try to make me cry contest.
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Thread Topic: try to make me cry contest.
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This is a song. It's called "Little Do You Know" by Alex & Sierra.)
Little do you know
How Im breaking while you fall asleep
Little do you know
Im still haunted by the memory
Little do you know
Im trying to pick myself from piece by piece
Little do you know
I need a little more time
Underneath it all Im held captive by the hole inside
Ive been holding back
For the fear that you might change your mind
Im ready to forgive you but forgetting is a harder fight
Little do you know
I need a little more time
I'll wait, I'll wait
I love you like you've never felt the pain, I'll wait
I promise you dont have to be afraid, I'll wait
The love you see right here stays so lay your head on me
Little do you know
I know youre hurt while I'm sound asleep
Little do you know
All my mistakes are solely drowning me
Little do you know
Im trying to make it better piece by piece
Little do you know
I, I love you till the sun dies
I'll wait, just wait
I love you like I've never felt the pain, just wait
I love you like Ive never been afraid, just wait
Our love we see right here stays so lay your head on me
I'll wait, I'll wait
I love you like you've never felt the pain, I'll wait
I promise you dont have to be afraid, I'll wait
The love you see right here stays so lay your head on me
Lay your head on me
So lay your head on me
'Cause little do you know
I love you till the sun dies -
Wait, it really made you cry?
Damn, I wonder what I could do with that if I were to clean it up... -
Somewhere in Milaor, Camarines Sur, there lived a fourth grader boy who would follow this route to school everyday: He has to cross the rugged plains and cross the dangerous highway where vehicles are recklessly driving to and from.
Once past this highway, the boy would take a short cut, passing by the Church every morning just to say Hi to God, and faithfully say his, "Magandang umaga po" in Bicol dialect. He was faithfully being watched by a Priest who was happy to find innocence so uplifting in the morning, "Kamusta, Andoy? Papasok ka na?"
"Opo padre."he would flash his innocent grin, the priest would be touched. He was so concerned that one day he talked to Andoy.
"From school", he advised "Do not cross the highway, you can pass through the Church and I can accompany you to the other side of the road that way I can see that you are home safe"
"Thank you father"
"Why don't you go home why do you stay in this church right after school?"
"I just want to say 'Hi' to my friend, God," and the priest would leave the boy to spend time beside the altar, talking to himself, but the priest was hiding behind the altar to listen to what this boy has to say to his heavenly FATHER.
"You know my math exam was pretty bad today, but I did not cheat although my seatmate is bullying me for notes. I ate one cracker and drank my water, Itay had a bad season and all I can eat is this cracker.
Thank you for this! I saw a poor kitten who was hungry and I know how he feels so I gave my last cracker to him. funny but I am not that hungry.
Look, this is my last pair of slippers I may have to walk barefoot next week, you see this is about to be broken but it is okay at least I am still going to school....
Some say we will have a hard season this month, some of my classmates have already stopped going to school please help them get to school again, please God?
Oh, you know, Inay hit me again, it is painful, but I know this pain will pass away, at least I still have a mother God, you want to see my bruises? I know you can heal them Here here and oh blood I guess you knew about this one huh?
Please don't be mad at Inay, she is just tired and she worries for the food in our table and my schooling that is why she hits us Oh, I think I am in love there's this pretty girl in my class, her name is Anita do you think she will like me?
Anyway, at least I know you will always like me, I don't have to be anybody just to please you, you are my very best friend! Hey your birthday is two days from now!!! Aren't you excited? I am! Wait till you see, I have a gift for you . but it is a surprise! I hope you will like it! Oooops, I have to go" then he stood up and calls out, "Padre, padre, I am finished talking to my friend you can accompany me to the other side of the road now"
This routine happens everyday. Andoy never fails. Father Agaton shares this every Sunday to the people in his church because he has not seen a very pure faith and trust in God, a very positive look at negative situations.
One Christmas day, Father Agaton was sick so he could not make it in the Church, he was sent to the hospital. The Church was left to 4 manangs who would chant the rosary in 1000 miles per hour, would not smile and would always find fault in what you do, they were also very well versed in cursing if you irritate them! They were kneeling, saying their kilometric rosary when Andoy, coming from his Christmas party,playfully dashed in.
"Hello God! I .." "P--!! (a curse) bata ka!! Alam mo nang may nagdadasal!! Alis!!"
Poor Andoy was so terrified, "Where's Father Agaton? He is supposed to help me cross the street and to be able to cross the street I will have to pass by the back door of this church not only that, I have to greet Jesus. It is His birthday, I have a gift right here" Just as he was about to get the gift out of his shirt, the manang pulled his shirt and threw him out of the church. "Susmaryosep!!! (does the sign of the cross fervently) Alis kang bata ka, kung hindi matatamaan ka!!!
So the boy had no choice but to cross the dangerous side of the road in front of the church. He crossed. A fast moving bus came in.
There was a blind curve. The boy was protecting his gift inside his shirt, so he was not looking. There was so little time. Andoy died on the spot. A lot of people crowded the poor boy, the body of a lifeless young boy
Suddenly, out of nowhere a tall man in a pure white shirt and pants, a face so mild and gentle, but with eyes full of tears He came and carried the boy in His arms. He was crying. Curious bystanders nudged the man in white, and asked,
"Excuse me sir, are you related to this child?
Do you know this child?"
The man in white, His face mourning and in agony, looked up and answered,
"He was my best friend. " was all he said. He took the badly wrapped gift in the bloody chest of the lifeless boy, and placed it near His heart.
He stood up and carried the boy away and they both disappeared in sight.
The crowd was curious
On Christmas Eve, Father Agaton learned of the shocking news. He visited the house, and wanted to verify about the man in white. He consulted the parents of Andoy.
"How did you know that your son died?"
"A man in white brought him here." sobbed the mother. "What did he say?"
The father answered, "He did not say anything. He was mourning. We do not know him and yet he was very lonely about our son's death, as if he knew our son very well. But there was something peaceful and unexplainable about him.
He gave me my son, and then he smiled peacefully. He brushed my son's hair away from his face and kissed him on his forehead, then he whispered something"
"What did he say?"
"He said to my boy" the father began, "Thank you for the gift I will see you soon you will be with me" and the father of the boy continued, "and you know for a while, it felt so wonderful I cried, but I do not know why all I know is I cried tears of joy I could not explain it, Father, but when that man left, something peaceful came over me, I felt a deep sense of love inside I could not explain the joy in my heart, I knew my boy is in heaven now but tell me, Father, who is this man that my son talks to everyday in your church, you should know because you are always there except at the time of his death "Father Agaton suddenly felt the tears welling in his eyes, with trembling knees, he murmurred, "He was talking to no one but .. GOD" -
Papa was always a striking fox. He was fast and had a beautiful coat of fur. He was strong. My favourite thing to do with Papa was to hunt. I loved to chase rabbits and chickens while he stayed a few steps behind, just in case anything happened. I loved how he gleamed with pride whenever I got dinner. I remember once, we were attacked by a moose, and Papa was so proud when I finished it off. We ate well that night.
One day, Papa came home with a little girl fox. I was delighted to have someone else to hunt with. I didn't know where she came from and Papa wouldn't say anything about her Mama. I didn't even know about my own Mama. However, it didn't matter. We were all happy.
...Were happy.
The bitter cold that hung in the air that day wasn't unusual for where we were. It always seemed to be snowy and cold. Our coats were thick, so the wind's sting did not affect us quite as much. My heart pounded as I leaped across the snoe and pounced on a cream coloured rabbit. My teeth tore into it's neck. Sissy also jumped on the rodent as Papa slowly trotted up to us and took a bite out of it.
Papa glanced our way and gave us a nod, and then proceeded to feast. Sissy and I followed suit. Our stomachs were filled slowly. When we finished, Papa began to lay down. He looked tired. Sissy and I ran around playfully as we always did.
Suddenly, Papa stood up and began to walk. We followed. It was all well until Papa stiffened and began to walk quickly. I glanced around. Through a curtainof snowflakes, I could see a moose. It's back was turned to us. I gave Sissy a look of worry as we continued on our path.
We didn't make it.
The large feet of the moose quickly knocked Papa to the ground as it gave out a mighty roar. Papa howled in reply and ran. I began to follow him when I realized Sissy was clawing at the beast. I whimpered and returned to help her. The foot of the moose knocked me across the ground as another leg crashed down on top of my sister, blood everywhere. I cried out in distress. Papa suddenly dove out of nowhere and attacked the beast. The brief hope that flickered in my eyes was shattered when Papa was again knocked to the ground, lifeless. I cried out and fell to the icy ground, awaiting my death. To my surprise, the moose left me alone. Quietly and bluntly, I was left in the ruins of my family. My heart shattered into pieces at the sight of blood and the realization I would never see them again. A terrible pain struck my chest as I gave a strained howl into the sbowy sky. -
I don't want to make you cry, Dawson. 0.0
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"Bright"
I think the universe is on my side
Heaven and Earth have finally aligned
Days are good and that's the way it should be
You sprinkle star dust on my pillow case
It's like a moonbeam brushed across my face
Nights are good and that's the way it should be
You make me sing oh, la, la, La
You make a girl go oh oh
I'm in love, love
Did you see that shooting star tonight?
Were you dazzled by the same constellation?
Did you and Jupiter conspire to get me?
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
'Cause now I'm shining bright, so bright
Bright, so bright
And I see colors in a different way
You make what doesn't matter fade to grey
Life is good and that's the way it should be
You make me sing oh, la, la, la
You make a girl go oh oh
I'm in love, love
Did you see that shooting star tonight?
Were you dazzled by the same constellation?
Did you and Jupiter conspire to get me?
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
'Cause now I'm shining bright (oh) so bright
And I get lost (oh) in your eyes
Did you see that shooting star tonight?
Were you dazzled by the same constellation?
Did you and Jupiter conspire to get me?
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
I think you and the Moon and Neptune got it right
'Cause now I'm shining bright, so bright
Bright, so bright
Bright, so bright
And I get lost in your eyes tonight -
The gates creaked open with the faintest blow of wind and she walked up the cracked steps of the abonded fortress. The wind blowed debris and debree from the storm across the yard.
the leaves blowed throught his hair as he looked up toward the broken home. He shook his head and stepped away. A girl looked through the window and watched him walk away and a tear fell down her cheek. She wiped it away as she wrote a letter that would efffect everything. She walked down the cracked steps and down the sidewalk down to Hangman's Cove, tears streaming down her face. She climbed the tree and looked at the rope that was placed there. She looked up and smiled. "If this happens know that I love you." she murmured as she saw someone run toward her.
The boy was running toward Hangmans cove with all of his might. He didn't know why, just instinct. He saw her on top of one of the branches. He motioned her down and she started to climb down. She rushed toward him with her arms open and tears streaming down her face with the letter clenched in her hand. "I love you." she said. -
The following is a video recorded on a camera recovered at the scene of 9/11.
Girl:Are you seeing this?*skips over to subway train* It's almost empty!
Boy(holding camera): You goofball.
*video skips*
Girl: Something today feels weird.
Boy(pointing camera so he is shown also):C'mon Emily, what could go wrong? It's a trip to the city!
*video shows the world trade centers over building*
Girl:Let's visit the world trade centers!
*video skips*
Boy: And we are at the world trade centers, look how high we are, Emily!*pounts camera out window*
Girl: Hey, look at that plane!
*video skips*
*screaming*
Girl: Jason, it's gonna crash!
*plane hits building, fire begins*
Girl(screaming):Jason!
Boy(yelling): Emily!
*video skips*
*Girl is shown breifly triping down burning stairs*
*only audio heard*
Girl:*screams*
*video skips*
*the sky is shown, smoke filled, somebody is crying*
*video ends*
This video documents the deaths of Emily Vahgn and Jason Baker, age 22 and 23. -
Beverlyreagan NoviceShe had to go.
They were bith sadded with the departure
Dont leave! He whispered
She said as all things are part of life all things must come a end.
She had cancer and she only had two months to live
She has always wanted to see the world so she was spending
Her last months alone in the world.
He wanted to go but she said she must go alone.
He could not live without her.
She said she would write she would call.
She rarely if ever did.
She found another life another love.
She moved on in her short time she found a life.
The two months passed so slow but so quicky.
He got the letter of when she died.
He finished his week of work went home and poured himself a drink.
He turned on the radio to thier fav song.
The tears were slowly falling as he drank his pain away.
Many years passed of drinking and sorrow.
One night he went home drank an entire bottle.
He then wrote a note and set it on his pillow.
He then took his other pillow and his gun.
They found him days later.
They only found him because the neighbors smelled him.
Nobody was his friend nobody called.
The police found his note of suicide and put it in a bag.
And the note said:
All things are part of life and all things must come to a end.
I am part of life.
It was her turn and now it is mine. -
Beverlyreagan NoviceHow is that?
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scarlet4ever NewbieBeverly, that was really sad, nice too.
Redrose, your story made me cry, really. -
Beverlyreagan NoviceThank you i know about sad love lol i am only 12 i read alot of books and watch alot of movies
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StephenRockers16 NoviceGirl: I'm sorry, but I slept with your friend. Boy: heh, heh, please tell me your kidding? Girl: nope I just used you to get on your good side. Boy: (smile fades) girl: hah hah, your small member made me laugh. Boy: friend: what, that's an honest lie, she's trying to break up with you, dude, I would never lie girl: crap! Friend: and I'm never, ever going out with you!
I came up with this JUST now. -
Beverlyreagan NovicePuppet i think yours was sad! So sad!! Its really sad
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Beverlyreagan NoviceD_H did i make you cry?
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