Don't leave me hanging part 25 | Comments

Awesome part! It has everything from mystery, suspense, humour, and a bit of romance ;) !!! Congrats on being an experienced user *high five*. I didn't think it was long at all either. When you mentioned it though, I looked at the question number and I was surprised that there were forty questions. It didn't seem long, just the right length :) . I was happy to find Kris and Blake back!! =D Finally we get to see Blake in the flesh and Kris coming back after admitting he loves the main character. Feel bad for Blake though. I think he likes the main character but I wonder what he said about Jack is true. Anyway, I'm liking all the guys... They're all sweet and nice. Kris, Jack, Owen, Cory. I would say Justin and Blake, but we don't really know about them too much. Can't wait for the next part!!!!

*Note this comment is completely opinion based and doesn't reflect the story or it's quality in any way, shape, or form*

No, I'm sorry but no I wouldn't just forgive him like that! In fact, here's how it would REALLY go if I was actually there. *start scene* *Kris comes back* Me: >:( Kris: Hi ______ Me: Ahem, I believe you owe something Kris: an apology? Me: Dam right you owe an apology! Do you have ANY idea how much trouble you're in? The whole team's been worried sick and looking for you, and you could've given yourself away to one of Blake's goons. Heck they could've followed you here! are you THAT ignorant to realize what you could've done? Kris: _____, I'm sorry. I just felt guilty about what happened, you know? Me: Yes I know, I'm not an idiot. But you know when I told you to let your feelings out, that wasn't permission to KISS me Kris: I know, and I'm sorry... but what I said and did was how I feel. ____, I'm falling in love with you Me: You know what, that's another thing. Sometimes Kris, you are so selfish. All you care about is how you feel, it's always about YOUR feelings. All you ever do is resist your impulses and bottle up everything inside. Which leaves me with NOTHING. You're always silent, you're always watching and throughout all this all you can think about is your own emotions and how everything sucks for you. Well guess what, my life isn't a basket of roses either! I have a lot of stress on my shoulders and I don't see you making it any better Kris: _____, I'm not selfish! Me: Oh yeah, What made you come back huh? Kris: I wanted to see you again Me: THERE RIGHT THERE did you hear yourself? Nothing about the team or the fate of the world. It's just about how YOU feel and what YOU want Kris: _____, I'm sorry. But I can change Me: Kris you just flew miles away from here just to clear your head! It's going to take a miracle to straighten you out Kris: Look _____, I'm sorry. I was selfish and I feel awful. I'll never do it again. Can we pl

Ok I'm going to try and make a longinsh comment because I haven't commented recently. What's Emmy's job in Blake's group? Blake scares me even though he seems kinda of nice. I'm on the fence; I don't know if I like Jus or Jack. The plot is getting complicated, as if it wasn't already. And on part 21 when you said leave a person I want to, but I don't know if I'm to late so I'll leave my person here.

NAME: Lacey.

PERSONALITY : Smart, shy, clutzy, funny,a bit crazy,and kind.

DRESS: Pale pink with gold lace, but not over the top.

LOOKS: Short, brown hair that goes a little past shoulders, small body frame, hazel eyes, rosy cheeks, pale skin, and pink lips not sure what she would look like in magic form. Maybe light colored wings?

MASK: Pale pink with gold design, to match the dress.

SIDE: Good side, cuz evil people scare me. Lol.

I liked the quiz as always and can't wait for the next part!

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This part was... intense o.o

I like Owen as friend material :) I just cracked up at his rambling.

Kris is amazing but he's just not light hearted enough for moi (lol xD)

I seriously think Cory is my favorite... o.o I mean, he's playful, he cares, he can cook and clean, and he's a wolf :3 I could totally imagine a future with him.

As for Jack... he's my second choice, but only if things don t work out with Cory XP *laughs nervously* He's not as playful, and I love playful!

That dream was freeeaaky. Sheesh, Blake, save yourself and abandon me, yeah, I'll be fine xP That girl is cuh-RAY-zyy! So the dreams combine with real life! I definitely wouldn't wear that necklace next time I go to sleep D:

Should I contiue to Part 26, or should I slumber and possibly dream about Cory... decisions decisions >.> XD

Hi! Thank you for being such a devoted fan to my quizzes, lol. I'm a pretty fast reader, so I took all of this series' parts already. And I must say, it's pretty good. The beginning was maybe a little bit under descriptive as I like it to be, but as I progressed further into the story it got immensely better. I'm team Kris because Kris is cute and I like him a lot and he's awkward and quirky and I love him. :')

@PersonXD: no, i did not know that! xP well, you know what they say: you learn something new every day! (didn't mean to rhyme there :p) @Aifia: part 2 of my story quiz series has been out for a few months but you haven't taken it; just wanted you to know it's there because it didn't show up on the New Quizzes list. :) @xxblutixx: This part wasn't long at all! It was just right. ^.^ And congrats on your new status! Experienced, w00t w00t! The little gray bird was a nice touch, I love when story quizzes involve small cute animals, haha. The names from _ViolaLover_ are great, in my opinion. :)

Kris, *my heart skips a beat* youre back! Why did you leave me alone? Don't you know youre hurting me? I missed you. I know you'll never hurt me. The last thing i want to you is to be sad and hurt. I'll always be the girl who brings moon and stars for you. I love you forever. Every time i spend time with you i keep atticted to you more.

Logan, where are you babe? I can't get you off my mind.

Jack, even though that its over betweem me and you, part of me wants you back. I still have feelings for you. Not strong as for kris, but enough to give you a chance for comback. Love you.

Owen, youre cute. But i'm don't have time for you. I'm sorry.

Blake, just go away and leave me alone.

I can't get enough of these stories, you're an uber awesome writer! :) And thanks SO much for putting Kris back in the story, I missed him a lot! Haha, I love Kris, I can picture him with his hair all messed up and I bet he looks sooo cute! ;D Can't wait for part 26!

@xxblutixx I'll kill that crazy redheaded b!tch :3 Just wait... And it's just that it feels really bad seeing any of the guys hurt because of me. I know, I know, it's just a quiz, but it all feels so real... AND, Blake IS pretty likeable. You just have to ignore his bad choices and bad past, as he said it himself :)

@xxblutixx congrats on being an 'experienced user' now. And don't be sorry for the quiz being long, actually its just awesome. Thank U for bringing back Kris and also a bird.

awesome quiz!!! there's nothing else i can, say now you are also in my list of the top writers!! (now if you dont wannna be bored with my random talk better noy read ahead) you know when i read the sentence 'talking to Owen is not easy..' i just thought of one of my friend(guy).its to hard for me to talk to him. i want to say soo many things to him but i ran out of words as well as topics when i am about to say something to him. our conversation never lasted long. is it just me or i feel like he dosen't want the conversation going on?and plus there's his smile. its quite innocent smile but kind of unapproachable one for me,i just dont understand; why things are like this? opsie sorry if i bored you but..i'd already warned you so not my faultt:P

No Justin?!?! HOW DARE YOU!!! No Cory either? Those are my two favorite guys! UGH!!! Make the next one about a normal day with Justin, like, he tries to give you a completely normal day and stuff... or almost get him killed or something... or give him powers... JUST PLEASE!!! I BEG YOU~~~ JUSTIN!!! JUSTIN!!!

KRIS! yeah! he's hot! and soo sweet blah blah blah blah *goes on and on and on* ohh and maybe jack... but i have a close friend called jack so that is kinda awkward for me... and blake!!! and who was that GIRL?! she sounds like a *curses very bad word* lol anyway i know a few girls like that *imagines ripping their head off* mwhahahahahhaha anyway....

I was about to comment "it wasn't getting THAT long" when I looked to see it stopped at question 40 xD Awesome quiz! Congratz on experienced user! Can't wait for the next one!

So I remember taking your quizzes before but never got the time to finish them, and now that I did.. there so good! I like them, their funny :p and I'm more team Kris (;

*Note: the comment that follows is completely based on sole opinion and has no aspects of the actual story quiz*

Okay no... just no. Kris, coming back would never go like that for me. Here's how it would actually go: *Kris comes back* Me: >:( Kris: Hi ______ Me: Ahem, I believe you owe me something Kris: An apology? Me: Dam right you owe an apology. Not only did you worry the team, but you could've been seen by one of Blake's goons! Do you have ANY idea how much trouble you're in?! Kris: Were you worried about me? Me:*stays silent* Kris:_____... you don't care... do you Me: *rubbing forehead* Kris I'm done with the drama, and I'm done with the secrets. When I asked you about your feelings I wasn't giving you permission to kiss me Kris: But it's how I feel... and it's the truth Me:... you know what Kris, sometimes you're really selfish. You think it's always about YOU. It's never about the team, or the world. Nope, it's just all about you. And all you care about is how much you want to kill and kiss me at the same time. I just have the best blood in the world probably, and it sucks for you because you don't want to kill me. So in that mixed up head of yours, you're so focused on yourself and trying to resist that you don't even care about my feelings. All you care about is your own feelings, and you try so hard to bottle them up that I'm left with nothing! Kris: But I can change Me: Oh really? You can change? Kris it would take a miracle to change you. You just flew thousands of miles away from me just to clear your head! At what point did it occur to you that you needed to come back? Just tell me, go ahead I'm curious Kris: I wanted to see you again Me: AHA there, right there you see. You said "I wanted" nothing to do with anyone else but you. Kris: Look, what happened last night was how I really felt. Then I felt bad about what I did so that's why I flew away. Nothing to do with me at all, I know I upset you and I DO care about your feelings but could you