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... *eyes water up* *sniffles* that was so so so beautiful D,; Fiery_Soul, DX mehememmmm *mumbles unintelligibly* I'm sorry, I'm just a ball full of random emotions today because I'm out of school and back on GTQ and I just came from Dannica's story so you know what that's like... oh my, this was perfectly deep, thoughtful, and I had an image of a silhouette of a girl sitting, staring at the sunrise, reflecting on all of this... beautiful, and perfect just how it is. I wouldn't try to make it longer (though I enjoy your writing so much) because it just seems... perfect how it is. I also have to say I love the title; so creative! And Heels and Heartbreak, yes that'd be an awesome title too XD

@33iZZy18 you go, girl!

Absolutely BEAUTIFUL, and dnt you hate it how your friends just tell you to get over it? But in truth if you had something specail with some one you can't just simply it never happend. Though I could see everything from your perspective, I never really had a boyfriend sure plenty of guys asked me out but for some reason I always said no I guess cuz Ik that a lot of guys are jerks. And the guys who ask me out are smoking hot but all of them are jerks, and thus guy your talking about I feel for you cuz one of my guy friends that I've known since the forth grade was a really sweet guy and always respectful to girls. Than high school changed everything*-_- now he's a really hot jerk that grabs girls a--s all the time and always gets what he wants if you know what I mean. And when I started getting "prettier" a lot of guys started to notice me and so did he, but he grabbed my a-- one time and I'm not the type of girl to just let a guy do that to her and especially if he knows why I dnt have a bf, drink, or get high I was so pissed I turned around and socked him in the eye. That left a mark.

You never fail to amaze me. I have reread paranormal love at least 10 times x) hahaha, this was absolutely amazing. I swear my heart actually started to hurt...gah, amazing details!! You should make part 2! Also, i have a really good idea...this guys brother or cousin should show up and they should fall in love, making her exbf really jealous...you dont have to use it though-juss an idea!(: I really love all your stories though!!! :3

Deep felt, heart touching, sad,beatiful, words can't describe your depth, and it sounds like this guy has the same sense of humor as me :( It was so well written, I swear this girl was you. If it is, or any of you have had your heart broken like me, be assured I would give them a nice punch in the face like you would to this guy, and like I did with my ex.

I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! It is really sad and I actually cried, but it still VERY well written. Your my favorite GTQ writer and your my rolemodel, so I beg of you please write more!!!!!! It can be this story or any other story but just plz write something, Firey_Soul. Also, because you inspired me I'm writing my own story called Messed Up Love. Please check it Out!!!!!

@Firey_Soul hope you're checking this still :P like I said before, I'm out of school, and now I'm motivated to start up on that mash-up idea about the stories. If you could revisit that comments page of angelic4's and email me please if you're still interested? Thank you :)

If you don't write more i'll seriously hunt you down, you know how much i love your writings *memory lane* i remember the first time you posted your first series i was there, now i'm here for this edition

:D *hugs you* You gave me a title to a sad love story i thought about writing do you mind if i use it [me: it's in your story] It's the most perfect title, i'll give all my credit to you

;-; write more even tho this made me think so hard o_o dude i NEVER been asked out in my life..o.o im just so all alone ;-; i remember when i went to my first school dance{6th grade} wow o.o did i make a fool myself :c well not really i was just the girl in the conner hiding from everyone ;-; lemme shut up now xD dude look up this song!{Frank Ocean-Thinking About You} and then reread this o.o it like sets the mood xD and in paranormal :P read like 50{or more} times xD

Oh hey I have time because I stole the iPad. Ok I'm in 6th grade and I know the guy your talking about. I think you danced with your best friend in homecoming and that guy is the person that dumped me in a text in paranormal love. And I know these things happened to you. And I also know he I think is your ex and you hate him very much. Hope this somehow the story happens to me cuz..... Cuz.... OMG I FORGOT WHAT TO SAY! Lol btw, my school will start in like 1 week and I want to read the story. This story. This part is extremely long somehow like how long PL was. Ok I still forgot what to say and I just fought off this iPad from my brother just to comment and read your freakin story. Don't worry about wasting my time cuz you will never will. You are one person who is worth wasting time of. You have an amazing talent and that guy if he was real should have stick with you than her. You are better than her. And that guy is really not smart at all. Cuz he dumped u for her. Oh s--- I forgot what to say again. But here's what I will say... Never get your hopes up cuz you will always make an amazing story now matter how you write it. Even though you messed up... You will always know how to fix the mess. Ok the heck I dont know what im saying. Ok but remember this.you could always count on me. ;) gtg bye. :) man I'm sounding like Angela + Alecx. And that's how you make my real me appear. Lol. Ok bye!

I. LOVED. IT!!!! I've had friends betray me before so it kinds opened some emotional scars there, but I think it made the story better. Honestly though, I don't know how you would be able to work a second quiz out of this. The story seems to be the kind of story that only needs one part to it. If you want to make another one though go for it! I'll be he to read it if you do.

Now I'm just getting pissed off anywho yea I ment he's broken I left off at I can picture it now seeing this made into a book even though its the first chapter well I thInk you should make a chapter 2 cause it already AMAZING Y don't u make it FANTASIC anyways that's all I got to say I LOVED IT AND YOU SHOULD TOTALLY MAKE A CHAPTER 2

Well...that's the way love goes...sometimes.

I like the story the way it is :) It's your choice to make another part if you want. If you don't, you still have your fans to back you up! This quiz reminds me of Janet Jackson's song "Again". You should listen to it. It's very sad :(

Good quiz can't wait to read the next series :D

Jinx

This was very sad and emotional. I'm completely inlove with this now. It's funny. My friend should me a pic where it said the tittle. How sad. That guys a @ss. >:( But you should make another one. :) I want to read more. Sadly, this makes me think of my ex. :'(

@Firey_Soul

what? i couldnt hear you with randomness in my head. and i was typing that with me swimming in the comments. wait its raining yesterday... well more water for me! :D ok still randomness is taking over my head and i fought over that ipad just to read your story. and slept at midnight just to read it. maybe i finished like 10 mins so whatev. but still ty cuz you made me sleep at 2 am hehe. i love sleeping late! and then again i woke up 12 pm. and i think i made those freakin comments just somehow to make sense and help me to make a pool of comments... or like pooments...LOL! and it was late so i have no idea what i wrote. hey look my comment is long! Stardust! I MISSED YOU!

This was so good I seriously cried because it related to me so well! Youshould check mine out please the name is really similar its: S(HE) be(LIE)ve(D) I think your super amazing Firey_Soul!

that was really good. wow. wow. WOW. that was REALLY GOOD. i think that this story is perfect the way that it is. i think that if you write a part two it will kind of ruin the effect of this one. this story seems more like its meant to short. i wouldnt advise dragging it out. i think its perfect right now. by the way, i LOVE the title. its so creative :D

This was amazing.It was so sad but amazing!!! Your so amazing! I love the title!! If anyone didn't like this they would be crazy!!!

Sorry bout that my freakin iPod is retarded anyways I was saying how it's cool how you but she's broken and he's broken in to make the title I really LIKED IT I could just picture it n

i love your story! amazing.. personally, i want to tear up when reading it because i had once experienced almost the exact thing that happen in the story. really touched.. please do continue.. ^^

I went back to the quiz after I read the comments and I disnt get the title at all the I thought bout it then Got it it's really cool h

Three words: Fan-tast-ic, or is that one word, oh well! Either way it was the best thing I've ever read! Wonderful job! Please write more!

Title: Heels and Heartbreak

It really is catchy and i already started writing it

oh sorry firey soul i have to read this tomorrow cuz somethings blocking my way... (my mom has a test) lol ok i havent read it yet but i know its good. ill go commant again tomorrow ok. and remember... i will als=ways be your fan! and maybe your craziest super fan but whatev im thinking of a fan right now as in fan. a literal fan...lol my mom bye