Hogwarts Love Story Pt.3 | Comments
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Let me commerate you on your story. That was very lengthy (I pushed myself to read it when it's 2am here...) and I'm glad I did. The detail you gave made the story come to life. It was great! Although, I do agree with @Bluebird, the different points of views confused me. However, I am impressed that you can write so much especially since you released a quiz awhile ago. Keep it up ! x
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Can't wait till the next part! The detail was great but the one thing that confused me is you kept on going from 2nd to 1st person all in the same sentences so that confused me a little bit. But never the less it was great and I'll keep looking for the next part! Like @_ViolaLover_ said I hope I don't do anything stupid but I'll go with the flow. Thank you for this delightful quiz.
Bluebird1 -
Great quiz, though the change from 2nd person to 3rd person did confuse, but it was still brilliant, i liked the idea of adding your own characters, instead of sticking with all the original characters, i do wish Cedric is in it, How much I love Oliver, but in this story not so much
angelic41 -
I'm sorry about the 1st to 2nd person thing, it's just, I found it hard to write in another person's perspeckive (sp) so I'm writing it like it's me talking then going back and changing it. I'm REALLLY sorry. Will try and fix that!
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Hmmm, I really hope I don't do anything stupid
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Yey Guys! Going to bed! Hope you like this, I went to go and eat and couldn't stop thinking about this quiz so what to do? MAKE IT!! Hope you like it!
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cool cool cool quiz!
dragon1
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