Teenage Chronicle Part 16 | Comments

Question: Who do you think the creepy text message is from?

Let me think, who wants to find me, kill me, and hurt all my friends. Erika. Anyways, I'm kind of bummed Jake is dying. He was a nice guy and I find it very creative that Josh is finally starting to realize how important Jake is, yet he only figures this out when his oldest friend is slipping away from him. I wonder what my "family" will be like. I was actually kind of excited to see how that would go with all of those guys. If it were my parents, they wouldn't leave me alone for three seconds with all those guys. So hopefully we'll either get drama from that setup, or hilarious antics. I vote antics, because we only have Alex, Ezra, and occasionally Patch for those moments. Let's bring in the family and have a whole brady bunch thing going on! Moving on, I want to point out that when I first saw this I was studying my science for a test. So I used all my strength to study FIRST before taking the quiz (but my god that was torture). I'm having a busy week too, so I know what that's like, test here, english report here, extra credit there. It's tough, but it all passes... then you don't have enough to do. You're bored all the time, and you just lie around on the couch, you try to watch a movie but you can't decide which one. I don't know what's worse, being too busy or too bored. Now that's a question I can't answer. Oh I'm getting off topic again, I just wanted to point out that I am an extremely good packer. I do lots of travelling so I can pack anything into any suit case. Seriously, I wouldn't need Josh to help me, he'd need me to help him pack. Oh speaking of Josh, before Calisto came into the picture I liked Josh a lot. He's charming and flirty. But then Calisto came and... well let's just say the Josh fans can have him. TEAM CALISTO!!! I hope we get at least a minute alone next time. Well I can't wait for the next one, have a good busy week! (as much as you possibly can based on the circumstance

I thought that they might know each other because they were both fallen angels! :O I was only 39% sure though and usually I like to be at least 80% sure before I say something XP I'm about 8% sure on this, but I'll go out on a limb and say that I think the text was from a fallen angel enemy, someone who both Patch and Jack know.

It will be interesting to see "my" family, especially how they'll react to a carload of guys :P Finally, Jake. I'm not a Jake fan, but, I know that it will not be the same if he dies. He can't possibly die! The world would fall to mobs of angry Jake fans and and and... I just can't imagine this story without each and every one of these guys O.o

The text message is from the unnamable dude in the dream if I have my series' straight XDD btw forget Jack he has no comparison to the awesomeness of Patch and no where near as cool and different a name. And he's being mean to Patch. Pwease don't kill Jake ); if Jake dies and Jack doesn't then I might have to stop reading

@singin234

Ha, that made me laugh too. I don't want Jake to die, for three reasons. One, because he's a nice guy. Two, because Erika would rub it in my face non stop. Three, I need him for my master plan I was working on (while packing my things with Josh) If you're interested in knowing what exactly the plan is, I'm not quite finished yet. I can tell you it will involve ninja suits, wireless security hacking, and lots, and lots, of presicion. It's a delicate mission, I still need to work on the kinks.

creepy text message: "I will find you." Has to be Erika, right?

Oh, and is there another shirtless hot guys scene?! I would so love that..

Ron(my HP husband): *eyes bug out* WHAT?!
me: nothing, honny, just joking around

Ron: *stares at me for two minutes* *goes back to office* whatever

me: I love you, Ron!

Hmmm the text could be from calisto's dad, ericka, or maybe its not meant to be creepy. Maybe it's from Tyler. Where is he by the way? I had a feeling Jack was a fallen angel right when I found out he knew Patch! Great part, great series as always!!! ; ) Sincerely, Jinx

Hmmm the text could be from calisto's dad, ericka, or maybe its not meant to be creepy. Maybe it's from Tyler. Where is he by the way? I had a feeling Jack was a fallen angel right when I found out he knew Patch! Great part, great series as always!!! ; ) Sincerely, Jinx

I can't be mad at you with that freakin awesome cliffhanger, guess now u notice that fallen angels guys are for me bt Jack vs Patch *goosebumps* that be freakin awesome, Jakey Wakey pleasse :'[

Brilliant as always! Make the next one soon please! Sorry I keep asking buy I need the next part!!:')

@missy I agree with you with the reasons about Jake. Your plan sounds interesting!!! !

Oh my gosh. Amazing ending lol! And yes! I knew Jack had to be something and nit a human! I knew it ;D next part plz :)

You are going to save Jake right? You have to!! I don't want him to

Die and I know no one else dose...I hope. You can't kill Jake! He left Erika and that is part of why Erika hates the main person. I have liked Jake ever since we met him, even when I didn't know if he was good or not. I don't want to leave him! He is dying!! I would never leave someone when they are dying! Please don't kill him! I am begging you!!!!!!!!!! I NEED THE NEXT PART NOW!!! I do, I do. I want to find out

About Jack and Patch. (so cool if they were brothers but no one knows) Both fallen angles you see!!! That ring has still not came into it. Where is it! I forget about it really, I just remembered when you said JAKE WAS DYING!!! Don't kill me please!!I can't wait for the next part

You are going to save Jake right? You have to!! I don't want him to

Die and I know no one else dose...I hope. You can't kill Jake! He left Erika and that is part of why Erika hates the main person. I have liked Jake ever since we met him, even when I didn't know if he was good or not. I don't want to leave him! He is dying!! I would never leave someone when they are dying! Please don't kill him! I am begging you!!!!!!!!!! I NEED THE NEXT PART NOW!!! I do, I do. I want to find out

About Jack and Patch. (so cool if they were brothers but no one knows) Both fallen angles you see!!! That ring has still not came into it. Where is it! I forget about it really, I just remembered when you said JAKE WAS DYING!!! Don't kill me please!!I can't wait for the next part

Omg! You made the two guys I like be fallen angels and they hate each other? Awwwwww, come on!

OKAY! SO I HATE MYSELF! I HAVE NOT COMMENTED IN A long while! >>.

I think the text could be from that chick who was hitting on calisto

I loved this one (:

I don't know who the text is from. please make part 17 pronto! i [Heart] Patch!

lol i kinnda new that jack wasn't human but a fallen angel wa a bit of a shock

Omg!!!! Jack is a fallen angel too???? WOAH!!!!! :O I still choose Patch though. Part 17!!!!!!

Opps I meant 'don't kill Jake please' but I said 'dont kill me please' that made me lAugh

If jake died I quit.

*eyes bug out* holy... *cuses in german* oh my gosh!!!! ......... *silence