Beautiful Secrets Part 30 | Comments

First impression of Ash: well ;) he seems way more flirtous(definite sp) than Alex, funner, more dangerous. Infact I love him already, he doesn't really remind me of my Chris, cause he seems way more laidback yet dangerous than my Chris, I miss my Christofer ok, don't mind me in this corner silently crying for my CHRIS *Cry, sniff, cry* *singing* We could have had it all, rolling in the deep *idk why i'm singing this song, i just miss Christofer, but Ash is new and i likee

Ash? ... oolala ;) oh darn it... someone else to tempt me away from Alex XD I'm excited for Beautiful Lies already ^^ and an epilogue? I think yes!

@IceBabe nope, unacceptable, you must read the rest of it XP kidding, but it IS pretty awesome ;)

I would like the epilogue. .3.

And I knew it was Ash. Good foreshadowing. First impresion? Full of himself, yet also helpful. Wants to be a hero, but also wants to get all the credit of a hero.

I still want to know what the paper said!!! I like Ash. He reminds me of Christopher. I want to rescue Christopher!!! I want him back!!! Can't wait for Beautiful Lies!!! As always, I'll be looking.

Awesome entry for Ash! But i'm still waiting patiently to meet Oath.

Can't wait for beautiful lies! :) First impression of Ash... he's cool. What does he look like besides black hair?

omg!!!! what did the paper say?! First impression of ash is kinda cute, hopefully not another gumbo, and maybe competition for christofer and alex!

Loved it! Impression of Ash is well kind of cute but arrogant too. Can't wait for the next part!

Please make part 1 of Beautiful Lies soon! I can't wait to rescue Christofer!

REALLY! *gives you puppy dog eyes*

she said what it said on paper in the last paragraph i think...

anyways, I CANNOT WAIT FOR BEAUTIFUL LIES

Omg! i can't wait! but im too lazy to find the rest of somebody special lol.

Awwh I Think Ash Likes April More Though :(

Omggggggggg!!!!!!!! !! I'm so excited for beautiful lies!!!!!!! Hope it comes out first I luv ur series!!!!

Omg! I remember when i read this. Now theres so much on it and i forgt about it.

AMAZAING! Well, Ash seems like a good FRIEND. I'm still team Christofer!

first? ash? HOT!

ash... wow, umm hold on is he startin to like April... cause he know's me....hmmmmmmmm... i like christofer an-d maybe ash :D

ash is HOTTTTT

Ash is soooooooo HOT!!!! HE SO FUNNY!!!! I LOVE ASH AND ALEX NOW!!!