Goodbye...part 12 | Comments

You know the funny thing is I knew right from the get go that I was going to enjoy the character Jev. What do ya know, I think he's the guy I like more than a friend. Although I'm not going to write that in stone, but he's on the consideration list ;) Oh and he gets bonus points for reading my story (Thank you very much, I really loved your comment too thank you so SO much) anyways, in answer to the question, I'd choose Jev. Now let's get to my other stuff that I have to say. So Rosella has "protectors" but we're not exactly sure WHAT she needs protection from or why all the protectors are guys (not that I'm complaining, just curious) Anyways, what would be inside a pool? Is it Zach? Oi vey, the flirts *rolls eyes* I have my personaly opinion on flirts and, to make a long story short, I've never been too impressed by them. Whatever, I'm not saying they're bad or anything. I'm just... not very impressed by them. So anyways, I think this was a nice introduction to Jev and I think things are going pretty well. Only thing I don't like is the sudden cliffhangers but that's a good complaint in all honesty. It just means I want more, so therefore you've got the audience in your pocket :)

Totally Chris! Idk what it is (hehehe I don't, I don't, don't know what it is, but I need that one thing and you've got that one thing! Sorry, big one direction fan hahahah) but I just love him! Maybe it's the fact that he's not trying too hard to be attractive and win my heart... I'm so weird!

Cliffhanger D: Ooo special, we got not one, but 2 guys :) YES a flirt ;) but flirts always mean trouble *mumbles to self* OH Jev is so sweet :3 Chris isn't really attracting me much. Brad... I'm not sure :P So I think right now I'd say Jev is my favorite.

Oh JEV!!
What he's hot!!
Anyway.... yeah....MAKE PART 13 soon!!!

(btw, are you gonna enter the contest I set up? I've literally gotten two entries. That's it.)

Chris definitely

Loved it! I definately think Zach is the hottest!

Hurry up and make part 13

CHRIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love him so much! please dont make me be with jev. i barely know him