Oh Great! A love story part 2 | Comments

OMG, this sux! I LUV guys with dark hair, but I also love shy guys. I don't like guys with blonde hair, but Derek is shy. I don't like players, but I Drake has dark hair and is friendly. UGH! I can't choose!!!!!!

This is good! I really like it! It does seem a bit rushed though so maybe make it a bit longer, give more details about stuff and you'll be golden!;)

This was better, it was a little longer! But everything seems to be happening really quickly, you might want to slow it down =)

Yes, just slow down a little it will be really good! i really like and just for the record I'm a sucker for blonde hair blue eyes. I

It seemed rushed, but dont worry i still loved it, i will comment every time u put a new series so watch out :D

Oh my gosh, I used to date a guy named Derek with blonde hair and blue eyes, creepy!

its awesome just make it at little bit longer

It seemed rushed but still good cant wait for part 3 :)

AHHH! Loved it! It was longer...but kinda hard to follow! Great concept though....

Woa