Songs that u wrote
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Thread Topic: Songs that u wrote
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lol... wut bout writing a song bout a void... a dark void... and falling into a black hole... yah!! inspiration rox!!
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A dark void... LOL! I stole your song idea! But I won't write it now I'm too tired.
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lol! thats fine with me! february vacation so i pretty much have a whole week to just chill and write stuff...
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Yeah, I'm writing a vampire book. It's supposed to be scary but it's ended up being just plain dead sexy, that's why every day I change practically the whole book until it seems appropriate...
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lol... thats what i do when i write stories... XD
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I need evreyone's opion about the beginning of my song Summer 2009:
Summer came and now it's gone
Im really sad in school
But I still have some memories
From that great summer.
[Chours]
Nothing could beat that summer
No other summer would be the same as summer 2009
Going to the beach meeting new friends
Swiming with the fish and our family.
I still have the memories from summer 2009
How do you guys like it so far? -
its cool. is it gonna be upbeat or slow?
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both.
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At the beginning it's slow then all the choruses are fast. All the other not choruses(not including the beginning)are half slow and half fast.
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It sounds nice, you should continue writing it.
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cool. upbeat and slow... nice mood combination... i would like to see the music video... lol
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Yeah. *imagines Biance running through green fields and red and yellow flowers, and then flies somehow stupidly until she reaches the sea and makes a snadcastle and s---*
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lol... well... ok then. ok. one thing i dont get. everyone is callin me a natural bee-otch and i dont understand... i am truly nice its just.. i have been in this mood lately... ANOTHER SONG IDEA!!!! so its gonna be about this girl who masks her true feelings... yah.... XD
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I finished Summer 2009! Here we go:
"Summer came and now it's gone.
Im really sad in school.
But I still have some memories,
From that great summer."
[Chorus]
"Nothing could beat that summer.
No other summer would be the same as summer 2009.
Going to the beack,meeting new friends.
Swimming with fish and family.
I still have memories from summer 2009"
"What's the matter with time?
Summer just goes so fast!
I wish our vacation went more slower.
School can sometimes be a bit boring.
May to August would be great,if we could change it."
[Chorus]
"Changing time would be fun.
Going to the beach for two months!
Camping,parties,and lots of yard sales.
Summer is the best time of the year.
Who could forget summer 2009?
It's the best...all the time."
"Who needs school?
I defiantly don't need it!
Math and languae arts,social studies and reading.
But summer 2009 is the best summer ever.
School bores me,I need free time.
I wish...I could go back to summer 2009"
Do you think it's a bit too short? Does it need editing? What are your guy's opions?
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