Teenage Chronicle Part 9 | Comments

Okay Cydonia, I was peaceful last time. I tried to sympathize with you, but now you've blown it. You don't force someone to call you, if they want to call you they will so back off. Second, you dare try to take him away from me? FROM ME! I'm standing right beside him it's not like I'm invisable (I don't even have my powers for that) so yeah good for the main character girl to stick up for him, and good for Calisto for sticking up for himself. Cydonia was almost harassing him, I mean really is she really THAT desperate. I'm sure she's great friends with Racheal too, I wouldn't be surprised. But I digres, the point is I let her go the first time but now it's annoying. HOWEVER, she did get Calisto and I closer together (some backfire huh?) by the main character to call him her boyfriend (THANK YOU RECKLESSBAM!!!) so yeah, in a weird way I'm glad she did that. However she's still a harassing little tart. Moving on from that rant, I SAW CALISTO WITH HIS SHIRT OFF AGAIN!!! (what? it's a noteable comment, don't act like you didn't notice your guy with his shirt off) Oh and speaking of, OMFG!!! his mom is dead. As if there wasn't enough to worry about in his life. Well if Erika did this I'm going to avenge Calisto's parents, that's right you can take my powers, but you can't mess with Calisto EVER. Anyways where was I? Oh yeah, my feedback that I can give is to have a little more time with Artemis and Daisy. They seem cool if they want to go after Erika, and hey time with the guys is really great (I missed them) but every now and then it'd be nice to have a break from all those shirtless guys *dodges bullets shot from fangirls* HEY I didn't mean an entire quiz without them geez, I meant sometime where we get to know the new girls a little *fangirls put their guns down* Thank you, note to self: never critize shirtless guys. Okay where was I before I had to defend my life? Right, so more time with the girls, and the other thing is to learn what Calisto's mom has to say. PEACE

Oh yeah and when do we see Jake again?!?!? I like Jake, Patch and Calisto. I miss Jake! What happened to that ring that said 'your the only one for me' I forgot what happened to it? Why did the guys have to put their shirts on :( Oh Calisto is so cute "I get to go with the pretty girl" Alex is Soooo funny!!!!! I want to see Adam's sister again! I need to know more about those things!! Sadows or whatever. Well those are all my questions. Please answer them! Oh and you are amazing like I said before. Please make the next one fast!!

First of all, when I arrived at the comments, I WAS expectinh Missy Prissy Cat to have a long comment! I was soo right xP Haha, anyway, I loved the way she hanged with Castilo. it was really cool when she snapped at the cashier pizza girl. Better had not mess with Missy Prissy Cat Castilo! Haha, anyway, i had a bad vibe from Artemis as through she's hiding something from Ezra. I have a feeling she's working for Erika. I dunno why I think so but I just do. I love Patch and his smart ass comments. It's halarious! The "shirtless party" was just like when my baby cousin would come over and my friends would harass her and take off their shirt because she has a crush on one of them. Naturally she would try to run out of the room with her eyes covered but she would bump into the wall, or something like that. I cannot believe Castilo's mum is dead. If Erika did it, she better be prepared to go DOWN! Haha, I loved the drama. So awesome and epicly descriptive as usual! I LOVED IT!

OMG! Nice twist ending for this part! LOVED it as usual, YOU ROCK!!!!! Haha, I love me, I'm a boss! What now, pizza/cashier girl? >:P I also loved when all the guys were walking around shirtless... I think I died and when to heaven! :D Patch, Josh, and Alex = DAMN!!!! ;) and let's face it, I love Calisto too! I want all four guys. I'm just selfish like that. :P

Pshh, take THAT pizza/cashier girl! Don't mess with me! I would have been a lot more upset if she had been flirting with Patch, just sayin =P I can't belive how well you capture the characters of all of the guys, it's amazing! I can't wait for your next one!

1st: OH MY GOD SHES DEAD?????!!!! i don't know how to say it but i'm this close (very little) to crying!!!! I am serious. 2nd: I don't like that girl. 3rd: i officially narrowed it down to Alex as my guy. Even though i super like jake and Patch but it's too promblematic. 4th: i love you soooo much!.... 5th: the last one did not sound right X.X 6th: sheesh stop making it sooooo dramatic 7th: ERIKA IS GOING DOWN!!!

Josh + shirtless = me thinking, heck yeah!

All dem shirtless guys...one question: why'd it have to end?! I was in heaven! :D

I'm talking to Calisto's mom?! Whoa.

Grrr. That pizza girl/ cashier (wazzer name again? I was busy thinking, 'DIE STUPID IDIOT! HE'S MINE!!!' Well, they all are

JAKE?! Where's Jake?

HELL YEA I WAS IN THERE!!!!!!! GO ARTEMIS!!!!! xD lol i loved that one. Hehe, oh and Patch *sighs* he's soooo hot, omigod i'm just gonna rant, and rant, and rant, and rant and actually i think i like josh as well :3 and calisto ;) hehe i'm so weird but that was good i'll be waiting for part 10!!! Who wouldn't?

Calisto's mom? :o wow... And Shirtless guy party? XD awesome

She is dead!! That's so sad!! Oh that girl with 3 jobs is getting on my nerves. Can she turn out evil and I can kill her?!?!?

She is dead!! That's so sad!! Oh that girl with 3 jobs is getting on my nerves. Can she turn out evil and I can kill her?!?!?

It missed out the last part I typed! I type it again.Can I like kill her or something?!?!?

*drools* Guys put your shirts on, Daisy = Azy? Right. I handled that cashier/pizza girl like a bossss

IT DID IT AGAIN!!! I said 'How nice am I X)! Your Amazing and I can't wait for the next part

Woah...woah woah woah WOAH! AWESOMENESS!!!!!!! But ya wat now pizza/cashier girl LIKE A BOSS!!!!! Poor Calisto :(

*expecting

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