Teenage Chronicle Part 28 | Comments

So I know what you're thinking, what do I have to say about the whole Patch and Jack thing? I'll tell you what I think. I think these two boys are way too much drama and I should hook up with Calisto. I'm serious that's honestly what was going through my head the whole time, these two can duke it out all the want but it's never gonna happen. I hate it when guys or girls fight over a possible girl/boyfriend. It's kind of flattering but it's really annoying and stupid. However, I see people are still loyal to Patch and... yeah sorry not my type at all. What I would like to happen at the party is, I would like some time with Calisto, or at the very least the other guys. Just because they're not as dramatic and problematic as Jack and Jill over here *points and Jack and Patch* so I know that we're probably going to have a Patch moment similar to angelic4's version of the party. That's great, but Reckless... don't forget about the other guys. This is really selfish to say but I would rather hang out with them than Patch or Jack because of the fight they're having. AND I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY THEY'RE FIGHTING!!! I like the characters but I don't want to deal with these two the whole time. I WANT SOME TIME WITH THE OTHER CHARACTERS. Also... just throwing it out there. I have one... teeny tiny ity bity little request pretty please? Could I possibly kiss Calisto? Lately I've been going through some serious Calisto withdrawl and I understand why, people like other guys and that's great I don't want any competition anyways. But that's my little request regarding to the party. You can do WHATEVER you want... but please have some Calisto in there, that's my one request. I hope Jack and Patch solve things, they're starting to get on my nerves with this fight thing. Anyways, as long as the other Patch fans can deal with his attitude, I'm sure this was a good part. Now I'm excited for the party more than anything! Good luck with your move by the way, AND HAPPY SUMMER!!!

This part is nothing like I would do in any situation. Even though Jack and Patch are my favorite, they have some negative qualities. I think Patch is overreacting and needs to deal with his emotions. I love Jack the best so far, but its a bit weird that he just starts making out with me in random places, even though I don't mind ;) At the party I think we should have more parts with Jack and so that I can start dating Jack formally so I can make out with him, etc, with everyone seeing me, and me not feeling regret, etc.

Stubborn guys are still hot, ooh lala, just admit it Patch you're jealous, Ok if i had the power at the party, here's what i would do, they'd be definitely hot guys at the party and the guys and i'll be rocking the dress all the guys dance with me except Patch cause he's still being stubborn i dance a little bit longer with my Jack, then Patch comes and punches Jack, i get all worked up shout at Patch, leave him in the blue to check on Jack, Jack is okay, and i'm relieved to hear that, i stand up go look for Patch to give him a piece of my mind, he's outside in the moonlight, we have this fight "You know what Patch, you cant just admit you're jealous, you are so arrogant and proud" fight some more "Fine ok ______ i am jealous alright i am, i hate how the guys look at you the same way i do, i hate how i know you might not choose me" Patch moves closer, inches infront of me, with his hot breath and he looks at me with his intense eyes "I hate how you make me have sleepless, _____ dont you get i'm always jealous all i want is you" i'm left speechless, he put his hand at the back of my head and draws me in for a kiss

What just happened, hit in the face? o.e it better not be Alex cartwheeling again XP oh that boy :3 ahem, now about the Patch-Jack thing. No, Jack. Wrong. Bad. Tsk tsk. Sheesh, you have eager lips ._. Now Patch, you're jealous, honey. Admit it >:) I'm not angry at him for not admiting it because it's so obvious that it wouldn't matter much. Actually, I'm just laughing at how far he's going to try not to admit it :P yuss, he's being childish and sulky, and all I'd do is wait it out and hang with Alex until he realizes

Kissing jack...how do I feel? I've FALLEN for the fallen angels. I'm married to Patch and today is our month-a-versary. XD Um....I can't believe Patch is too ignorant and stubborn to admit he's jealous, thats plain child crap. I know im supposed to be studying but I came online to research bio and BOOM! Update x) I loved it (:

I'm REALLY hoping that I just got knocked out because the guys were playing football outside my room and the ball just hit me really hard... DARN IT PATCH! I don't care if he's stubborn; he's my favorite! Hmmmm, at the party...I think I should get kissed by this one dude who's been hitting on me all night, so I punch him in the face and break his nose. Yes, that is a good plan! I can't wait for your next one!

WTF?! I ALWAYS get knocked out. -___- Not cool! Anyway... Patch, you kinda piss me off sometimes, but I love you, ok? I'm psyched for the party! If I could make anything happen, I would want... hm, anything dramatic is good for me. Plus I'd like to slow dance with Patch after he admits that he's jealous of Jack. :P Or maybe just make something with Josh or Alex happen. I miss both of them... they haven't been in the story much. :(

Patch...stay calm honey. I love ya
Alex: I thought you loved me?
Josh: hey, that's my line
Jake: ____, what's going on here?

me: STOP IT! It is REALLY hard to choose when every one of you doesn't have a shirt on!

Jack: I have my shirt on...

me: well, you don't need to be shirtless to...uh...gah, this is annoying! Guys, please leave, i need time to think.

*paces room* *goes to bed* *sits down on something that is DEF not a mattress* *screams*

Alex: hey, Angel
me: *screams again* ALEX?! GET OUT!!!

XXblutixx says it best she took the words out of my mouth and I can't help but laugh at all patch being so stubborn but he doesn't seem to get I'm one of the most stubborn people he'll ever meet lol and jack is okay but I really am mad that he kissed me 'cus I don't like when I fight with patch so yeah I'm gonna go play some cod with alex.

I actually really love Jake xD

He hasn't caused me any drama or pain so far and besides, he's healing. Lol, sorry I'm awkward. And I can't wait for the next one, I'm not even kidding! Especially the party! 8D

Oh my gosh, I loved this! You know your characters really well and describe them so perfectly; I can easily imagine Ezra. xD

Great work and I seriously can't wait for the next one and the party!

I.LOVE.THIS.QUIZ!!! !!!!! I love how stubborn Patch is. It makes me want him more ;D

And on top of that, I get a red Vera Wang dress from Ezra (Although I wish it was black). Vera Wang is like the best designer in the century!!! Anywho, I don't know what is going to happen at the party but I think me and Patch will still be fighting :P I want a dance from all the guys too!

I want Erika/Cyndonia to crash the party and attack the quiz-taker with weapons and her/their men, but after they try to attack the quiz-taker and the guys, Max and Tyler burst in with alot of people. Patch hates these people (Nephilim or whatever Society) but they are helping us. Jack tries to break free of Erika/Cyndonia's grip but ends up nearly suffocating. Alex's eyes turn red, Josh's gold. The quiz-taker pushes the two back and with all of her strength pushes Erika/Cyndonia to the ground. After that her eyes turn gold and she stomps on their throat "DON'T f--- WITH MY FRIENDS!" She yells. Josh breaks free of a man's grip and runs to the quiz-takers side grasping Erika/Cyndonia's arm and twisting it sending them into the air. The quiz-taker glares around the room and walks up to Jack, she kisses him and then punches him in the face "Don't try to shield me from Patch!" She walks up to Max and kisses him "Love you babe" He says. she chuckles

I like @_ViolaLover_ and @Firey_Soul ideas!!!

P.S. Try out my quiz: "Case 1: The Boy on the Ledge". It's on my page: "Jinx_TheSleuth".

P.P.S I agree with @Missy Prissy Cat, I would like to at least have a dance with Calisto even though Patch is my #1 guy! Aghhhh I can't decide @_@

Oh and I totally : xD when I read he coments.... *sigh* and sadly I agree with everyone... But I still like the random places

Loved it! Patch and his stubborness(I think that is how you spell it)! What would I want to happen at the party... I don't know.

Very true, I agree with Jink_TheSleuth, I love _ViolaLover_ and FireySoul's ideas, especially slow dancing with Patch after he admits c,:

Aw way was I so mean to my Patch? I'm not that mean, especially to the guy I really really like :(

* Yawns and sits down on chair after a long 2 days of not going on go to quiz and might as well catch up* hey teenage ch.!!!! *clicks and reads* oh my gawd. *looks around if anyone is looking and puts fist up to mouth* ohhhhhhhhhh hhh.... THIS. CALLS FOR POPCORN!!!!!!

Ok back to ur question. My eyes has drifted to Jack, Jake, and Alex. No more patch. But I would die if I get a chance with Alex..... Pleasseeeeeeeeee . Oh. Which reminds me that I still have something to do.. *sad face* I'd have to catch up more on what I missed on gototquiz tomorrow. Soweeee

I very much dislike the color red. Bummer.
Nice job on this part :P

So glad Jake didnt find out.Cant Patch just amit it, ignorant, stubbon fallen angel!! JUST AMMIT IT PATCH, YOUR J.E.A.L.O.U.S! I want him to ammit it!! Well I cant wait for the next part!

Oh yeah, Noitect is Activated Part Two is out (:

@liz_king:

That looks so much like something Alex would do *.* it's hilarious! :D

OMG, write the next part soon!

hurry up and make part 29