Don't leave me hanging part 21 | Comments

Lumini, hmm... interesting. Youre a very interesting character.

Jack, I'm so shy in front of him. I don't know why. *gets shy and runs out of the room on two different occasions*

Marisa, Goodbye Alpha!

Maxy, I need you to stay with me. Please don't go. I'll keep you as my bodyguard.

Emilia, stop being a punk and grow up already. Damn. That stupid little girlie ruined my moment with Jack. She calls my Jack Jackie? I don't approve it. She's so annoying. She's so mean to me and Justin. Wait.... Is she jealous of me? I think she likes Jack. Its so OBVIOUS.

Justin, i'm so excited that justin too comes with us for the party. I don't know why but i feel safe with him. He's such a smart guy.

Kris, he is so quiet. He always cares about me more than Jack. *sees kris standing leaning against the wall with his arms crossed* *goes straightly to him* *puts my hand around his neck and kisses him for a brief moment* *looks around* *realizes the room is not empty* *runs out of the room skipping*

I have a good one, I hope I'm not late!
Name: Charlotte Rose (Charlie)
Personal ity: Outgoing, Flirty, Gorgeous
Side: Good
Man: Cory

Looks: Long, red hair; fair skinned; grey eyes that turn orange

Dress: short and cute; all red with a red rose at the strap

Mask: orange and yellow (feathers are optional)

It's cool how you incorporate your audience's ideas into the story. As a writer you always have to listen to your readers. I would write in a character but the whole thing is over and all so... yeah there ya go. If I were to make a character, she's be on the bad side. I have a knack for villains, because they're characters taken to the extreme. Emmy is a bit rude, but I'm not going to cause friction in the team. There's always going to be that one girl/guy who's hard to work with, but you have to try and co-opperate to succeed in your goals. I don't want to get in anyone's face, the only two people I want to see crash and burn are Logan and Blake. "We're not a team... we're a time bomb" ~Bruce Banner/The Hulk~

@KaliaRox No problems :) It was the truth, so... And I hate them too >.> Google's urls are always so long...

@xxbluti xx Yay ^-^ XD I'll create another one then ^-^ Here it goes:

Name: Layla

Physical appearence: Waist-long, jet black hair and emerald green eyes. In her immortal form, she has red... Things, like those Jack and Kris have, but they have purple and Layla has red.

Dress: Long, dark red, and simple. Strapless. She'll be wearing a bracelet, a black one with golden details.

Mask: A golden one. Let's see if I get the link right... h t t p://w w w.madison avemall.com/pro ducts/pro duct.asp ? sk u = M68 0Pa leBl ueVe lvetMa sk The flower in it will be dark red, the same color as the dress.

Personality : Cool, calm and collected. Most of the time. When she's angry, her voice is low, and hints DANGER, which means that you do NOT want to make her REALLy angry. Might be the last thing you do, depending on what.

Date: Quincy (Oceana can have Jack. Oceana will be on the 'good' side and Layla on the 'bad' side, okay?)

i habent commented sijnce part 19, i didnt even know u made part 20, cant wait for part 22

Character
Name: Savanna

Desc. black hair, with purple highlights, purple eyes that can turn a reddish violet when she's angry, 5'6, Evil and like Blake

Power: morphing
And i wanted a guy
Character
Nam e: Daniel (Dan)

Description: tall, has dark green hair a bit spiked which looks a little black, grey eyes with green specks,(cute),

Power: Invisibility

AHHH! I hope I'm not to late, I probably am, but I've got a good one.

NAME: Lacey

PERSONALITY: smart, shy, clutzy, funny, and kind

DRESS: pale pink with gold lace, but not over the to

LOOKS: short, brown hair, a little past shoulders, small body frame, hazel eyes, rosy cheeks, pale skin, and pink lips not sure what she would look like in magic form

MASK: pale pink with gold design
SIDE: good side, cuz evil people scare me
LOVE THE STORY AS ALWAYS!
XD

I can't believe that Emilia >:( not only did she interupt me and Jack-Jack, but she also won't learn my name.

Masquerade ball?!!? Fuuuunn. I can't wait till I get to that part. XD

These are so interesting and well-written. The plot is great and so are the characters. So far I like both Cory and Jack-Jack about equally! It's so hard to choose T.T hehe, well, onto the next part I go! *skips along to part 22* ^-^

Is it okay with two characters of mine? I'd want Oceana to have Jack, and Layla to have Quincy. I chose the name 'Layla' because it means 'Dark Beauty'(because she's on the 'dark side' XD) :3 Both of the girls are very beautiful, I forgot to say that while describing them... Oceana will be on the good side and Layla on the dark side, okay?

@xxblutixx One more thing(I'm starting to get annoying again >.>). I have to admit I wouldn't like it very much if Jack had another date than _______(me), even though it's my own character -.- So I'd apreciate if her date was Quincy. If it turns out to be a little complicated with a 'good' girl being the date of a 'bad' guy, Oceana can also be 'bad' then. Or maybe, if you ask me, I'd like to make TWO characters, one good(to Jack) and one bad(to Quincy). You can choose what Oceana will be, and then the other girl will have the guy that's left.

i give up -_-.i'll just describe it.The dress is greyish silver with a single strap about 4 shoulder length.there's a flowy bottom that ends at the shoes,with a tie on the waist that ends in a sparkly swirl.The top is bejewled beautifully.it's awesome.The mask is just like any other mask,but it's grey,and it has a swirl on one side that ends just above the top of the mask.Their is tiny patterns on it.

Aha!I know how to do this now!Okay,look up - grey formal dress - on google image search.It's the one with the blonde girl who's looking away from the camera.It's under the one exquisite evening dress thing.The first one.Thanks!

@xxblutixx Maybe I do. Maybe not. I don't know. It's just that I seriously don't try to say nice nor bad things about myself. We can say I let the self-judgement to others. I just act like I want to, without thinking about it. And I have no idea of how I got in to this topic >.>

@KaliaRox Ah, I know how you feel. See those annoying comments down there, trying to get a link right? That's me >.>

DESCRIPTION CONTINUED:
Power :The ability to shrink of course!

Personalit y:Sad,happy,mixed emotions.kind,yet angry at the same time/kinda emoish

Date:Just in(Jusss!!),Kris,or ,if i have to -_- Logan.

Good side or Evil Side:Depends on the guy-if Kris of Justin,good.If Logan,evil.

THAN KS!!!YOU'RE SUCH AN AWESOME WRITER!!:DDDDD

I would love to make a character for you, but I'm currently writing a quiz myself, and I need to channel all of my creative powers to it xD Can't wait for the next one!

Loved it! I can't wait until the next part! I can't really think of a character but I'm sure the next part will be great whether I submit one or not. I'll be looking.

@xxblutixx Maybe! We can wait and see if there are others, and THEN decide who's date she'll be :) And interesting things? Like what? The Emily-thing, that I don't trust her?