Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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I was just bored though...
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i think its pretty good. what about in the last chorus when it say:
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nuuu... it submitted b4 i wuz ready...
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ok... its really good! but the last chorus when it says: no night, only day or sumthin like that, you should change it to: theres no other way. in the last verse i think it might give it more meaning... just a thought tho =)
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i'm gonna write a song about somebody leaving... somebody you feel attached to... its gonna be called Losing You
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Thanks a lot, maybe I should change it, and I've read lots of books that talk about the song you plan to write.
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Thank you ILM. Im making a song called Sammy,Oh Sammy
It's about a girl in my class who's a really good friend. -
i cant do this anymore!!! uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuggggghhhhhh!!!!! *bursts into tears* its just.... and..... *covers face in hands and cries harder*
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Finished! Here it goes...Sammy,Oh Sammy:
"You a really good girl,
You're my biggest hero,
Our friendship will really last,
You are the number above zero!"
"Sammy,oh Sammy,you're the girl I like,
Sammy,oh Sammy,you're the one I can trust alot,
You're really sweetier than candy!
Sammy,oh Sammy,Sammy!"
That's the beginning. Im almost finish with it. I know it's crap... -
k i came back i got an hour
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Normally songs are good but that was a bit crap. I'm not b!tchin' I literally thought it was a abit corny and gay.
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Yeah you're right. I would've have got all...rube and blah about that but I agree with you. Thanks for being honest,though.
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Yeah, your welcome, but normally your songs are very nice, so keep trying because I know you can do much better.
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it was nice biance dont worry
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heyy guyz i am starting a new song... now dont get me wrong on this its NOT a love song... its sumthin totally new... its about wanting what you cant have and being grateful for what you DO have... i know it sounds a bit corny but looking back on the first verse i wrote i think it will come through with some potential. i'll be sure to post it as soon as i got the pitches, lyrics, dynamics, and instrumentals down. =)
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