GTQ: The story
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Thread Topic: GTQ: The story
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Earlier tonight I presented the idea of writing a story using GTQ members as characters. I had no idea what plot I was going to use, nor any characters I wanted. So far, I have given an example of a fight scene, and the opening to Ch 1. It's all I have and I would love for you guys to help me develop my story.
Please give examples of who you think would be good in different parts. Or if you have an idea for something to include in the story. I ask that you please not nominate yourself for parts, but if you think you know someone else who would fill a part well, please let them be known.
Our official character list:
Main Hero: Ana
Main Villain: Bob(me)
Queen/Good ruler: Nuna
Our official plot details:
-Medieval
-Good vs Evil
If you have any suggestions for things you'd like to add to this to make it more detailed, please feel free to say so. -
Fight scene excerpt
The screams still echoed in all of their heads.
"Come on! We've got to hurry!" Shouted Ana as she raced down the hall; the sounds of her teams feet clicking on the stone growing fainter and fainter as she sped further and further ahead of them.
"I will not let this happen again. I will no-"
her voice cut off with a sharp inhale and a gasp. The hilt of the blade protruding out infront of her. Long twisted fingers connected to a slender arm kept her suspended in the air. The hateful grin etched across James' face said more than his words. He spoke slowly, "Hello my dear." But the look in his eyes said even more. They said, KILL
With one fluid movement, he planted his foot in her stomach and slid her off the blade. Her body collapsing to the ground. A small pool of blood growing around her. -
Chapter 1 rough draft/ 1st sketch
"Ana, we need you to go into town for a bit and pick up a few supplies."
"But mom, I went to town just last week! And besides, its near the border. All the weirdos live near the border."
"Now Ana, Blanc is the largest city in all of Stockland. Thered be no place safer to be. Besides, like you said; you went last week. Im sure if youve done it once, youll survive doing it again. Besides, if you're so worried about it, Take Ting with you."
"Like that'll help any."
With that final remark, Ana laced up her shoes, dawned her cape, and strode out the door.
It was cool in Stockland this time of year. Being nearly 4 O'Clock and the dew still fresh on the grass was testament to that. But then again, the grass was wet all year. Ana skipped down the cobblestone street of her quiet town on her way to get her friend Ting for what was guaranteed to be yet another uneventful trip into town.
"Ting! Get your ass out here!" She shouted; pounding on the door until it shook. The neighbors would give her funny looks again. But Ana just smiled and waited, and pretended not to notice them.
"What the hell do you want, woman?" Ting shouted, throwing open the door before Ana could break it off the hinges again.
"Mom wants me to go into town again, and she said to take you along with."
Ting looked confused. "Why the hell did she volunteer me for that?"
"Because she just loves you so much!" Said Ana, pinching Ting's cheek and smiling sarcastically.
"Oh yeah, that." Said Ting. Slipping on her shoes and locking the door behind her. "Did she at least give us a cart."
"Nope! Were walking it."
"I really hate that woman."
"You and me both. Now let's go."
With that, the two young ladies began their journey into town. It would be nearly 8 miles to get there. But not wanting to delay the inevitable any longer, they set out without too much complaint. -
As said on previous thread, kicks ass
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Like I said, I need help with characters and a plot. :P
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Characters I posted late in your offbeat thread.
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That's awesome.
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Cool idea,as for characters,well I like the ideas you have now.But I guess like heph could be sided with ana if she doesn't mind? And like as other side characters..I'm not sure.Just my idea so far I guess.
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Needs more Klingons.
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It's medieval Appay. I don't think I can incorporate Klingons, but if I got a better feeling for something Klingon like, I'll definitely come to you for revision.
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I think I'd be good as a minion, just saying...
Great so far.
But in all honesty, I see Teresa or Hunter being royalty in this. -
This is awesome and overly kickass!
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:O This is epic!
please let me be in it pretty please~ -
I see Mari as a co-minion who has to put up wth me.
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