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First of all, I think it's really sweet that you'd do this for her. Yeah chocolates and flowers are nice, but this shows you put some thought into it. I would recomend the quizzes "Beautiful Secrets" by Dannica, or "Someone Special" also by Dannica. "Beautiful Secrets" isn't completed yet, but the other one is! She's an amazing writer with lots of detail in her stories. I do agree with the others that mushy is good, but not to much. If you have to much romance, then it gets cheesy. It's easier to write if you can relate it to a personal experience. If you can't do that, a great way to create characters is to base them off of people you know. Hope I helped! Good luck!

I think what your doing is really sweet. I would recommend "Paranormal Love" By Firey_Soul or "Someone Special" by Dannica. Her other love story isn't done yet but its a good place to start. I can kinda relate to what your going threw. For school I had to write a love story,(i now, really dumb) and I was like, " how the hell am i supposed to know what to put in a love story!" Even though i'm a girl, I was hopelessly lost,(always been a tomboy XD) so I read some love stories on here and googled some ideas for love stories. Hope this will help and I'll keep my fingers crossed for you, And if all else fails, chocolate is a good way to start!

I hope you are reading this: Well I do agree my friend Dannica is a wonderful writer, but From your point of view, i don't know if you'll like it, but still check out Beautiful Secrets, and Never From Ordinary (It then changes to Never From Ordinary Love), Love In The Middle Ages, Teen Spies. What you like and all. I just don't like girly things, make a twist in your story

It depends if the girl you like is a tomboy or is girly. If she's girly, then go with the mushy, gushy junk.(sorry don't care for stuff like that) But if she's more of a tomboy, go for somethings that are more funny than they are when there dripping with love.(just had to put that in there XD) Also, aviod awkward moments- there are enough in a girls life. I really hope this helps!

Anyway think of writing your love story as a fun experience. When writing your love story think of something that you would love having to write. Try reading some other love stories such as "Paranormal Love" By Firey_Soul or "I Just Need You Here" By Ardeo9999. Those are some great ones. Then maybe you could get an idea on what to write. If that doesn't work lots of chocolate could possibly be your only option left.

Am I late in reccomending stuff (is that hw u spell it). Just look for my series whichever u want to read, i try not be girly and mushy anf stuff, but it seems my many fans love that but i managed to add horror, i recommend Never From Ordinary, just search me and go to gotoquiz user and you'll see all my series. I do have to say that's a romantic thing, Just be urself, and do things from your heart,, infact just write a love story about one guy (you) and one girl (her) and go from there if u do love her you'll find it easier to do. Well i'm a girl so i know these things XD, Girls like originality, and what you come up with that's so special. Gudluck, and do check me out, but i started my series as a newbie but from part 10 (i think) i started improving, i've got like 90 girls reading my series

Bro chill out :) okay yessss- gurls loovveee mushy gushy. But try not to add any awkward moments into the quiz- they hate that cuz they fear it might happen. i am acutally an author and i could probably mix up a good story for you..hmmmm...okay- i dont mind ATT ALL if you use this idea.

Maybe your at school and you see her- add good sentences like uhmmm; "Every time i saw her, the sun seemed so dull next to her, her beauty made it seem like nothing could be far brighter than her"

So anyway, explain YOUR feelings for her in the story. If she thinks is bad- big whoop, just get her a love card instead :P

hope i was some help, GOOD LUCK!

Will Im working on a love story called Love is forever and my favorite series are Beautiful Secrets and "I just need you here. You can also Search love story theres a lot of love stories on here. Hope I was of help :)

Hey there! I know ur friend (never actually met her) but im a girl and i am making a love series that she read. She mustve liked it, cuz she told me they were good, so if you search I Just Need You Here, that is the beginning of a quiz series and so far up to a part 7, to be continued later. glad i could help!!

If you do need help from me , just go to the forums and make a thread shouting Come Here Angelic4, only her!, and i'll be there to help, use the forum Offbeat, and Dating and Relationships. I'll be there

Ardeo9999

She/he is an awesome love story writer. Her/his love story "I just need you here" is awesome and I love it.

I love Matt!!!!!!! See it's kinda a team edward, jacob thing with her story but better Team Matt and Team Nate i'm Team Matt of course!!!!!!!!!

p.s.- the mushier you make it, the more the girl will like it. all girls are dying to be kissed and hugged and told theyre beautiful ALL THE TIME. btw, im a tomboy by 75%, the other 25% is girly. But i luuuv star wars- check out my quiz Some People THINK They Know Star Wars!!

oh man this quiz was funny XD question 3 explained it and i think i lost it on question 5 XD i like this quiz

(im a guy and can relate to alot of that)

Try paranormal love by Firey_Soul it's really good. I should give you some ideas.

what was your question again?

Lol that's so cute! The most popular ones are parnormal romances......vamps /wolves/magic ect.

good luck with writing :D

ya you should try paranormal love by Firey_Soul or They love me by Dannica

Put out the story of you and her, but change the names!!!!!!!!!! XD