HogwartsRomance: part 1

this is my hogwarts romance story the first one ive ever done so please be honest in your comments:P any suggestions on how to make it better are welcome also whos your favourite charactor :p

so yeah enjoy if you dont like it tell me and why in my comments please;)next one will be done soon so if you have any ideas put them in quick!though nobody really reads these so yeh:L

Created by: Jessyxxx
  1. you've arrived at platform 9 3/4 as a tranfer going into your second year. you were taught by your dad on the road as you travelled the world with him till you decided to settle down.
  2. you walk through the wall to find the gleaming red hogwarts express. your just on time you get on the train as soon as the clock stikes twelve and you set off. there are four carages with spaces which do you pick?
  3. you step into that carrage to find two tall gangly ginger twins laughing at another ginger haired boy who had eaten one of the twins sweets and nose was swelling twice its size, a guy with a irish accent laughing histerricly at this too,a girl with brown hair reading a book completely uninterested in this and one boy who you you knew with a messy mop of jet black hair bright green eyes and glasses, this was none other than harry potter!
  4. 'can i sit with you guys?'they all notice you suddenly, the ginger embarrest tries to hide his nose before the brown haired girl shrinks it witha spell 'shrinkulus!' everyone smiles at you and the twins say at the same time 'sure you can' then one says 'im fred this is george my twin. that other ginger prick is ron our brother the girls hermione and thats seamus' you look and smile at them all in turn but when you grin at seamus he blushes! 'and this,' continues fred 'is as you pobally alredy know-' 'harry potter' interupts harry and gets up to shake your hand. you talked and played poker (you were a natural at poker as your such a good liar and played alot with your dad)so you won 4 galleon and 7 knuts! soon you arrived at hogwarts!!!
  5. you took the horseless carages towards the castle but when you arrived a witch who named herself professor mcgonagol she showed you around and told you about the different subjects teachers and how the school worked (moving staircases, talking and moving paintings!)
  6. i will now take you to the main hall to be sorted into your house the first years should be done with their sting now... oh and i hope your in gryfindor, ive taken a shine to you :)
  7. you are waiting outside the main hall to be put into your house when some pale blond haired guy walks up to you 'hi, im draco malfoy. no need to introduce you i know who you are or more likely...your mother'he said in a pompous voice you had heard about this guy he was in slytherin and had caused harry and the guys alot of trouble last year but what caught your attention was the bit about my mother she left you when you were three. 'what do you know about my mother malfoy' you snarled 'oooh'he teased'mind the attitude'ignoring your question he added'i like you, ____ hope to see you in slytherin'and with that he walked off
  8. 'hey' said a freindly voice startling you, 'i saw malfoy come from this direction has he been hassling you? im cedric btw' he was wearing hufflepuff robes and a charming smile, you didnt know how to reply seeing as you hardly knew the guy so in the end you said 'no im fine'he looked relieved 'glad to hear, he bothers you come looking okay?' you nodded and he left.
  9. its time to be sorted you want to be in...
  10. you sit on the stool and place the talking hat on your head thers a tense silence in the audience but you can hear the hat wispering to you 'hmmm where to put you... your very brave that could mean gryffindor though your also clever so maybe ravenclaw your are loyal, very loyal though i dont think hufflepuff is right for you... ahhh yes your mother-' 'my mother!'you gasp'why yes your mother she tells me to put you in slytherin' 'NO! why?' you plead 'that is for you to find out..... hmmm i decided it is to be GRYFFINDOR!' shouts the hat.cheers erupt from the gryfindor table you look at your mates and see them grin hugely at you but seamus is blushing and you see his best mate dean laugh at him.
  11. you eat the feast that magically apears infront of you on gold plates you then head to dorm your not very tired so you stay up late with seamus fred george and dean. soon you all agree to go to bed at about 2:00am but dean pulls you back and says to you in private 'find some alone time with seamus, yeah?' then he just walks off you call to him he hears you but doesnt turn around. but you know what this is about...
  12. the next day you meet cedric andspend the whole day getting to know him you see ron a few times but whenever you try to speak to him he just grunts and walks off:/next time you see him you take him aside and you ask him whats up? he replys in a gruff voice'nothing' but you see him glaring at cedric over your shoulder:(but he wouldnt talk anymore after that and he went straight to bed when we went to dorm
  13. everyone has gone to bed and you are alone in your dorm, you feel miserable about your mum you wish she never left you but how did malfoy know her and why did the hat asscotiate her with slytherin. you start scrunching up balls of paper and chucking them into the fire...Suddenly the fire goes out plunging you into darkness and you hear a voice a sweet charming but evil voice...a womens voice....its...
  14. its....a........ CLIFFHANGER!!!!!!!!!!!! bye bye guys :P please rate and comment, honest opinions! :D

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