVE YOUR SMELL!
  FOOD, FOOD, FOOD!
  YOUR BEST WHEN YOUR COOKED SO WELL!
  
  I LOVE HOT PORRIDGE IN THE MORNING
  I LOVE WATCHING THE SANDWICHES BE WARMING
  IN MY STAINLESS STEAL MICROWAVE
  I LOVE THE NOODLES WITH THE CHICKEN
  THAT SENSATIONAL NICE WARM FEELING
  
  (CHORUS)
  
  I DON'T KNOW WHAT I'D DO IF I DIDN'T HAVE YOU IN LIFE...
  THEY SAY PERFECTION IS JUST AROUND THE CORNER...
  COULD YOU BE THE ONE FOR ME? MY DEAR LAZAGNA...
  ALL THIS FOOD, FOOD, FOOD...
  
  (CHORUS) X2
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  CAPITALLETTERGUY Newbie

  14 years ago
  LOL I WORKED HARD ON IT BUT IT'S VERY SHORT...
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  I like music Novice

  14 years ago
  OMG LOL That was so funny! Good song Nathan!

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