Ready or Not p.1 | Comments

Sounds promising. I will definitly read the next part :)

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Its interesting. I'm ready for part2.

This seems pretty interesting. I'll wait for the next part to come out :)

fjhkh I can't wait to see what happens next! It's hard to get a story started, but I think you did wonderfully! :D

Pretty good so far! I'm exited to see what happens I the story! Part 2! :)

Pretty good start.Kidnapping's a little clich,but thats okay.Is this gonna be fantasy or drama?

loved it hurry up and make part 2