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My OC is Emberclaw (hence my name). Ember is a stocky, strong calico she-cat, with cream-gold eyes. Well, eye. I'll get to that later. While on a midnight walk with her rouge mother, she was swept up by an owl. When flying above the mountains, another owl tried to take her from the first one's talons, resulting in a talon to er face that left the entire left side (eye, ear, part of the nose) disfigured. She was dropped by the combating owls, falling to the ground. She would have bled out, if not found by Sootmaw, a warrior of Dawnclan. Dawnclan is the remnants of the half of the tribe that stayed behind in the dawn of the clans series. They accepted her in, despite having a missing left eye and torn ear. Also a couple scars of her back, from the talons. She's humorous, warm and kind, but she can be extremely stubborn and even aggressive when mad. Her mentor as an apprentice was Aquatuft. She has an amazing sense of touch and surprisingly good smell. She is good at hunting burrowing prey.

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My OC is a Loner who left her clan. Her apprentice name was Freepaw, but she changed it to Tally when she left. She has a dark brown pelt with a black stripe down her back, a white crescent on her head, white toes, and black socks. She was mated to an abusive Shadow clan cat. He took their kit to Shadowclan where it died. She later mated with a loner known as Skip. They have two kits. They live in an abandoned two leg nest. Her personality is very gentle and calm. She has a lot of fears and is very protective of her kits til they left to join the clans.

Any advice on making her a better character?

My OC is called Lightningblaze. He is born in the future when the clans have a less flawed society (a council, more roles etc.). He takes down a Windclan cat called Cinderstorm who wants to revert the clans to the old ways because Starclan is covering the stars (it's actually pollution). He used to be called Littlekit, as his mother died giving birth to him and his sister and she named his sister (Curlpuddle), but died before she could name him. His father, Stormhead, refused to name him, he was determined that Littlekit's mother Fernstripe would send a sign to what his name would be. Everyone teased him for it until he got lost sneaking out of camp in a storm as a kit. He got struck by Lightning and died, but was sent back to life by his mother, who said that the Clans needed him, much to the objections of Firestar. He gets his new name, Lightningkit. He doesn't have powers, but he does have a neutral side effect from being hit by lightning and being brought back to life. He randomly spasms and lightning flickers out of his claws. He has hurt several of his Clanmates with this, but can also harness it in battle.

He also ends up taking down the dark forest itself (not cats from it, but the immortal manifestiation of the dark forest itself).

He has a mate from Windclan (Aurburntail), who joined Thunderclan to be with Lightningblaze and to get away from Cinderstorm. In the future they have a better warrior code, that among many improvements, states that if you are in love with a cat from a different Clan, you must join the same Clan one way or another.

That's all.

My OC is Featherpaw! They are a she-cat but is bisexual and/or pansexual. She has a tan pelt but also has tan and brown patterns. She is a very fluffy she, but also has a blind eye. She is in Riverclan, but was previously a loner from when her mother took her away from her birthclan, Thunderclan. She has a mentor called Rosefall, the deputy of Riverclan, and two bestfriends named Deadpaw and Sheeppaw. She has had strange dreams, but no prochecys yet. She is 7 moons and has not met her family/kin before except her mother, Berryleaf, who is now dead. Her backstory is... When Featherpaw was just a kit, she was taken by her mother to go live life as a loner. She met two she-cats, Apple and Slipper. They grew up together for a couple moons, but one day, Feather went missing. Where did she go? Well, her mother was an elder now, and she had taken Feather to Riverclan. In Riverclan, she met Deadkit and Sheepkit. They became friends quickly, and became apps together. There is where I left it off ( I know, I know -_- ). I hope to continue this role play later!

My oc is Mercuryvine. He's a white tom with gray and ginger striped spots, He has heterochromia,one eye blue and one yellow. He has a scar over his right eye,making that eye slightly damaged. Personality: He's relatively chill,though will be extremely sarcastic and sassy if he feels like it lmao. Uhh,idk he's a relatively new oc so I haven't thought about this alot.. uh..His lore ig; Mercurykit was born to Batfang(mom) and Quickspots(dad) He was later apprenticed to Silverecho,who later died of a severely infected wound. He was given his warrior name Mercuryvine blah blah blah..all basic stuff but uhh yep! My goofy lil fella

My OC is Snake tail,A brown tomorrow with A torn ear, and one to Manny snake-bites.When he was a kit, He wandered too far off of Wc territory and a adder bit him in the leg too many times, so it had to get Amputated. He was in the med den for 5 moons, and when he finally became an app, he was almost a full warrior. His Clan mates bullied him, but when he was a warrior in a quarter-moon, He was made deputy, then leader.

Name- Ravenfur
Clan- Windclan
Gender- She-cat

Pelt color- Black with dark grey specks along her torso and head.

Eye color- Green
Rank- Warrior
Traits- Kind, Caring, Loving, And Agile

Flaws- Feisty, Independent, Unsure of herself, And just a bit of anxiety.

Extra- She wears a bandanna. (Bandanna has a big part in backstory)

Backstory: Raven and her mate, Spider, lived together in the barn. (Forest territory btw) They've lived there for quite some time, and they were considering having kits. Of course, there were other cats in the barn, and they were all friends. Spider wore a tan bandanna, which Raven loved. He had said the bandanna was his mother's who passed due to a fox attack a long time ago. One day, when it was getting pretty late, Raven and Spider went to sleep. Raven was exhausted, since by now, she was pregnant with Spider's kits. Suddenly, there was a loud bang and the sound of a strange snarl. Spider lifted his head, his ears perked, his gaze slitting at the doorway. He glanced at Raven, who was sound asleep. He didn't wake her, just hopped off the nest on top of the crate, and squinted his eyes. He saw a figure, then as it got closer, he realized it was a fox... A fox! "FOX!" He shouted, and everyone was up immediately. Raven's heart stopped as she looked up with her weary gaze to see two foxes snarling at the doorway. The largest one darted quickly toward one of the barn cats, a good friend of theirs. She couldn't see what happened to him, she was up and off the crate, beside Spider. Spider looked at her with worry, his ears flat. The foxes were attacking the other cats already. "Raven, I need you to go. Run, just run." He put his head against her's. "But Spider, this is our home, I must fight for it!" "I can't let our kits die." He mewed softly. A fox suddenly lifted his head up. The smell of blood filled the barn. The fox looked over to Spider and Raven, licking his bloody lips, he darted toward them. The fox was already pouncing o

My OC is named Spruce'Sprawl. He's a brown tabby with yellow eyes, and is pretty beat up. He's an elder warrior who refuses to retire, no matter how old he is. He adopted a kit named Cloud'Kit who ran out into the Thunder Path while Spruce was hunting and got hit by a car. No powers, no prophecies, nothing special besides being a respected warrior. He is 59% original!

My Oc is a half blind ginger cat named Cloudpaw.She is a med app who's sweet,but an be serious at times,and she loves rain and flowers.She has a crush on the leader's son in Tc,well she is the deps own daughter,and well her dead mother was a Loner,most other cats accept her for who she is.Her warrior name will be Cloudclaw,and she will be the leaders mate,and the dep when she is older.

My OCs name is currently magpie! (It changed)

He is part of a colony in the city, near carrionplace, and used to be a rouge named Damien. He was taken in by a black tabby named raven, who was later overtaken by a bengal cat named eagle who could summon eagles to do his bidding. Magpie worked as a hunter, growing especially skilled as a rat fighter. Eventually he was caught feeding some old friends of his some rats, and was sent away for some game. Where eagle chased you down with his pets and if you were caught you were either forced to do his bidding or killed. He was found again by eagle and made into a spy, to infiltrate the clans and figure out how to kill the leader and deputy of one so they can have more territory. He is a young Tom, at 20 moons old, and is a black and white with blue eyes. Resembling a magpie.

Quote: 'magpie had never been a good runner, and his flanks heaved as he pelted through the city. A peircing whistle sounded behind him and he was suddenly swinging like a pendelum, caught by his sides and hovering in the air, eye level with a bengal Tom, with his amber eyes half closed. A twisted grin spread across his face. "Heh." He purred. "Found you." '

My oc is named Moonstar/Moonwisp, a blue-grey she-cat with darker spots(with stripes in them), whitebelly and muzzle fur, fluffy fur, sky-blue eyes, and strong compassion and leadership!

She was origionally from thunderclan, but was bullied and shamed because her mother ran away to be a kittypet shortly after her birth. she eventually broke away from the clam ecause no amount of pleading could help her. she had 3 close friends in her clan as well as a few scattered around other ones. they run away with her,(in their apprentice years, being scatterbrained teens filled with hormones) and form a new "clan" farther away from all the clans, nearby the mountain cats territory. after 3 years of refuging, scouting, and overall peace, they build up a strong and thriving clan filled with outcasts and rouges, kittypets and loners, named Moonclan (following the tradition of the naming after the first leader) in a forested area nearby the mountain, with a small clearing with a pond and small creek. she was chosen as the leader because of all her friends, they saw her as the center of the group, the one holding them together.

Cold'Throat, a grey pelted WindClan Tom with dull blue eyes. His pelt is a split between grey and white. His feet being completely grey with white socks. Cold'Throat is 28 moons old.

As a kit, he was neglected from his father, Robin'Prowl. But his mother, Ash'Tongue, loved him dearly. Soon, a fire was set to WindClan, he was dragged out from the fire- but his parents weren't so lucky. After that, the clan had set on a journey to find a new camp, in that while, he was adopted by a warrior, Grey'Feather, a albino she with a grey feather upon her ear. WindClan found the new camp, and settled there. He was raised by Grey'Feather. At App age, his mentor was Little'Lion. A tall yellow furred Tom with amber eyes. Little'Lion was like the father Cold never had. At his warrior ceremony, he was named Cold'Throat for his cold and deep voice. When Cold was 21 moons old, Grey'Feather died from a severe WhiteCough that turned to the fatal BlackCough.

Cold'Throat is the cat you would go to for mental help, emotional help, or just help with the patrol! He is the loner of the clan, always off in the clan, either helping the elders, or giving stories to kits that are daring enough to hear his tales.

My OC is LeapordWind-

She is a cat from the Tribe of Fallen Snow. She is very fierce and stubborn and always has been loyal. She has a mate who was formally a rogue but then joined. LeapordWind lost a lot of family due to a sickness that spread from a cat that had traveled. Sadly, her mate died. She had to leave with her Tribe to find somewhere safer. They lived near another Tribe called the Tribe of The Running Stream. She and her best friend became mates after he confessed, saying he had always wanted to be with her but was too late when she had her mate. They soon after became mates but she died a little after giving birth due to bears.

My OC is Mist paw, a grey and white she-cat that has blue eyes. She is very adventurous and mischievous and has a lot of friends in her clan (Skyclan). When she grows up she becomes a leader of sky clan and a good one!

Backstory: her backstory was normal, she was born to her two parents: Hybrid fur and Grey flower, she trained as an apprentice and got close to a cat called Pine paw, who later became Pine heart. They became mates after Mist paw became Mist star, (Her warrior name was Mist Wish).

They had one kit: Wish kit, a grey and white she-kit with green eyes.

(Pine heart was a siamese with green eyes) Sorry if this is too long ;-;

My OC's name is Marshcloud. She is cream-furred with brown points and amber eyes, a warrior of ThunderClan. Her suffix came from her daydreamer personality (head always in the clouds). As an apprentice, Marshpaw was slightly jealous of her sister Sunnypaw, who had good looks and a bright smile- an all-around perfect cat from the perspective of most of her Clanmates. 2 toms around Marshpaw's age had crushes on Sunnypaw- Bladepaw and Goldpaw. Unfortunately, they both knew this and constantly got into arguments. Sunnypaw was a troublemaker and favoured Bladepaw because he was similar. They would throw pebbles at the dens every night and sneak back in. Most times Bladepaw got caught solely but was too head-over-heels for Sunnypaw to give her away. Marshpaw knew and this angered her, along with the fact that Goldpaw was becoming very self-conscious. One day Goldpaw and Bladepaw got into a a real, physical fight. Marshpaw was forced to watch this drama from the sidelines, too afraid to speak up. That night, Sunnypaw said she was going to explore outside of Clan territory. Marshpaw was mad as well as tired and refused, not bothering to stop her sister. That night, Sunnypaw went missing. After a half-moon of searching for the lost apprentice, the Clan gave up and moved on from Sunnypaw, almost forgetting her. This might have seemed like a dream come true for a younger Marshpaw, but she started to fill herself with guilt, as if everything was her fault and she could have prevented the situation. Worse, Marshpaw started to fill in Sunnypaw's shoes as the "popular one." It felt fake.

Marshpaw became Marshcloud along with the other apprentices. She "tried" to train an apprentice in the future even though she woul always start daydreaming. She eventually falls in love with the ShadowClan warrior Splinterclaw and they raise an abandoned kit named Lucky together. They would later learn this was the daughter of Sunnypaw, still alive somewhere out in the wild, living with her mate G

My OC's name is RabbitFeet. She is a athletic, small, white she-cat with brown and grey markings wich make her about invisible on the heath where she lives. She is warrior of the Windclan who got promoted to deputy. She is brave, a good hunter, but not so social. Her partner is SnakeBite (another one of my OC's).

My oc is Rapture'fang, she's currently 15 moons old and is a moonspeaker, when she dies her role is a high-moonspeaker, she's high in medical knowledge, she has an interesting personality falling under the depends what cat she's talking to = her personality, she's a proud member of rift clan.

Key: moonpaw - medicine cat app
Moonspeaker - medicine cat

High-moon speaker - highest level medicine cat

The moons - star clan
Rift clan - custom clan

My oc is Feathersong.

She is a white tabby she-cat with gray patches. She has a pale pink nose, inner ears, and belly. She has emerald green eyes. Her tail is a grey, fluffy tail. Her fur is as soft as a cloud. Also her ears are grey too.

Feathersong is kind, smart, and helpful. But she is also stubborn, and talks a little too much. She only talks, though, to a few cats that she is close with. She loves kits.

Feathersong was born in ThunderClan to Petaltail, a small brown she-cat, and an unknown father. Because of this, she wasn't treated well. But one day, soon after she became Featherpaw, the ThunderClan leader, Eaglestar, came to her. He told her that her father was Reedfeather, a RiverClan warrior, and asked if she would like to move to RiverClan. Featherpaw thought that it would be like a fresh start, and she agreed.

In RiverClan, her father apologized to her. He told her a forbidden relationship was hard, and that she could trust him with anything. She trained hard, and became Feathersong. Then, she met a tom named Duskleap, a pure black tom with bright blue eyes. From there on, she hung out with him a lot. They soon became mates and had 2 kits: crow kit, a white she-cat with black spots, and Mosskit, a brown tabby she-kit. With time, they became Crowspot and Mossflame. And her life is just normal from there. Except that she becmes deputy after killing 2 badgers single-pawed. Petaltail and Crowspot died because of the badgers.

His name is Stonepelt, he was born to Thunderclan but when his mother died in a fight with a Windclan warrior (because his mother was trying to get his sister Honeykit (now Honeyclaw) to pass across the thunderpath so the mother knew if it was safe or not since none of them knew what the thunderpath was, but the windclan warrior saw as she left the moonstone with her leader, and was like "dont send ur kids across that" and they fought) but was adopted by the leader of Shadowclan, Moonstar, with his sisters Honeyclaw and his other sisters Slateheart and Chipfur (as in chipped stones). He was born half-blind which made him become a medicine cat instead because his mentor Wolfstripe gave up since he (Wolfstripe) wasn't used to teaching half-blind cats (despite being the default mentor for Shadowclan when he wasn't busy with another apprentice). Stonepelt struggles a bit with concentrating and locating wounds but uses smells to get around the latter (he hasn't figured out how to deal with the former yet lol)

TLDR: Stonefur is a half-blind medicine cat who was adopted by a Shadowclan leader because his mother was stupid and a Windclan warrior accidentally killed her for it

My OCs name is Craneswallow. Shes a black she-cat with a tan tortoiseshall patch in the middle of her back. Her ears, muzzle and left eye also have these tan patches. Craneswallow became WindClans medicine cat and took on an apprentice, Duskpaw (later, Duskflower.) She met, and later fell in love with, a ThunderClan warrior named Redfern (a reddish-brown tabby tom). When their relationship was exposed, Craneswallow faced banishment from WindClan. However, Redfern persuaded ThunderClans leader to grant Craneswallow sanctuary. Craneswallow and Redfern faced suspicion and hostility at first, but they stayed together through it all. When Craneswallow was given the chance to return to WindClan and her medicine cat duties at a Gathering, Craneswallow refused in front of everyone, saying a life with Redfern was all she wanted. Unfortunately Craneswallow and Redfern were unable to have kits due to a miscarriage early on, but they didnt mind- at least they had eachother!

The end! I hope you enjoyed! Sorry it was long

Your OC is 74% percent original 74%

Very good job, you have a very good OC that has good originality, but everything can be improved! You did a good job but still remember that you can work on aspects of your character.

My actual OC is Silentsong, the skilled warrior, who is definitely not ok with kits dying even if they aren't his or even his clan's (Beetleclan), definitely a bit edgy with his backstory but other than that he is normal.