Write your short stories here.
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Ok, ok! Creepy fiction story, here we go!
It's a shorter version of my novel The vampire's boyfriend
The train was travelling slowly, it was a dark December night, there were clouds all over the sky, and the only light was the moonlight.
He never beleived that vampires were real, He just thought it was myth, a hoax, but oh no, it was true.
Nicky was sitting in his seat, looking out in to the dark night, tired from the long, delayed journey, he was bored because no one talked to him, he came on to the train alone, and he left it with a companion.
A stewardess came by with with a trolley full of crisps, soft drinks, juices and some sandwiches.
Oh, finally Said Nicky, I've been starving for ages
The stewardess just gave him a smile, he bought a drink and a sandwich and chocolate for later.
Hours passed still and the train had not stopped at a platform, he waited, and waited... and waited, it was like forver.
I should have brought a book with me he said to himself, Or maybe my I pod, anything just to entertain me, I didn't think it would be this long
Neither did I said a whisper.
Nicky jumped in his seat and quickly turned his head, nobody noticed him.
Maybe I was just hearing things He told himself.
A lady got up from her seat, her skin was pale white, she had long black curly hair, she had gone to the toilet, but there was somthing about the way she shot Nicky a look as she passed by, something that gave Nicky a shiver.
The woman had come out of the bathroom so quickly, it was almost as if she changed he rmind about peeing.
She walked more slowly, and looked at Nicky, then stopped by his table.
Excuse me She said, her voice was a develish whisper, Do you mind if I sit opposite you?
Nicky was shocked, what did this weirdo want? But he was going to be polite, he said to her, Um... Sure, Ok, I don't mind
She brought her small purple bag and sat opposite him, staring at him.
She was just staring, staring and staring...
So Nicky decided to start a conversation, but before he could, she already decided before him.
So what's your name? She said, her voice still harsh and a whisper.
Um.. Well, uh, you can call me Nicky He said.
Really? Call me Vicky then she said to him, leaning her elbow on the table.
Oh Ok, then... He was baffled, but thankful that he had someone to talk to, it might be another three hours.
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It was like the journey would never end, but at least Nicky fell asleep.
Vicky had woken him up, she was smiling in his face and she was close up.
You OK? she said.
Um, yeah, sure, I was just tired He said.
Good then She said.
She opened her mouth wide, Nicky stared in to her mouth, she had four sharp fangs.
I've been looking for a boyfriend She said, But I haven't found one as cute as you until now
What the... but before he could say anything, Vicky grabbed his hand and pushed him down, and she bit his neck.
He felt numb, he felt cold, he couldn't feel his body, he fell to the ground and couldn't lift himself up.
My cute little boyfriend She said, You shouldn't have left me all those years ago, but now I'm a vampire, and you're one too
She then stepped on him, which made it harder for him to breath.
You've changed so much that I didn't notice you He said under his breath.
She just laughed.
You'll see this face for all eternity, you'll be my boyfriend for ever and ever and ever
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So what did you all think? The novel's got much more to it, but that was just the shortening and the main stuff, hope you liked it! Now let me read yours! I'd be much interested!
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And that was the first part, the book's got three parts, that was the firts.
Part two is that he trains himself to be a vampire on the train, sucking random people's blood and beating the s--- out of 'em.
Part three is that after he becomes a vampire he ditches Vicky, 'causing her to get mad and then she chases him all over the train and tries to kill him.
You'd think this is a romance novel but it's not, it's meant to be scary. -
xXWeeWiiXx NewbieWow! That storys ace! I wish i could write stuff like that
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wow!!! great story!! hmmm maybe i can come up with a new and improved version of my old story called The Light..
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Oh, this thread hadn't had any posts besides mine so I thought people weren't interested until now. Please write as many short stories as you like.
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Once upon a time there was a little french guy named buddy boo buddy boo was so timid that whenever you shouted boo he would get scared so that's why Buddy boo was called buddy BOO because every time the French went into the war the english would call out boo and buddy boo would run away and thus the French lost the war all because of buddy boo
I know it's stupid but my brother wanted to post it and he could do the fake tears real good -
LOL! That was quite a good one! Good job! I guess mine was kind of long winded then, huh? Ah, it was crap anyway.
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i looked in my brother's notebook (out of curiosity) and this is his "awesome" (notice the quotation marks) story:
bob lived in a house like all you peoples. he ate and slept. he lived happily until billy smashed his papaya. then bob died. and billy lived happily ever after. the end.
yahhhhh..... my bro REALLY has to ummmmm do a lot of things to improve his writing.... by the way my bro is in 6th grade.... lol... i cant help but laugh at it!! its just SO pathetic!!! -
fwanks
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I guess it was, I've written books that are more than 150 pages long, so that IS really pathetic, but I won't laugh because there are SO MANY people in the world that are much better than me, and would laugh at me if they read MY stories, so why should I do it to people who are less?
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Ecklie.
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What does that mean? It sounds like a name of a retard.
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Don't insult Ecklie's name!! it's actually pretty cool
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