friendships never last- part 1 | Comments

Just saying you spelt so much wrong that it was really hard to under stand, plus the plot was good but it did sound a bit rushed and please try and stick to either first person or second person otherwise it will get confusing xx ;)

It wasn't bad, but the plot was a bit rushed... also, you switched from 1st person to 2nd person a lot. Just stick with one, otherwise it gets confusing.

I like your quiz,but I agree with Firey Soul. Your plot is a little rushed but also you do have bad grammar in your quiz.

This is good but sounds like hex hall no offense but it was good also confusing

u should make another btw ( neither)

It was rely good!!!!! Make part 2

hurry up and make part 2

i liked it :) PLZ make a 2nd one lolz. when thr was da part abt Sarah i thought sheesh Sarah's weird XD

i luved it i never got confused plz make 2nd