Midnight Love part 1 | Comments

Other than the spelling and grammar mistakes, this story was very good. Maybe add a bit more details and explain the story more so the readers don't get confused. Btw, C.J sounds very cute. He reminds me of my crush.

I like it. Don't worry I suck at my spelling. But I like it and can't wait for part 2. When I saw this I saw Midnight Love and one of my quiz series is called Midnight. I thought that was kinda cool. But I really like. I liked it. C.J sound cool. Just you spelling and gramar gets me confused but its okay. Just explain more and it'll be fine.

It's a good story. I suggest you add more grammer because it doesn't make sense most of the time.