Teenage Chronicle Part 40 | Comments

I knew Patch couldn't be trusted! And how can he love me when he just kissed Cyndonia?! Cyndonia should move away somewhere far far away and Patch should go with her. They deserve each other.Ugh. Thank goodness that Jack was there. More romantic parts with Jack please :3 And i agree with other, you should include the guys that aren't used more often in the story. Oh and I want my powers back!

Oh my gosh. *.* You've probably heard this tons, but you are a phenomenal writer! Both this series and The Life Between Magic & Boys are some of my very favorites. =3

You're probably wondering who I am. XD I read all your quizzes in one sitting, which is kind of why I've never commented on any of them; they were just too good to stay away from! I was like: *finishes reading* *hits back button* *clicks next part* *reads* *repeats previous steps* XD

You also might have seen me around the comments of xxblutixx's DLMH series; you guys are my inspirations here. =3

This part was absolutely heartbreaking. T.T I've been torn between Patch, Jake, and a little bit of Josh. But seriously, Patch? Why her? Why Cydonia? I totally agree with xxblutixx and Aria. :<

There's so much more I want to say about your incredible quizzes and writing, but I don't really know how to write it. :p Can't wait for part 42!

Patch...*whimpers* Oh, patch...
Jake: Forget about him for a minute
me: I can't. I love him

Jack: don't be ridiculous. He broke your heart cripes sake!

me: I love Patch, guys. I can't hide my feelings, or kill them.

Jake: think about it, please. I love you. I loved you first, _____!

me: I love you too, Jake. But I also love Patch. I'm sorry.

I'm listening to "How it Used to Be" by Daughtry. I think it fits with >my< situation.

AMG TRB! :D YOU'RE BACK!!! *tackle squeeze hugs* now... *bursts into tears* Patch you... you... I can't believe you. It crushes my heart to say that you should stay away, but I hate that you only regret going to Cydonia AFTERWARDS >.< Jake was sweet :l and I appreciate Jack's concern, but I'm afraid he'll kill Patch what with their history (whatever it is) o.O nuuu I hate Patch but I love him D: I can't lose him! bahh x( need part 41

Why Patch? Why? Why must this be so complicated? Who can i trust? Where will I end up? What will happen? When will it be over? (I hope it won't be over for another couple of parts! I love this series!) Besides al my questions, I totally agree with MysteriousEntity, the main character should start fighting her own battles. I can't wait for part 41!

Omg the main character is so f**king annoying like omg drama queen much? Like is she blind? Patch PUSHED Cydonia away and she acts like he freaking banged her or something. CHILL brah!

Can you make the main character have a breakthrough and she becomes a total a$$ kicker! She can start to keep her distance from the guys and sneak out alone to GET HER POWERS BACK! But soon after the guys meet back up with her. Maybe she can meet another guy? or a girl who helps her?

Hey!!! Jake is so sweet and he is mine!!! Come on you guys know he was mine from the start!!! I thought jack was going to crush patch!! NEXT PART!! I would write more but I am on my phone with fake nails on. I haven't got the hang of them yet, who knew. They were so hard to type in?

I agree we should have some more time with the original characters I miss max and Alex and Josh and Calisto

OMG YOU'RE BACK *hugz*^^ I miss your writing. Everyday I would go to your profile page and see if you released this part:D oh how I miss youXD ok. Patch. *cries* I'm heartbroken:'( I don't know what to say....and Jack, awe he makes me happy:'3 Does Patch still love me or did he give up:( NEXT PART PWEASE!!!!!

...its either i wrote my thank you comment long time ago and you read it or it got erased. I forgot to say- AWE YEA! I GOT MY CHARACTER IN THE STORY... *cough* sorry but lets get back to my point in this comment now! YOUR BACK!!! GAHHHHH!!! YEEEEEESSSSSSSS!!!! ! DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I MISSED YOU AND THE OTHERS>>!!!?? I mean yes i have to be blamed to i only go here once in a while just to check if the familiar story quizzes get out new parts and im writing in microsoft word about this other series i will soon start but havent worked on passed 1,275 words so yep... writers block. i also found another website named quizilla that has its own thing like for quizzes, stories, lyrics, poems, etc. oh gooosshhhhhh,... now let me get to my reaction to wut just happened...- WUT JUST HAPPENED??!!! *looks around nervously then get into an angry mood* im not sure about Patch but his just- ... gahhhhhh. grrrrr. >:( ._. Alex! Jake!!! save meeee.. okay and that little selfish brat ... never mind. Aria i agreee... but i couldnt help myself from blabbing.

I wanna curse. I'm dead. I'm not up for a long comment or anything, sorry. All I wanna do is crawl up in a corner and cry.

My comment was erased -_-

Eff patch im team alex i wish i had my powers back so i could get my comepis aka revenge can't wait for part 41

Please don't make me lose him...

God the main character is SO dislikable

Can't wait for the next part :)

could you please have some time with the original characters you know alex, josh and maybe find max or something i woould really love that pllllllzzzzzzzzz

Yess i love your quizzes can't wait for those 20 parts

Sorry, I meant to say part 41... -.-lll