Supernatural: Eerie Beginnings Part 2 | Comments

Oooo I like where this is going, sounds promising! One thing though, be careful with your point-of-view and verb tenses. In the beginning, you were switching at times between first and second person point of view and between present and past tense.

Hm, I think my favorite supernatural creatures are... bah, I can't choose. Vampires, elves, nymphs something like that XP

As for the guy, don't fuss about the looks too much, it's all how he acts and presents himself. My personal favorite for a guy tends to include dark hair and contrasting eye color like blue or bright green. Oh, having a runner's body and abs is a plus for the guy too XP

Can't wait for more of this story! Part 3 soon, please :)

Love it love it love it! Thank you very much for notifying me about this brilliant quiz!

The Fae have always interested me, they are very fascinating but I haven't gotten a chance to write about them in my own quizzes. Vampires and werewolves are used to often. And incubus are very interesting characters to write about when you have a female heroine, even though they are mostly used in erotica they can be used in other ways as well for stories.

I'll be pretty happy with whatever guy that you give for us to read, I always love seeing the spark of writers creativity in every character they write into a story.

Anyway I can't wait for the next quiz! As always I'll be looking!

Good job btw I love werewolves. I know its typical but werewolves often are the ones that are most confident, funny, sweet and are usually the hottest guy but if you pick another creature with those qualities I wouldn't mind not having a werewolf. BYE and Good job!

Sorry this took so long for me to read. I loved it! I have a crush on Daniel already. xP Please make the next part soon!

Btw, my favorite supernatural creature is a tie between a vampire and a dark angel.

Yeah I saw your comments keep reading pleas and I love how you write a comment on each part it was so hard to read it on my pep but since I have my iPad now it should be a little easier.

Thanks you for writing this serie !

Great story. And I am a huge vampire fan so you have clue how happy I was to read about it.

I'm a fan of ghosts! As for the guy, blonde hair, blue eyes, funny and good natured.

OMG!!!!!!!!! Daniel kissed me *faints*

Part 3