Write your short stories here.
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Thread Topic: Write your short stories here.
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Nice stories ILM.
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Thanks a lot Biance.
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You're welcome.
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Which did you like best? This isn't bragging because I know they're simple, I wrote them for my cousins because they were bored.
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LOL
I actually cannot imagine bittter, b!tching ILM saying this stuff. -
Maybe my holiday calmed me down, people pissing me off causes stress on me to b!tch.
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What...?
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People over look me, the only thing they think of when they see me is: B!tch that's it, all I am is a b!tch, I can never be anything else. I'm smart in school, can learn things quick, get high marks, but general knowledge can be weak, I'm overlooked, I'm not smart in front of all of you.
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heres my storie once in a faraway land a dude bought a bannana but it was poison he ate it and died the end
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Wow, i like music, you have talent! I mean it. Have you published books like that? You could make millions on those stories. And I should know!! I love reading stories and yours are truly amazing.
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People say my stories are good, but damn, they're not J.K. Rowling's work or anything, but thank you, maybe some day I will.
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My newest short stroy, I call it The Bones Here it is:
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Please tell me what you thought of it, I'd much appreciate it.
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It's actually based on a novel, here's the first two pages of it:
First of all, my parents have been dead for eight years.
They died when I was seven years old, and it was horrible, my dad was driving one Friday night and we had gone out as a treat, of course it was late and he wanted to go home, so he went through a red light and.
Bam. Crash. Scream.
My parents died because they weren’t wearing their seatbelts, while me and my brother, who was only two at the time, sitting with me, had our seat belts on, survived.
Imagine sitting, waiting to get in to bed, belly full from gourmet food, when suddenly the closest people in this world to you, even if you don’t realize how much you love them are vanished from your life forever.
If you’ve lost someone close to you, it’s more than just sadness, if you haven’t, it’s unexplainable.
I don’t know where to begin.
I guess from night one of my parents death.
I screamed when the glass broke, gas came up from the motor, my dad’s head had a long cut, his eyes were closed, unconcius, I looked at mum for help, her legs were covered in broken bits of glass, and loads of cuts were on her legs that they were practically covered in red, I looked at my brother, he was screaming helplessly too, we cried, my head hurt so hard from the crying, my heart beat so fast, I felt it would burst, I was scared to death, I felt cold all over, unable to move, not sure of what to do, all I did was scream and cry. -
Wow Roady that was awesome! Seriously, I thought it was really good. I get a lot of ideas for writing from reading too.
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