Teenage Chronicle Part 17 | Comments

Mean submit button messed up my comment DX anyway, I've been a complete fan of Josh throughout the whole series, Patch was awesome the first time his character was introduced and Jake better be okay O.O I would of loved to go on a walk *or fly XD with Patch too which was funny when I saw it in the answers XD And then before I even got the pizza I was drooling over Josh XDD btw was it just an accident that pizza and make out scene were in the same paragraph or was that a coincidence? XDD

And Firey_Soul you might need a chill pill XDD but I agree Part 18 might work even better ^.^ Awesome quiz :D

Well well well, I'm starting to think that Josh is going to be very torn now isn't he. Aw well, unlike everyone else I'm happy Katherine is back. I've wanted to meet her since the whole misunderstanding thing happened just to figure out the final peice to the puzzle. Oh and as for the Romance or Adventure question, I'm going with Adventure. Now, as much as I love romance I'm more into the atmospheare of what's going on with the plot. I'm not saying I don't like the romance, it's great, but I feel as if we need to really dive into the questions that don't have answers. As one of the dedicated fans, I think we've waited long enough to see some more serious situations from the story. I'm talking life or death here, intense, gratifying, heart stopping, drama and grave decisions. I believe that this story should be taken to the next level. I mean this has adventure, mystery, drama, and romance!!! We need to turn up intense dial to 100%, all the genres and details will harmonize together to create something that is sure to have all of us STILL wanting more. Anyways, I'm going to talk about the Fallen for a bit. I've never really cared for Patch or Jack in the intimate way, but the fallen is another mystery we need solving. Actually I could write an essay on all the questions that we need to answer. But I digres, the fallen are angels who I believed screwed up and have been sent to earth right? Okay so why did the society allow Jack and Patch to be located close together if (for whatever reason) they are supposed to be apart? I'm not being critical here but that is a valid question, I dunno a screw up in the system? Erika? The society doesn't exist? I know that wouldn't be answered right away, but I'm still curious on how these people are supposed to be apart yet they keep finding each other. Oh well, I know it'll all get answered. Oh and I did like the music additions that was a nice touch! Well that's all I got, PART 18 BABY!!! CAN'T WAIT

No freaking way, Katherine? KATHERINE? She better not be another faker that Erika sent over to mess with our minds -.- 3 guys comments I have to make: LOL Alex X3, I wonder what's up with Patch..., why has Josh not been on my list of guys? XP

Romance and action but maybe a little more romance than action... no particular reason why XD though you write both equally well

Would have never thought that Katherine would come into this... Well, she better not talk, touch, or even look in Josh's direction! I also love Patch though!! Maybe add more scenes with him? :P ;) Awesome part.. Next part plz.

Wow you are so good at cliffhangers:') @TheRecklessBam how many parts are you going to make of this? Please make the next part soon before I go insane! (so sorry I keep asking I'm a little impatient XD)

Katherine + Josh + me = me keeping Katherine away from Josh so he won't fall in love w/her again.

I just had a full on makeout session w/ Josh, but the stupid pizza just HAD to be done, huh? Now Kathy...my Josh. Katherine no have my Josh!

What!!!! Why?!?! How!?!! When?!?!?! All I am going to say is 'you better make the next part soon' I think I will stop writing before I go crazy!! (I might already be crazy) Jake.....Yep he is mine!! But there is also Patch, but when when it comes to Patch I can see girls coming after me saying that they claimed Patch. So I think I like Jake!!!!

I KNEW IT BUT U ALL PEOPLE DIDNT BELIEVE ME!!! THIS AUTHER IS TRYING TO KILL ME!!! X.X oh my gosh beccy..... BAM BAM BAM BUMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!! ! Seriously, now I'm sure u will have a dramatic dream tonight.... Hmmmmmm *winks* don't worry about me love, I'll just have to wait and see.... TEEEHEE!!! *grins* so how'd I'd do in that accent??!!! Never mind , soooo, if Katherine is there so it's either 3 things!! 1: ERIKA IS DOING TRICKS WITH OUR MINDS AND BRANG HER BACK TO LIFE OR WHAT HAPPENED TO MAX!!! 2: THIS MAIN CHARACTER IS GOING PHYCO!!!! 3: KATHERINE IS ALIVE!!!

HOLY FREAKIN' FIRETRUCK!!!!!!!!! Is it alright if I just slam the door in Katherine's face? Josh is MINE!!!!!!!! MINE MINE MINE M-I-N-E MINEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! !! Got it, Katherine? After that make out thing, it reminded me of how much I love Josh. Just marry me already, k? But then there's Patch too... >.> I claim them both. You are freaking epic, part 18 plz!!!!!

Omgeeeeeeeee! Kathrine's here? This should e interesting....I'm still mostly team Patch, kinda Jack. Oh, BTW I want both and to freaking kiiiiiillllllll Ericka!

WTF !? How can you just end it there? I swear Voldermort's gonna kill you! Voldermort was actually enjoying it! LOL. Anyway, it's kinda interesting that Jack is a fallen angel but my husband, Patch is acting weird. I totally loved that kiss with Josh but what the hell is Katherine doing here? Ahhh..Josh and I won't have time for each other anymore. I wanna email you my views (:

Ohhhhh yea!!! I would like both romance and action please

Since the first

@TheReclessBam okaiii, I love your quizzes! You should deffo write a book on this story :)

MY HUSBAND NAME IS PATCH! >:) WE ARE MARRIED AND WE MADE THE UNBREAKABLE VOW (;

I did mention this WAYYYYY before but it still needs to be heard ! xD

My comment was erased. Imma just email you!