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My OC is Willowpaw, and she comes from a clan that was formed from a group of cats that left the clans long ago. The original cats were all ones that had fallen in love with cats from other clans and were then all called out at a Gathering and were told they either had to give up on their relationships or leave the clans. They hadn't expected that a fair amount of cats would actually rather leave the clans than give up the one they loved. So they left and after a lot of traveling found the perfect place to make their own clan. They had some trouble settling in at first, but in the end they were able to overcome their trials and have a good place to live where they could make their own rules, and really just kinda modified the Warrior Code to fix things they thought weren't quite right.
A bunch of moons later, where it's been so many generations they've lost track, Willowpaw is born with her siblings to a medicine cat mom, cause that's something they fixed, and she likes to have fun, but is very cautious about her siblings and is always the one to run after them and keep them out of trouble. She comes from Skyclan and Riverclan heritage more strongly than the other, because the original group left before Skyclan was driven from the forest, so she's good at swimming and climbing, though climbing more so. She becomes an apprentice and starts falling for a medicine cat apprentice, but before she can become a warrior a kit ends up in the river and she goes after it, saving it only to be knocked unconscious and drown. Now in this clan, Starclan cats actually visit them on a daily basis and it's pretty common to see at least one a day when you're in the camp. That's because Starclan didn't feel like they needed to take the 'hands off' approach here and decided to be more down to earth and honest with the cats of the clan, rather than cryptic and mysterious. (If you couldn't tell, this is kinda me fixing things that I see has a problem in the books or things that I just do
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n't like. and for some reason this stupid thing cut off my comment, so I'm posting the rest here, I guess. Just not in as much detail as before because that was a pain to write the first time and I'm not doing it again.) She could go visit her family, because it's actually pretty common to see cats from Starclan just visiting living cats in the camp, but the only stay in the camp because they've had their life to live and affect things, now they'll just give advice and chat. But she's afraid to face her family because she's ashamed of the way she died and thinks it was a humiliating way to go. Eventually Willowpaw ends up making her way to the original clans. There were more details but I can't remember all I wrote now. But in the end she ends up being the only Starclan cat that decides to try and save the clans from something that they just can't defend themselves against, and in the process ends up unlocking a power that all Starclan cats have they just didn't know they had it. But with it she's able to save the clans and then tries to help them fix things up, especially their relations.
A lot of this was actually about her adventures as a Starclan cat rather than a living cat, and I did that because I thought it was interesting to follow a Starclan cat for once and see more aspects of Starclan in general. So If anyone wants to use ideas from this for their own thing, go for it. I'd love to see more Starclan cat stories out there.
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My OC is a roughly 28 moon old Tom, LampreyStreak from River-clan. He has ice blue eyes and his pelt is a sleek, warm grey color with a darker strip down the back and speckles on his paw pads. He has generally short fur, with longer inner ear fur and a tail tuft.
He grew up without his father, and was really never close to his mother. He's a generally snarky, confident type of tom although he's overly protective about the few he does care about in his clan.
He eventually got a mate, RobinTail, who's nearly 4 moons younger then him. They ended up having kits, and the litter of 3 only survived a few moons thanks to him. There was a prophecy, of which he and a few other cats thought were about his kits, and in the end it seemed like they would have a large negative impact on the clan. LampreyStreak was agitated over these thoughts for a few moons until he let the kits out of camp. He went with them, and he returned without them and was assumed to have murdered them by the clan. He was later exiled, and around 32 moons he gets into a fight with a group of rogues- over the time being alone he had thinned out, and was ultimately unable to fend off the group himself.
[I wrote over 5 pages of lore for him... This is in short]
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Name: Small'Adder
Appearance: A small-sized tom with a dark coat, making him blend seamlessly into the shadows of the forest.
Personality: Small'Adder is a devoted and caring brother to his sisters, Rose'Petal and Viper'Blood. He finds joy in hunting and takes pleasure in basking in the sun's warmth. His social nature shines through in his fondness for chatting with his sisters, sharing stories and experiences. However, despite his bravery in many areas, Small'Adder has a significant aversion to spiders, often avoiding places where they might lurk.
Likes: Hunting, sunbathing, spending time with his sisters.
Dislikes: Spiders, prolonged conversation, the idea of loss
Extra crap: Small'Adder and his sisters are in Meadowclan, a large territory with minimal human activity, but large birds of prey, snakes and wild dogs.
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Got 59%, though trying to make my ocs as original as possible isn't very interesting to me. I'm happy with the way he is now.
His name is Windthorn. He was born in Shadowclan, and his father was the leader, Toadstar. Toadstar was evil, and planned to destroy Windclan- he's the one who suggested the prefix Wind, and when Windthorn's mother Fennelseed was like "Hey isn't that kind of disrespectful to Windclan?" Toadstar's response was essentially "Who cares, they won't exist much longer anyway."
Shadowclan under Toadstar continued to hassle Windclan all the way up until Windthorn became a warrior, and when he learned that his father was planning a big final attack to wipe them out permanently, he decided he'd had enough and ran away to warn them.
He knew he wouldn't be able to go back to Shadowclan after betraying them like that, so he asked to join Windclan. The Windclan warriors were pretty suspicious of him, but they needed all the help they could get.
Things got pretty dramatic at the next gathering, and after that, Shadowclan attacked Windclan. Thanks to Windthorn's early warning, they were able to get backup from Thunderclan and drive back the Shadowclan cats. Windthorn fought on Windclan's side and defeated Toadstar, causing him to lose a life.
Shadowclan has left Windclan alone since then. Windthorn is living contentedly in Windclan, and has become mates with a Windclan warrior named Turtledove.
Appearance-wise, Windthorn is white with grey spots, like his father. Both of them have pale green eyes.
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(I'm french) My Oc's name is "Soleil Ombrag" (Shaded Sun), a 26 moons cat. He's a two-tone male : most of his body is black, with the tip of his muzzle, his nose, two spots above his eyes, his belly (down to his chest), the tip of his tail and the tips of some of his legs, brown. His eyes are amber.
He's now a warrior (currently in the french rp "Clan de la Pluie" on (Rain Clan)) but he started out as a loner.
He was born with his little sister "Petite Aubpine" (Little Hawthorn) as a loner, so was his father, Albator, but not his mother "Plume des Sentiers" (Trails Feather), who left her clan to give birth to them. His mother was seriously injured protecting her young from a dog attack, while Albator was out hunting. With Trails Feather now almost totally crippled, Albator went a little crazy, blaming the kittens, and began to get violent. This violence continued for much of Shaded Sun's childhood, when his mother was unable to really intervene. Eventually, my oc became so hardened that he decided to poison his own father with yew berries. Unable to bear his own actions, he then ran away (at 10 moons) to become a total loner, before finding a clan that took him in, but without knowing his past...
As a result, he's reserved, prefers not to be around too many people, doesn't trust people, and can quickly lose his temper when a situation annoys him, even if he's trying to be friendly. He is very protective of kittens and bitterly hates dogs.
That's it, I think
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Soleil Ombrag* oupsi x)
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My oc is a fluffly grey she-cat with green eyes named Clover. Shes a loner but then follows her friend Rose into clan life in thunderclan. Then her friend ends up betraying her and chooses thunderclan over her. So she ends up in riverclan, eventually gaining their trust and becoming a warrior but keeping her name. her parents also abandoned her (bc why not) so when her friend abandons her for thunderclan shes even less trusting. (Cute fact I made up, since shes used to catching mice, ect. Sometimes she gives the kits/apprentices mice as treats)
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My OC is Dawnripple/Dawnstar, a 28 moon she cat who was born and raised in Riverclan. She has medium-length white fur and grey/silver stripes on her back and tail. Her right, front paw is dark grey and her eyes are a blazing, deep blue colour. Over her left eye she has a light pink scar that she got in a battle with shadowclan. She is noble, loyal and trustworthy and is well respected among the clans. Frostfeather, a thunderclan cat, and Sagefrost, her brother were part of a prophecy to save the clans from wolves. She lost her mate to wolves. It broke her heart, but she came back stronger, and Larksplash watches her from starclan. She died at 73 moons from greencough but shines brightly from silverpelt every night.
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My OC is Foxfire, a 31 moon old she-cat from Shadowclan, she has orange fur, black paws, and white ear tips, muzzle, and tail tip- sorta like a fox (hinting at her prefix)! Her eyes are light blue, and she has pink lashes, like her pads or inner ears. Due to her being my warriorsona who also represents me, she shares as personality with me: sarcastic, caring, anxious, and shy. She doesn't yet have a backstory, but it's being developed! (I dunno where I got her suffix from xd)
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My OCs name is SunWhisker. She is a female warrior of windclan.
Her mate is formerly from Shadowclan and joined windclan to be with her. His name is dimfur. She journeyed from being a kitty pet to becoming a warrior. Her best friend was Colorstar, but in a second battle with the dark forest Colorstar died to save her from a vicious cat named LostHawk. Her fur is yellow with orange spots and green eyes. She went on a mission for a prophecy: go beyond boundaries and discover the past to save the future. I am currently writing a fanfic, so if any one wants there characters in there I'll add them.
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My oc's name is RiverShine. Her backstory is when she was a small kit in the nursery while her mother was gathering flowers for decorations for the nursery, because she was the only queen in the nursery and it needed fixing. So while River kit was in there alone, there was a rustle behind her and out jumped a wild eyed fox who snarled at her. A sudden flash of fur whipped past her.It was her father who took the blow the fox sent. Her father stumbled on the ground and fell limp.The fox ran away as her mother chased it off.River kit stared traumatised by the sudden event and that is her backstory.Now she is older and is an apprentice, her new name is River paw. She is a very social she cat who listens carefully to other cats than they think, learning secrets and drama easily. She has a silky smooth fur and tends to pick lavender often by the bank and loves going on patrols. She is very nice but is snappy to rude cats. Her mother TimberWood is a quiet cat, mostly because of her fathers death. Her father's name was TwigFeet, he was a bright and loveable tom cat. He loved flowers and was always protective of River paw. River paw is an apprentice of Thunderclan and her only kin in the clan who is alive is Running thought, a tom cat and Thrush wing, another tom cat.Her close friends are stripe cloud, Glowing dream, Miststorm, and talonsting.Her siblings are Frostfoot a male warrior and Dappleleaf a medicine she cat.
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My OC is Moonlit Stream, she was abandoned and taken in by RiverClan, before they threw her out again. Her rogue name is Moon. She has been stealing prey from Riverclan for many moons. She is a completely black cat, save for a slight tinge of blue on her nose. She has piercing green eyes, and is skillful at hunting and fighting other cats (particularly those in RiverClan). She was abandoned because her mother was killed in an accident on a Thunderpath and her father was trampled by a monster. She is still alive and is recruiting cats to form her own clan: DeathClan, and take down everyone who stands in their way, starting with humans.
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My Oc is Dove feather, a fluffy light grey she who has lighter grey rosette markings and freckles. Her eyes are green, and when she is full grown, she is not much larger than an apprentice. Her back right leg is paralyzed from being hit by a monster as a Kit. She is grumpy, short tempered and snappy, but has a soft spot for kits. In her lifetime she and her mate, Elktrot have three litters of kits, but while she was pregnant with the third litter, Elktrot tragically died. After her third litter grew up she adopted two more kits whose mothers had died. Her death was sad, as she died defending the nursery during a rouge attack, but she reunited with Elktrot in starclan.
She has a much longer backstory, and Im sorry I didnt go over her Kit and appreciate years (or moons I geuss) I was unable to write it all due to the character limit. I apologize for the bad writing .
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I forgot to mention that she is in Shadowclan- oops
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My oc's name is DeerTooth. He is a brown, white speckled windclan tom with blue eyes. He was formerly a kittypet called moose , but he got abandoned in the woods by his sister, willow, alongside his littermate, cheeto. Cheeto walked off and got attacked by some rougues and went to live with loners. Deertooth was an apprentice when he joined the clan, with the name DeerPaw. He went into the forest and caught a few prey. But then Windclan was invaded by Shadowclan, and he watched another apprentice die. This scarred him. When he was made a warrior, he made a promise to protect kits.
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My OC is named Reed'Stalk, a she cat. She is part of River Clan. Reed'Stalk's mate is a pure black tom called Black'Shard. Reed'Stalk was born with no siblings. Her parents were his dad, Dawn'Shade and his mother, Frosted'Sage (dead). Reed'Stalk's fur is a gradient of reds and browns. She had a mentor named Raven'Shadow, but after her death, Reed'Stalk's personality changed. She became snarky and cold. The only person who could bring her back was her mate. She never kitted, but showed her love for her clan through her noble death, after she had saving a kit from a member of Shadow Clan and being killed to a deep slash in the throat. She almost was named deputy, but was challenged and lost.
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My OC's name is Nightfall. She is a black cat with eyes so blue they look purple. She has long fur, being a Norwegian Forest cat + Siberian cat cross breed, and she has pretty rosettes dotted across her back. She has white spots beneath her eyes and light grey stripes across her face. Her tail is bushy, and her pelt, but she is still quite a small cat. The tip of her left ear is white, and she has a white left paw. Her left eye is half blind, with a long, ugly scar running across it. Her left ear is half missing, and her right ear torn. She has many large scars along the left side of her pelt, and a few on the right.
Nightfall began her life as a small kit, born in an abandoned Twoleg shed on the outskirts of Galaxyclan territory. Her mother was called Starlight, her father Shadowfur, (He was a former member of Galaxyclan) and she had two siblings, Moon and Midnight. They were told many stories of their fathers old clan, and by four moons, they had almost learnt the warrior code by heart.
That was when tragedy struck. A dog was let loose from the nearby Twoleg den, and it killed most of Nightfalls family. The dog scarred her badly, injuring her eye. Nightfall blamed herself, as she insisted that she should've been out there helping, rather than lying half dead on the ground.
Everyone she loved was gone, but one not dead. Moon, her brother, was still alive, although Nightfall didn't know it.
Still only four moons, Nightfall was ready to give up, until she was found by an old russet tom called Paradise. He took her in, helping with her grief, and all seemed to be well until Paradise became weaker. He eventually passed away, leaving Nightfall hopelessly alone.
That was, until a familiar cat with stars in her paws visited Nightfall in her dreams. Nightfall's mother had come to guide her.
Eventually she was discovered by Galaxyclan, accepted after a two moon trial, and giving the apprentice name Nightpaw.
Once she became a warrior, she fell in love with a Stor
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(eheh...) a Stormclan warrior called Russetflame. He returned her love and they snuck out most nights to talk.
That's all I've done so far for meh baby Nightfall, but she's a new OC so I'm hoping I can get more done laterrr :P
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My OC's name is Lemoncloud- She was a mother of two litter of kits and sadly died giving birth to the second.
She's a tall, slender tabby she-cat with striking yellow eyes and a cream-and-light ginger pelt. She was named Lemoncloud after her eyes (lemon yellow eyes), and her fluffy, soft-hearted demeanor (could- obviously).
Lemon cloud was a beloved member of StormClan. She had mentored 3 cats before her death.
She now looks over her family and friends from StarClan, and wishes she could still walk among them-
She gave her brother (Everbreeze) his 9th life- For compassion and care of all who need him.
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My cat is named Vixenstar. She leads an OC clan called West Clan.
Vixenstar was originally born as Tidekit and was raised by her mothers closest friend as her mother had passed when having her and her two siblings, they did not make it. Her father was a rogue cat who wanted nothing to do with her upon her mothers death. Vixen wasnt really the favorite of the clan since she was half and half, her father was previously part of a clan known as GlacierClan before he had turned to a rogue life. She was always berated by her clan, being told shed never make it far in clan life due to her parentage and that she was weak. So by the time she became an apprentice she trained even harder and would sometimes go days at a time without sleeping.
She eventually made it to her Warrior ceremony and was named Vixenglade. She continued to train and carry out her duties as a warrior and even trained an apprentice by the name of Fennecpaw. She eventually became deputy after the former deputy was banished for being a traitor to the clan. The former leader and her former mentor, Shatteredstar, stepped down to become an elder once he reached his last life and there fore she took on the role as the new leader.
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So I have multiple OCs but I decided to use one of my old ones, who was just recently changed to look better. His name is Tigermane, as he has white face floofs and is also a dark brown tabby. I really love this guy. He's kind, especially to young ones (He's mentored three apprentices, even though he's only 40 moons old). This comes from his young brother and sisters, as he was born into a litter of four, but his sister died as an apprentice due to sneaking out at night to hunt and being caught by a Shadowclan patrol. He then realized that you never know how long you have your loved ones left, and that you should spend your time with them wisely. After finishing his own training, he was greeted with a nasty surprise: His mother had died from whitecough. Tigermane greived for moons, before recieving his first apprentice, Snowpaw. Snowpaw allowed an escape for Tigermane, and after she finished her training and earned her warrior name, Snowface, Tigermane quickly recieved another apprentice and another.
While I do hope this inspired you, please do not steal anything. I work hard to create my characters, and I'd rather you create your own than just copy someone else's hard work. Keep in mind that you can't be proud of something you stole the way you can be proud of your own work. Thanks for reading :)
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This is really well created! I don't really have anything to criticize, it's just really good!
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My OC's name is Leafstar. She was in multiple prophecies of saving her and her clan. She is strongly respected leader and has two sisters, Poppyheart and Willowstar. Poppyheart is warm-hearted and gentle while Willowstar has gone to Riverclan to become a leader. She misses her sights of her sister, but atleast she is happy and they get to see eachother at the gatherings.
I'll tell you a bit more about Leafstar. Leafstar is a loyal, brave, cunning, smart, and sometimes mean leader. She met a cat named Cloudwhip and they soon get to know eachother and have two kits: Gorsefur and Petalkit. Petalkit dies after a blow of greencough in Leafstar's clan and Gorsefur dies of old age. Leafstar had died her last life after saving her clan from dogs.
Leafstar has a brown/golden pelt with beige stripes and orange dapple. Her eyes are amber and the right side of her face was torn off by a cougar when she was a kit. - bit like brightheart- Her mother was Goldenwhisp and her father was Mossfall.
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My character's name is Iceblaze. She has one frosty blue eye, and the other is a fiery orange. Her pelt is a blueish grey, leaning more towards grey. Her legs are a bit darker than her primary coat, and her fur is speckled with darker spots. Her chest is mixed with blacker fur, mingling with the grey. Her cheeks have a thick side fur, which is white. Her ears are tipped with fur, and over her eyes is darker grey fur. Her tail is long, not to overly fluffy, and darker underneath.
Iceblaze is very blunt, observant, and straight forward. She doesn't want to purposely hurt a other cats feelings, but it's not really a big deal for her. Some cats more than others. Either way, she is a highly respected warrior of Stoneclan.
Iceblaze has one litter mate, who's name is Mistfire. She's very different from her sober sister, and loves to joke around, socialize, and be a little more carefree. The two were close, despite their differences, and shared everything together. So Mistfire was surprised when Iceblaze came to her, revealing she had fell in love with a cat from outside the clans; Let alone, that cat being a medicine cat!
Iceblaze was firm, and stood on the warrior code more than others, but she began to question it when she met Palemint. A soft, caring, but assertive calico tom, who isn't afraid to take charge when required. His light greenish-blue eyes always cought her off guard, and his soft tenderness was something she began to crave, since not many cats offer that.
Iceblaze questioned the warrior code severely, wondering how much pain would be caused, and blood would be shed, just because two cats couldn't be together despite the different clans. In the end, she left Stoneclan, and joined Palemint in Streamclan. The calico tom left his position of medicine cat, leaving his graduated apprentice to assume the role entirely.
Palemints transition from a medicine cat, to a warrior was not without obstacles, but with Iceblaze's help, he succeeded, and became a shar
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My oc is Riverspirit.
Riverspirit is a silver tabby she-cat with teal eyes. She is kind, funny, sarcastic, and protective of the ones she loves. Riverspirit is currently a warrior at 45 moons. She will reach to 74 moons before she dies as the deputy of ThunderClan.
Riverspirit is in ThunderClan. She was born to Leafshade(brown tabby she-cat) and Stormstripe(dark gray tom). As an apprentice, she was asked out by a tom named Thistlepaw(ginger tom with gray stripes). But since Riverpaw got angry, water shot out of her paws. Later, she found out she had hydrokinesis, which activated whenever she got mad.
Her mate is a sandy-brown tom with white spots and green eyes. His name is Pinetail, and he has been by her side since Riverspirit was born. They have 2 kits together: Scorchkit(dark ginger she-cat, becomes a medicine cat as Scorchmoon) and Streamkit(pale gray tom, becomes a warrior as Streamleap).
Her friends are Nightfrost, who named herself after her mother, Gemfrost. Nightfrost is a black she-cat with amber eyes. She also has another friend: Sparrowtail(dark brown tom, green eyes).
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My Ocs name is Hunter'Star. He was born as an only kit in Windclan but he still got along with other cats. After he became a warrior Hunter'Felt became part of a prophecy, 'A cat whos loyal at heart will lead a clan of new'. He then left his home clan with his friends and Family thus starting his Clan beyond the highstones, beyond the lake and to a more stretched out land much like his home Clan, His clan went on for many generations. After he lost his 6th life in a border patrol he became blind in his left eye. When he lost his final life his deputy Skull'Fall became leader. He did come back as a StarClan spirit when the Clan went to war with the Dark forest much like the original clans. His Great great great great great grandkits were the prophecised ones to finish the battle. His memory still lives on in the Elders tales and will never be forgotten as the founder of HunterClan. He is a black cat with a thick pelt, white chest, Blue eyes, white paws and has reddish brown stripes. He was roughly 62 moons old when he died. His Mother was a lovely gentle she called Honey'Frost and his father was a loyal and stronge tom called Scar'Tuff. He inherited his Cobalt Blue bandana from his father. He never really had much of a relationship with his father but he did have his fathers respect when he left. He was a kind soul and Respected Leader.
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74%, i’ll take it for briarstar. she’s a brown tabby Norwegian forest, and was the leader of RiverClan for and undecided amount of time. she was found as a kit in clan territory and taken in, leading her to being loyal yet quiet and brutally honest, yet willing to do whatever it takes to prove herself to her clan. a StarClan cat by the name of Quickhare (past RiverClan deputy) noticed Briarstar (Briarstripe ay this time) and gave her a prophecy as a way of proving herself to her clan. this prophecy lead to her gaining the rank of deputy. she’s a fairly new oc and still needs to be developed tho
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My OC is Snake.Paw soon known as Snake.Runner. A red and white she-cat with blue eyes and wheat always stuck in her pelt. Shes feisty, quick, can have a attitude yet is protective of her clan, ShoreClan.
She was born into kittypet life yet due to her size and sass she was dropped in the middle of the thunderpath which was dormant yet frightening for her. A unknown yet noble cat brought her to ShoreClan where the unknown cat died and she remained a outcast yet tries to stay cheerful for the unknown cat,knowing there looking at Snake from starclan.
She is 8 moons and has a close bond with Rain.Jay and Leafling.Kit.
She has no powers and has been in no prophecys.
Merry Christmas!
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My OC is Poppyfrost
I created her for a role play so technically an OC clan, the dark forest existed in that role play, her and her mate Owlflame work to take out the dark forest, but in the process their leader sides with the dark forest and 80% of their clan is wiped out. She has two litters of kits with Owlflame 5 the first and 4 the second but one dies young. Owlflame and Poppyfrost raise their kits with the remains of the clan, and recruit loners to rebuild their clan, with Owlflame becoming Owlstar for about a year and a half before passing it on, Poppyfrost is not his deputy but has her own rank below the deputy. She is a pale gray spotted tabby with blue eyes, but Ive used her in multiple role plays and if theres too many blue eyed cats for my taste Ill just change em to yellow.