Songs that u wrote
- Locked due to inactivity on Aug 4, '16 4:13pm
Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
-
Both your songs were nice, I really liked them, what did you think of mine? Oh, and Biance, I liked it how you wrote a song about your interests, but what did you call it?
-
I called it All About Me. I wrote it summer 2009 when me and my family were driving to Vrigina Beach.
-
I just thought of a song to write. It will be call Summer 2009.
-
I'll write a song soon, it's about my dreams, did you check out my previous songs? I want to know your opinion!
-
Actually, I'll write it now, it's called Lost dreams
Ok, here I go:
My dreams take me away,
To another world,
So different from the one I know,
Where things are different to me,
You'd be shocked too if you could see,
But that's my problem here,
No one understands me,
No one knows what I can see,
In my dreams I see pain,
In my dreams I see blood rain,
And all of a sudden I'm in the sunshine,
All around me are flowers and trees in a strange line,
And I know that I'll never forget this,
For as long as I live, these dreams just go on forever...
[chorus]
My dreams just take me away,
As they go on and on and...
My dreams are lost and found,
So they can go and on and on and...
But all of them are lost and cold,
Because they go on and on and on and...
On and on and on and on...
In my dreams I'm all alone,
And I get scared,
But I try not let my feelings be shone,
If I could I wouldn't have dared,
I don't understand this,
It's just getting worse as it progresses,
It's like a desease with no cure,
And I'm sick of it, I don't want any more,
I can't think of what I need to do,
I wish I had someone like you,
To stop these dreams from going on forever...
[chorus]
My dreams just take me away,
As they go on and on and...
My dreams are lost and found,
So they can go and on and on and...
But all of them are lost and cold,
Because they go on and on and on and...
On and on and on and on...
One minute I could be dreaming,
That I could be leaning,
On a rock and falling down to my doom,
And there's not enough time, not enough room,
Suddenly, I'm swimming in the sea,
Trying to escape from all the danger,
But it's weird, there's no fish it's just me,
And every time I look behind me, I see shadows that linger,
I wish these dreams didn't go on forever,
[chorus]
My dreams just take me away,
As they go on and on and...
My dreams are lost and found,
So they can go and on and on and...
But all of them are lost and cold,
Because they go on and on and on and...
On and on and on and on...
[chorus] Again! ^-^
My dreams just take me away,
As they go on and on and...
My dreams are lost and found,
So they can go and on and on and...
But all of them are lost and cold,
Because they go on and on and on and...
On and on and on and on...
And on and on and on and on...
On and on and on, and on and on and on...
Lasting forever. -
So what did you all think? Was it ok? Or a little messed up? And I want to know the newbs opinions on my other songs, I'd much appreciate it. ^-^
-
So what did you all think? Was it ok? Or a little messed up? And I want to know the newbs opinions on my other songs, I'd much appreciate it. ^-^
-
That...was...AWESOME!!!
-
yea some one here i was lonley
-
Felicia1 NoviceI liked it a lot.
-
Im going to work on my songSummer 2009 now.
-
Oh and,Happy Birthday Sapphire! I bought you a so you can get drunk!
-
wow!! great songs, all of you!! still working on my other one... kinda stuck on it. any suggestions?
-
cassie Newbiei have been writing songs since i was in third grade... but they sucked A LOT up until just recently. my songs are mostly about my crush/BF and stuff like that. my super emo friend shelby told me that im emo... but i dont cut... i dont get it! but lolz
-
Thanks everyone for liking it! Oh and Alana, if you've given up on song 28 and need a new one, then I suggest you should write one about your interests, like I LOVE vampires, so I wrote a few songs about them, why not one about Justin Beiber? Don't worry, we won't criticise or laugh!
This thread is locked, therefore no new posts can be made.
