Warrior cats life | Comments
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This was okay. However, you could've put more detail into the questions, and slow the pace of the story. And separate it into sentences, like:
1. you have just opened your eyes all you see is your mother and siblings the first thing you do is
Maybe: You open your eyes for the first time, and see the walls of the nursery around you. You see your mother, along with your other littermates. AS you get to your paws, you think about what to do.
I hope that helps. I still appreciate the effort, however.
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