Shut tp, Shut tp, Shut tp, Shut tp!
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Thread Topic: Shut tp, Shut tp, Shut tp, Shut tp!
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C1 is clawing through high school, with a mental ilness. He/she hears voices, tho no one knows. C2 is new in school, and tries to get close to C1. (I'd like to be C1)
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Bumpy~
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C1 is clawing through high school with a mental illness. He/She hears voices, though nobody knows. C2 is new to the school and tries to get close to C1. (There. I fixed your misspelled words.)
This plot has a ton of problems. One, the plot lacks excitement and summary. Meaning, after a few post it will began to get boring to your roleplay parent. I could do this plot with you and teach you how to roleplay 20x better. Second, this plot has many flaws and holes. Meaning, it leaves you with a bunch of questions that would be very good to know. I could also redo the plot and spice it up. Your plot doesn't have to be perfect and flawless because mine certainly isn't. However, if you want people like Me and Dark to roleplay with you, you might want to fix the problems. Like I said, let me help and I'll teach you the basics. -
I guess. Thanks?
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Read all that first. -
Thank you. Now, I will rewrite the plot. Do you have any suggestions before I start on it?
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Nope. Just try to stick to it.
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