Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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WOW!! then u REALLY got talent!!
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Felicia1 NoviceThanks.I`m just curious how many songs have you written cause you write really good songs too!
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Felicia1 NoviceBut hopefully nobody will steal the song cause if somebody does I will sue when I become famous.Which hopefully is soon.
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I hope you will become famous, becuase you difinitley have some true talent there kiddo.
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I wanna right another song! But about what...? *thinks*
Still thinking...
Nope, nothing yet...
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHH!!!!! I know! -
I call this song: Locked away
I sit in a room all by myself,
Locked away and I need some help,
It's very tight and I can't breathe,
I need some help, please I'm a girl in need.
I'm locked away in this closet,
Curled up in a corner,
I've been left to die, oh it's so sad.
Whoever did this must be really bad.
[Chorus]
I'm locked away, locked away.
I'm trapped in a place and I can't get out.
I'm trying to escape this is what it's about.
I'm dying here, I'm going mad, I can't stand this,
Someone help me...
Can't you see...
I need some help, someone save me...
I'm locked away...
I've had nothing to eat in these past two days.
I don't know what to do and what to say.
Hasn't anyone noticed that I've been gone?
Isn't anyone at least curious that I'm scared and alone?
Please help me here, I'm dying.
I never thought my fate would be in such a closed up place.
I'm losing my grace and I'm going crazy.
Please help me, please help me.
[Chorus]
I'm locked away, locked away.
I'm trapped in a place and I can't get out.
I'm trying to escape this is what it's about.
I'm dying here, I'm going mad, I can't stand this,
Someone help me...
Can't you see...
I need some help, someone save me...
I'm locked away...
I'm trying my best to stay sane,
But all I can feel is the numbness and the pain,
I'm locked away in a small room,
Please don't leave me to my doom...
[Chorus]
I'm locked away, locked away.
I'm trapped in a place and I can't get out.
I'm trying to escape this is what it's about.
I'm dying here, I'm going mad, I can't stand this,
Someone help me...
Can't you see...
I need some help, someone save me...
I'm locked away...
Locked away, forever...
Locked away, forever...
Locked away, forever...
Locked away, forever...
Locked away. -
So, what did you people think? Pretty creepy, huh? It was meant to be like that! Hope you liked song 2 of my imaginary album. ^-^
I wrote in like, 4 minutes, so it's not like it was hard work or anything, just fun! -
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that wuz like just plain WICKED AWESOME!!! creepy songs always get the most listeners and usually get the highest on the charts... any suggestions for my next song.... song number 28 (cmon alana dont stop now)!!!
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Wow Roady that was REALLY Good!! I think we have some future musicians in this forum
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I'd like to see a song that's original. Possibly one that isn't emo faggotry or vamp crap?
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Felicia1 NoviceThanks!LikeI said hopefully nobody would steal my song. I like your song!
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Thank you people for liking my song! I like writing creepy stuff like that! I'd love to hear you songs too (Well, read them anyway, but still)
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ok, hikaru. nothing nice 2 say then just get the heck outta my forum. its not ur job 2 judge a song by what its about. u gotta actually hear the lyrics in ur head and feel the music..... (lol wrong description) anyway.... u get my point.
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