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That was really great! It did sound like Maximum Ride (just a tad!), but you had to get inspiration from somewhere! Besides, you've got ideas in there that make it your own. Other than that, I think what caught by attention was the scs (short choppy senteces) You can fix those by adding a semi-colon between two simple sentences, or adding a comma and a conjunction. Overall it was amazing!
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@Bookworm: I'm thinking about it...maybe! THANKS!!
@HPlove r: I've been old that a lot, but don't worry, if I ever publish another part on here, it'll be different from MR.
@Rinin: Man, you are awesome!! Thanks for reading!!
@Hogwa rtsLove: I saw your comment and I was like, "Heart? Brace yourself! HL commented!!" Thank you so much for your endless support!!
@Allyc at: That is a LOT of '+'s, Ally! And you DO have a writing soul! I just wish you would use it to publish something already!!!
@natu hleegayle: Just like every single one of your updates!
@singin 234: Thanks! Everybody's agreeing with HL....
@briauna: Thanks for reading! I'm glad you 'LOVED' it!!
@xxblutixx: I just love you, ya know? (in that sisterly way!)
@_ViolaLov er_: Omg...THANK YOU for understanding! Also, thanks for the grammer leson- I really need it!!
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A++++++++++++++++++ and 1000000000000000000 %
This was very poetic, and I loved it! It was amazing! Do you know what this story reminds me of? "The Outsiders." It's written as if with a grand deeper meaner, but taken lightly, which is extremely difficult. You described the situation perfectly, and it was incredibly balanced in detail. This makes my mind stop with a happy, blank, blissfulness. I legit just found the meaning of life from this. xD
And I always ADORE when they end with the same thing they start with.
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You could publish that if it didn't sound so much like MR! A+ (or 100%, whichever)! Love how it started & ended the same way. If I had a penny for every time I wished I could write like you I would be the richest person on Earth!
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Loved it! Yes, that's an A! It did remind me of the Maximum Ride series, but that doesn't affect it's wonderfulness. Like the others said, the way it comes around full circle is very effective.
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You're magnificent! You definitely need to publish a piece of your writing so people can be blessed to read your awesome stories with your amazing writing skill! I'm jealous!
Bluebird1 -
A+ or 100% is a high enough grade.
I have to agree with HL! I love how it began and ended the same way! I really loved this! It was, nostalgic for me. When you're talking about flying. I was just really blown away! This was beautiful! :)
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I thought it was really well written! A+! But, and i hate to be a downer, it sounds alot like the book series Maximum Ride, also with winged flying mutants. But i thought it was really good!
HPlover1 -
I should have read this earlier! That as amazing! Truly magical! I don't know how anyone could give that less than 100%!
Freeze1 -
100%! A+! That was amazing. Seriously, you could publish that.
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A++++++++++++++++++ +++++++++++++++++++ +++++++++++++++++++ ++!:D
As HL said, very poetic. It was awesomeful, balanced, the characters reactions and dialouge was perfect. Wish I had a writing soul like you do, Cal! Great work.
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@LetsParty: And people think I'M sweet...YOU, missy, are SWEET!!!
@Allyca t: Yeah..But I seriously wish you would freaking PUBLISH something already!! :)
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1000% (oops.. I added an extra zero, I'm too lazy to fix. lulz) so many characters hard to keep up~ Heh, loved it!
RinRin1 -
I loved it! 100% I agree with HL!
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I love your series!!! Ahhhhhhh Percy marry meee!! >.
ayamesho1 -
I LOVE IT
briauna1 -
@ayamesho no Percy marry ME!!!!
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@ayamesho no Percy marry ME!!!!
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@Calypso1315 Yes, it is, indeed, a lot a +'s! :D And pfft, I'm just shy with my work ._.
Allycat1
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