GTQ: The story
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Thread Topic: GTQ: The story
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I don't care if I'm a character or not, this rocks! :) Keep it up!
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I would love to be in the story. It's so awesome already and it'd be an honor. :'D
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"We must seek out the help of. . . ." or "They stumbled upon a cave with glowing lights and an odd chant. . ."
That's how I'd include one. :I but that's just me, do whatever makes sense for you. -
barberbob???
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I think I've got a good idea for how to include a sorcerer/sorceress. But who would fill that part?
dragon ember??? -
Another fight scene
"Alice! Hurry up!" Shouted Ana, taking another step back.
James smiled. He slid forward with a long drag before swinging again. His sword moving so fast it was a blur. It crashed into Ana's blade; barely pulled up in time to defend.
She gave a clumsy swing. swinging a downward arc and aiming for James's head.
He side stepped the attack with ease. Looking at Ana with a mix of boredom and disgust before slapping her with the back of his hand. She fell back and tumbled. Lifting her sword again just in time to block yet another slash as James advanced on her again. Kicking her square in the stomach and sending her flailing.
The room was a long corridor. Cool grey stone with dim torches lit the dark space. Silent guards standing every few paces along the walls and pillars between every other guard. The guards just stood there; ordered not to attack. James wanted to kill these two himself.
Alice hunched over in the corner of the room. Frantically trying to load her crossbow.
"How do you work this thing!?" She said to herself in a panic.
Finally loading a bolt, she looked up and saw Ana sprawled across the ground. Her sword was no longer in her hand. James strode over to her limp body and put his foot on her back.
"This ends now, WORM!" he shouted; pointing the tip of his sword down at her spine.
Alice aimed and fired. Sending the bolt through his shoulder. James gasped and stumbled back. His guards swarming him in a panic. Checking if he was okay. Trying to help him.
In the chaos, Alice helped Ana up, and grabbing her sword, the two hobbled off unnoticed. James pushed by the swaths of his own men and saw nothing. They had escaped. -
( barberbob! I wanna be a part of this, please? )
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Did you not see what Bob said? Let me refresh your memory...
"Please give examples of who you think would be good in different parts. Or if you have an idea for something to include in the story. I ask that you please not nominate yourself for parts, but if you think you know someone else who would fill a part well, please let them be known." -
It is a good story, though. Keep going!
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maybe I should be a wild talking wolf? or a ninja? or maybe ... I dont know, I will let barberbob decide
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psssssst....... add a knight
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(Heph here.xD)
RoadToHell, my cousin, he could maybe be a doctor. I could see him as that. -
( thank you sky XD )
or maybe a knight? -
Wow. Bob, you are so good at writing! :) I really like it! Keep going!
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Ember, you were just oblivious to everything skyler said.
Skyler, thank you.
Sky, If you can give me a bit of detail on this knight, and a reason why we would need one, I might consider it.
Heph, I'd need to know a bit more about your cousin. Actual details on personality. Is he a regular member? Would he fit the part? Is he timid? Is he obnoxious? I don't know the kid.
Sage, thank you. I've started writing the full 1st chapter. But it's a slow start.
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