I WROTE A POEM ABOUT WAR
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Thread Topic: I WROTE A POEM ABOUT WAR
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YHARZ.
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ME!
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Oh... wait, nevermind.
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THIS IS A SNEAK PEEK
I WILL POST THE REST IF YOU WANT IT
They fall, one by one
Like scattered poppies
on an endless field of blood and gore
This battlefield, stained with honor and integrity
Tell me what were they fighting for?
The soldiers, falling one by one
like dominoes, all across the floor
Tears woven into the life that comes
That dreaded march to the door.
Next comes the shattered hearts
The nightmare that came to life
The news felt like a dagger
or maybe it was a jagged knife?
that was only half. -
no one cared.
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I liked your sub-title. That was funny.
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fooey about the titles,
i be caring bout da poetries -
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Sorry I was laughing too much. Dx OMG TING THAT'S REALLY GOOD. :O
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I rote that at 6 am ._. LOL I DIDN'T SLEEP AT ALLLLL
but thank you :D im thinking of posting the whole thing on dA -
You'll get a lot of buzz for that. xD YOU ISH WELCOME AND OMG I DO A LOT OF STUFF AT SIX A.M. TOO..
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I'm so late sorry! That was lovely and so true. :'|
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should i post the rest of it on dA right now?
n thanks, I was kind of inspired by eminem LOL
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Yes post on dA! And LoL I always get the best ideas in the early morning dead from lack of sleep. xD
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