How Original Is Your Warrior Cats OC? | Comments, Page 13

Eh. Not a very good OC to be honest. This is just my opinion, but I'm sure others would say the same thing in a different way, so I'm here to help you.

Dreamwalker, while a very cool name, is very overused. I've seen this name on several cats and think about it.

Leader: Bluestar
Deputy: Redtail
Med.Cat: Spottedleaf

Warriors: Longtail, Darkstripe, Lionheart, Dreamwalker, Tigerclaw.

What stands out? I'm sure you thought "Dreamwalker" and while this may be a good thing in your head, a name that stands out a lot from the others is a good indicator of a Mary Sue/Gary Stu.

Also, there should be a backstory. What was this cat's past? How does it effect his everyday life and personality traits? If he has a prophecy, maybe tell us more about it. He has an evil twin? Try saying what he/she does to be evil, and also maybe stay away from the term 'evil twin' and switch to something like (Assuming it is a male figure, maybe not) wicked brother. Stay away from giving cats powers. There is only three cats in the entire warriors universe with magic, and we should probably keep it that way in ours.

And my last tip: GRAMMAR! Add periods, commas, capital letters so that you comment is more appealing! I forgot to breathe while reading this. Whew! That's all my tips for now, hopefully someone reads this.

(In that last part I mean your comment, not you comment lol. Sorry about that.)

You're not dumb. Warrior Cats is a book series mostly focused around following wild cats and their lives in Clans. There are four main clans (Thunderclan, Riverclan, Shadowclan, and Windclan). It's hard to explain everything considering there are like seven different series with six books in each, not counting the sidestories (called supereditions or novellas) there are easily 20+ of those. It's a whole world.

ah didn't realize there was a url restriction mb. i'll just post the info rq.

< cw : gore, animal cruelty >
spiderhead - cage the elephant
pork soda - glass animals
homunculus - trickle
cricket
stray cat
he / they

very quiet, but tends to act very upbeat and loud when around others. selectively mute. they have ocd and alot of anxiety. very insecure about their face. collects human trinkets, rocks, bones, and feathers. very agile and flexible. doesn't like to fight, but if needed they will

tall and lanky, they're mostly skin and bones. has soft and downy pale cream / golden tabby fur. tail is kinked and their left paw leaves them with a limp. right eye is gouged out, but bandages or plants/leaves can cover it, left eye is a hazel / green

leaves are not optional, but they can be changed to any plant!

shortened backstory

cricket's mother was a beautiful tortie feral that raised cricket and their 2 siblings near a small human house in the middle of spring. when cricket and their siblings were about 5 months old, one of the older kits went missing. they were found later in the woods brutally battered and mangled with a young human standing over them, blood on her hands. A few days later, cricket's mother was then caught by a trap from another human, and never came back. cricket and their one remaining sibling decided to leave their home, but the young human came back. it came from behind the bush and grabbed cricket by the tail, then the scruff and drove a pocket knife in their eye and pulling it out. as cricket was struggling they caught their siblings gaze and told them to run as their vision swam and heart hammered. cricket's claws tore through the humans skin in an effort to get away, and when it finally let go, they ran and ran. only when there was no trace of humans did they stop. out of breath and vision blurry they fell to the dead grass.

if you wanna see his design my toyhou.se is @roadkiIII

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