Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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heres my new song called in your eyes. at first it was about love but now i shifted it towards betrayal and a battle between 2 girls for one guy:
you sit down on a bench, not that far away, from where im sitting... you hold his hand, and stare into his eyes... full of wonder...
then i cough awkwardly, you look over and see me... and i seee in your eyes....
in your eyes, i see hatred, intended for me, in your eyes i see hope that him and you are meant to be, in your eyes i see laughter, because you succeed, in your eyes... you hate me....
i cant belive tHings turned out this waaay, no, thats what i thought he saaaid, but now youre together, and im all alone, since when did this happen, are there stories untold? i remember your eyes... and what i saw[no urls]
in your eyes, i see hatred, intended for me, in your eyes, i see hope, that you and him were meant to be, in your eyes, i see laughter, cuz you succeeeed in your eyes i see my reflection, and i know[no urls] i knoooooow!! IN YOUR EYES I SEE HATRED, INTENDED FOR MEEEE IN YOUR EYES I SEE HOPE, THAT YOU AND HIM WERE MEANT TO BE, IN YOUR EYES I SEE LAUGHTER CUZ YOU SUCCEEEEED... IN YOUR EYES.... you haaate meeee.... yoooooou haaaaaaate meeeeeeeeeeeee... buuuuuuut... IN MY EYES, YOU AND HIM ARE GONNA SUCCEEED IN MY EYES, DO I PLEEEAD FOR A MOMENT
I COULD TURN BACK TIME TO WHAT IT USED TO BEEEEE.... in my eyes... youre soooooooooooooo SOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooo faaaake..... just sooooooo faaaaaake.......... to hiiiiiiiiiiiiiim.... [singing and music fades]
so whatdya think guys? its not my best but it took alot of time to figure out the instrumentals: a soft piano... and the lyrics were kind of hard to courdinate with the beat... the pitches were easy... i just need to finalize the piano part and then i can record!! -
Cool song! I love it! Tell Mika I said hi!
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awww thanks biance!!! *piks mika up* hey mika! biance is here! omg! shes licking ur pic again! good girl mika!!! =)
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I like writing songs religiously and politically based, doesn't mean I'm really into that, I just think it's interesting.
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yah.... its easy to write bout that stuff... but emotions tend to bring out my best songs... =) im so excited im going 2 florida! im at the airport now... crap! i gtg!!! our flight is here! talk to u guyz on the other side!!! *gets off of my laptop*
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Eh, I'm not to big on emotions.
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jazzy54 Newbieawsome!!!
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=)
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go to offbeat and then to "soap opera" its really fun me and sapphi making it up right now. =)
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Those rap songs some guy wrote didn't really make sense to me and I don't like rap, but it was pretty good how some of them he just wrote in his head as it went a long, when writing a song or poem, for some that can be very hard, and Alana, I was looking forward to seeing that Your Eyes song and it seems really good, oh, and I'm also traveling, I'm going to Korea in a week for my brother's wedding.
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I hate rap and always will.
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Me too.
Maybe I'll write my eighth song.
This one's for Biance.
It's called Vampire VS. Werewolf
But it's very reaistic, the Werewolf wins. -
cool! when u get there congratualate ur bro for me!! =)
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The moon is full,
I'm walking between the trees,
I thought this was getting dull,
For a moment, but when I hear a sound behind me,
But all I can see is darkness,
And see a creature of the night,
Come to bite me,
I may never see light,
AGAIN!!!!!!!!!
[Chorus]
It's like it
Can't bleed
It's like I'm
Meant to die this way,
It's like there's no
Night, Only day!
And I never thought
I would lose this,
In my thoughts and in my dreams,
It's taken over me!
I may lose this...
I may lose this.
I'm getting lost,
Going through the trees,
But I haven't forgot,
That I must release,
All the power I have to,
Fight this wolf but,
It won't leave me alone,
And when I'm face to face with it,
And almost got bit,
I realize that,
I may not make it through.
WHAT CAN I DOOOOOOOOOOOO??
[Chorus]
It's like it
Can't bleed
It's like I'm
Meant to die this way,
It's like there's no
Night, Only day!
And I never thought
I would lose this,
In my thoughts and in my dreams,
It's taken over me!
I may lose this...
I may lose this.
I'm dying,
I'm running,
I can't stop,
This ain't playing,
I'm ready,
Just one more hit,
And I can do it,
I've handled the critter,
Just one more hit,
I can do it,
OOOOOOHHHHHH OOOOOOOHHHHH
[Chorus]
It's like it
Can't bleed
It's like I'm
Meant to die this way,
It's like there's no
Night, Only day!
And I never thought
I would lose this,
In my thoughts and in my dreams,
It's taken over me!
I may lose this...
I may lose this.
Never thought I would lose this,
In my thoughts and in my dreams,
It's taken over me! -
Bit sh1t though. Eh?
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