Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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lol.... i THINK i have song number 28 done... ok... here we go.... ugh... now i cant remember the beginning.... and i lost the paper.... awww jeez.... this sucks.... lol
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I'd love to hear it, c'mon Alana! You'll find that paper somewhere!
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It's too unoriginal though.
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i haven't written any songs im more into poetry
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Fo' Shizzle
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ok... i think this paper is it... awww cmon its my english homework!! bleh..... i hate homework *throws homework in fire* muahaha. ok now back to searching.... is this it??? *reads* i think this might be it. work with me while i read through and make sure...
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ok. this is it. song number 28 pplz!!! here we go!!! its called --- well i got no name for it yet. but its sad ppl. so if ur emotional like, take some aspirin so ur heart doesnt painfully fall 2 pieces.
i cant find myself in this lonely place
i used 2 know who i was but now its history
why did u leave me in my time of need? are you as heartless as you seeeeeeem??
[bridge] you left me without a single goodbye, nothing will make look back on my broken life!,
[chorus] why did i trust you when there's no one 2 trust?,why did i need you when i had what i didnt want?you know me better than i seem 2 know myself. so why dont you just tell me why??? why why why???
awwww man.... the writing is so faded out i cant really seem to read the letters....... crud. this is bad.... and i have a whole nother page to this song!! that really sucks.. well u get the point of the song anyway right?? i will try to decifer the "code" and hopefully write a better more LEGIBLE song!! (i wrote with a dead pen. probably NOT a good idea) anyway thats PART of the song. hopefully i can finish posting it soon. hope it was okay. it was clearly not as good as The Change or my song Fly Away... oh yah i gotta share that one with u too.. if i can find it in my room.... i may be gone for a century looking.... lol... jk. what do u think of it so far?? -
Eating away at your flesh
Consuming your skin
You are in a great deal of pain
Blood begins to spew
It is sucked up almost immediatly
Your organs are now unprotected
Digested they will be soon
Starting with the heart, you should be dead by now
But are kept alive by some obnormal force
After the damage is done
Your corpse with continue to burn
Within the fiery blazes of hell
You are no more
You are suffer
Within my realm
You are totured by my minions
Stabbed by something you cannot see
Your eyes were goyged out
And eatin before coming here
Now that I've got you
You will now experience a lifetime of pain
Happiness does not exist here
All that happens is more and more suffering
I live of your pain
Even without, i am Immortal
No one could possibly stop me from bringing more doom to those
Whom I shall take
You are being punished
You have lived a life of sins
And now you will feel pain
And make up for all those lives you have made suffered
But they will soon join you
As they too have sinned
Nothing more is too come
You will rot away forever
All hope of leaving is lost
You will forever perish within my realms...
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Alana, that song was hurt touching, But finish it! It was really good, it was like, I dunno, one of those cool songs, now let me read Hikky's.
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WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO COOL!!!!!!! YOU REALLY KNOW HOW TO DESCRIBE STUFF!!!!!!!!
But now you've made me never want to do a sin ever because the way you described hell freaked me out. -
Ya, but I honestly can't do s--- like the real bands, now that s---s freaky.
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Where do they come up with things like that I wonder... how can you be that good?
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i am working on the song now.... i should have it done soon.
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well i kind of think of unbearable situations or the twisted emotions i have and write it as a poem and then add emotion and pitches and vuila. i get a song. you should hear my cousin val's song. it is really good!! i have been telling her 2 submit it to a record company but she doesn't think it's good enough. i will see if she can email me the lyrics so i can post it for her.
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changed my pic cuz i got bored of justin bieber!! XD sigh... i know i should be working on the song.... but its only 7.... AM so i have a long time... i think... ugh... and i have AAAAAAAALL that homework (the pile is like 5 feet tall) to do cuz i wuz out sick this week.... bleh.... i hate school... it should just go live in a hole and die... XD
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