Beverlyreagan's Songwriting Contest: Round 2 + Winners
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Okay, first of the rules for round two!
Last time one person went out and I'm very sorry to them. It was a close call.
Now. for round two, ONE person can join. If I get two people who want to join the first one, the first to post gets in and the other cannot join until the next round. You can only enter one song per round.
The winners of round one and who will go to round two are:
Puppet Master12
Batman12506
Theloveofbands
Congrats!!
Note to puppet and batman:
I used the first songs you posted so you can use one of your others for round two-- well not really because of theme...
Now the round 2 theme is...:
Christmas
I am very aware it is April second.
The second round begins now!! -
Beverlyreagan NoviceHi guys this is my contest and I had to move and I couldn't copy on my ipad so dark did it for me.
There is one minor.. Well pretty big change:
Theloveofbands does not have time to do this songwritting thing so his place will be taken by allhaileouch -
KAy
The lights AR eshining oh so bright
The joyous laughter fills my night
And as every second ticks away the scene of christmas starts to play
And it's at that point that no one can just sleep or lay
Christina's the one time of the year where almost everyone is smiling
Christmas the one time to my sister im not compared
It's the really the only time for me when my family is equal
There's almost no yelling
And stories I will be telling
And as the snow falls and I lay my head down
I think thsi is it the night when Christmas comes to town
Our family together the only time in teh year
As the fresh fallen snow crunches beneath my feet
I think to my self
Christmas is one happy time
Song end
Well this sucked im not good at Christmas songs really only halloween ones -
Beverlyreagan NoviceWell interesting! I never knew anyone could write halloween songs! That might be the next round :) great christmas song!
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Thanks hope it's good enough
And if I do her passed I hope its halloween next -
Beverlyreagan NoviceYou probbly will... Idk if others are coming back!
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This was a poem at first, but I added some music to it. And yeah.
The littlest Christmas tree,
lived in a meadow of green,
Among a family,
of tall evergreens,
He learned how to whisper,
the evergreen song,
with the slightest of wind,
that came gently along.
He watched as the birds,
made a home out of twigs,
and couldn't wait till,
he too was big.
For all of the trees,
offered a home,
the maple, the pine, and the oak,
who's so strong.
"I hate being little",
the little tree said,
"I can't even turn colors,
like the maple turns red",
"I can't help the animals,
like the mighty old oak",
"He shelters them all,
in his wide mighty cloak".
The older tree said,
"Why little tree you don't know?
The story of a mighty king,
from the land with no snow?"
Little tree questioned,
"A land with no snow?"
"Yes!" said old tree,
"A very old story,
from so long ago".
"A star appeared,
giving great light,
over a manger,
on long winters night.
A baby was born,
a king of all kings,
and with him comes love,
over all things."
"He lived in a country,
all covered in sand,
and laid down his life,
to save all of man.'
Little tree thought of the gift
given by him,
then the big tree said with the
happiest grin,
"We're not just trees,
but a reminder of that day,
there's a much bigger part,
of a role that we play!"
"For on Christmas eve,
my life I'll lay down,
in exchange for a happier,
loving ground.
And as I stand dying,
they'll adorn me in trim,
this all will be done,
in memory of him".
"Among a warm fire,
with family and friends,
in the sweet songs of Christmas,
I'll find my great end,
then ever so gently,
he'll come down to see,
and take me to heaven,
Jesus and me".
"So you see little tree,
we are not like the oak,
who shelters all things,
beneath his great cloak.
Nor are we like the maple
in fall,
who's colors leave many,
standing in awe".
"The gift that we give,
is ourselves, limb for limb,
the greatest of honor,
in memory of him".
The little tree bowed,
his head down and cried,
and thought of the king,
who willingly died.
For what kind of gift,
can anyone give?
Then to lay down your life,
when you wanted to live.
A swelling of pride
came over the tree,
Can all of this happen?
Because of just me?
Can I really bring honor?
By adorning a home?
By reminding mankind,
that he's never alone?
With this thought, little tree,
began singing with glee,
Happy and proud,
to be a true Christmas tree.
You can still hear them singing,
even the smallest in height,
singing of Christmas,
and that one holy night. -
Beverlyreagan NoviceAMAZING. AMAZING!!!!! This is my new fav christmas song :)
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Really?
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care_bear19 NoviceBatman that was amazing ;o;
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Thanks. Hehe
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I love taht I was signing ti thorugh with my own tune how does your one go tough
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Wow so many errors in my last post
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I played it on the piano.
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Cool im not happy with mine so im doing another one
The spirit of Christmas not simply a term
The young one who died on that day
She watches over me and teh other children
Making sure no ill will touches us on Christmas
She is the very person who protects our innocence
She makes teh snow fall on the ground this day
She makes the sullen child laugh and smile i prey
And in this world though i don't know
How many sports are there
And when I belive in her presence in the air
I can almost see her
And when I loook in to the fiery hearth i
I think I see her dancing there
Teh spirit if christmas
The sprit of life of teh children
Though young at her own death she holds no ill will
A child by nature but kind and fair
Pale Ivory skin but soft and shiny hair
Bags under her eyes but iris green and sparkling
Whisky is the dress she wears but red and green it is
Beautifull the spirit is but soft and sweet as well
No harm will come to you on Christmas or near
Your Christmas spirit watches you
Until she lasses it on
The next spirit of valentines
Until Christmas again
The sprit so just and fair with soft and shiny hair
A beauty in a chidls eyes
Though I may not see her after i ahve all grown up
Though she has assured me she will be there always
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